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Muje Jeeney Ki Dua Mat Dena.
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Old 13-07-2008, 05:48 AM
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Muje Jeeney Ki Dua Mat Dena.


Muje jeeney ki Dua mat dena
ke maine buhat jee liya hai
in duao ko apna naseeb banana
ke tumhe abhi buhat jeena hai

Muje jeeney ki Dua mat dena
ke ab himmat nahi kuch sehne ki
in duao ko apne liyye rakhna
ke tumhe abhi buhat aaghey hai jana

Muje jeeney ki Dua mat dena
ke meri zindagi pehley hi bhoj hai
na jane kab tak hai isko sehna
isliye tum muje jeeney ki dua mat dena

agar jo ho sake meri khatao ko maff karna
meri is mayoosi ka sabab na mujse daryaft karna
agar jo sake mujse berukhi se na paish ana
aur muje jeeney ki Dua mat dena

tumhe to hai abhi buhat jeena
us Falak ka chand ban ke chamakna
mere Hise ki zindagi bhi tum jeena
isliye muje jeeney ki Dua mat dena

meri zindagi ki misal us Nao si hai
jo na doob sake na paar ho sake
is zindagi ka kiya hai ab maine karna?
isliye tum muje jeeney ki Dua mat dena

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Old 15-07-2008, 01:27 AM
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Very nice Savera...Aap ki sharing bohat pasand aaii
keep sharing:)
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Reason For My Poetry (You)
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Old 09-08-2008, 04:46 PM
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Reason For My Poetry (You)

You’re the reason, of my poetry
The true meaning behind words
True love developing it’s wings
Reaching high beyond the birds.

I love you for who you truly are
For nothing less, For only more
Love, A ocean of true emotions
Joined together from it’s shores.

You’re the inspiration to poetry
Even though love, goes beyond
The distance words can explain
In a poem, prose, or even songs.

I love you every step of the way
For who you’ve made me today
The love I feel, within my heart
No words cannot express to say.
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Tumhe chah ker bhi na chaha humne
yeh dard kis kis ko na sunaya humne

bari sadgi se diya wafa ka badla apne
baywafai ko galay laga ker yado mai basaya humne

barishon k mosam tou anay jane hote hen
phir kiu saailab ko dar par tehraya hum ne

jiss pyaar ki wadi ko jalaya aapne
us k her ik gul ko tha sajaya hum ne

taptay sehra mai talaash-e-aab ki tarah
teri mohabbat k liye khud ko tarsaya humne

kisi se shikwa tou ab ker nahi sakte
chalo mout ko he hath yeh thamaya hum ne
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savera ap tu waqayi shaera ho gayi ho bht kamal poetry ki hai yaar...marvelous
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hmm acha likha hai...:)
Allah apki lambi umer kare
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Nice poetry Savera
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Re: Muje Jeeney Ki Dua Mat Dena.

bohat achi nazam hi
dad kabool karin
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Re: Muje Jeeney Ki Dua Mat Dena.

Salam Saveera how are u doing first of all sorry for massaging u so late and thanks for sending me beautiful poems they were really nice i really like it a lot saveera if u h ave any Islamic sayings plzz send it to me
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