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Old 18-07-2008, 09:14 AM
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kisi ko ger muhabbat hey …

kisi ko ger muhabbat hey …

tu phir na aasra rakho
kisi key khud samajhney ka
kisi key pehal kerney ka,

mana yeh aisa jazba hey
jo samjhaya nahi jata

mager yeh bhi haqeeqat hey
ki kash-makash aur tazab-zub sey
zara sa maand perta hey,

aur jab yeh maand perta hey
zindagi maand perti hey,

kisi ko ger muhabbat hey …

tu keh daalo woh sab key sab
jo dil mey janey kab sey hey,

naa soocho phir key kia hoga
key dil key maa’mley tu bas
issi himmat sey chaltey hein

her anjaam…her mantaq sey
baala baala phaltey hein,

so kisi ko ger muhabbat hey …
tu na soocho key kia hoga,

kisi ko ger muhabbat hey.

.................... sam ...................
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v nice n touchy................

i think true feeling hidden behind it...........keep sharing
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awesome yara... mujhay bhi shayeri kerna sikha do... :$
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v nice n touchy................

i think true feeling hidden behind it...........keep sharing
:) thanks chandni .... so did explore the true feeling ?? :)
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awesome yara... mujhay bhi shayeri kerna sikha do... :$
lol .... haa'n tu konsi mushkil baat hey :) ..start putting ur thoughts into words ... everytime ... abt everything ... and soon u'll be a writer or poet :) cz me tu us baat pey believe nahi kerti ki shairi k leyey kisi WAISEY imtehan sey guzarna zaroori hota hey :)

Good luck then :)
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wahhh chaa gayi hian ap tu SAM g :D
me kahaan :( .... abhi tu sirf aik hi banda chhaya huwa hey poorey forum peyy :)) ... avatar sey signature ... discussions sey poll ... her jagah

:) lagta hey meri isi poem ki wordings pey aap logoo'n ney meray post kernay sey pehlay hi amal ker liya .... "kisi ko ger muhabbat hey .. tu phir na aasra rakho .." ................... lol

aisa hi hey na!! :)
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AQN Aapki nazm bohat pasand aaii
feelings k saath likha hai aap ne.
Acha laga parh ker.
thx 4 sharin
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Shukriya Ather pasandeedgi ka ...

feelings lafzoo'n mey dhaley ya na dhaley, dono surtoo'n mey bas sarahey jaaney ki hi mutazir hoti hey :)
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bohat shukriya Rabia ... and WELCOME to forumpk :)

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