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Old 23-06-2008, 06:47 AM
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Screams of silence!!

I am all alone …
and its dark everywhere,

but what is making me scared!!
this loneliness!
No, and not even the darkness,

I am scared of screams!!
The loud , piercing screams of silence,
These drape my thoughts
And stabbing them,

I am not crying but I want to!!
I want to shout louder n louder
So that these scream of silence get vanquished,

I am crowding peoples around me
Not because they love me
I know, they don’t ...

I want to hide myself
I want to get vanished!!!

But I am hapless,
Everything I tried … anywhere I went
Screams pursued me,

I wonder if I can rest tranquilly in my grave or not??
I wonder if ever I can defeat …
The screams of silence,
I just wonder.

............................... AQN ..............................
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Old 24-06-2008, 11:33 AM
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although englih poetry kind of loses its meaning when it comes to me, but since i am so much attached with you mentally, i found exquisite interest within me to read this wonderful poem:).

Very nicely written sis, and i shall try to give you one chocholate for each poem that you share here:).

Zindagi main jub bhi mulakaat hui, tumhara chocholates ka hissa tumhain mil jaega

why chocholates?:) well for 2 reasons:)
1) your personality is as sweet as the chocholates
2) your poetry is as sweet as a chocholate:)

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Old 24-06-2008, 09:57 PM
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thts lovelyy!!!! :) .... really lovely

tu should I send u all links of my poetry so tht u cudn't miss any n I cudn't miss my choclates :)) ... and we will start from day one of my joining ... theek hey na!!!

n yea I like choclates with nuts or cracker or something filled in .... not the plain one .... :)
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Old 24-06-2008, 10:22 PM
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I am all alone …
and its dark everywhere,

but what is making me scared!!
this loneliness!
No, and not even the darkness,

I am scared of screams!!
The loud , piercing screams of silence,
These drape my thoughts
And stabbing them,

I am not crying but I want to!!
I want to shout louder n louder
So that these scream of silence get vanquished,

I am crowding peoples around me
Not because they love me
I know, they don’t ...

I want to hide myself
I want to get vanished!!!

But I am hapless,
Everything I tried … anywhere I went
Screams pursued me,

I wonder if I can rest tranquilly in my grave or not??
I wonder if ever I can defeat …
The screams of silence,
I just wonder.

............................... AQN ..............................
Really Impressive. Very Nice AQN :)
Touched.
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REALLY NICE SIS
HALF CHOCL8S MERI........ :)
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Really Impressive. Very Nice AQN :)
Touched.
:)) .... thankss Lucky
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REALLY NICE SIS
HALF CHOCL8S MERI........ :)

chaloo gee ... cheez mili nahi aur hisseydaar pehlay hi aagaey ... lol
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thts lovelyy!!!! :) .... really lovely

tu should I send u all links of my poetry so tht u cudn't miss any n I cudn't miss my choclates :)) ... and we will start from day one of my joining ... theek hey na!!!

n yea I like choclates with nuts or cracker or something filled in .... not the plain one .... :)
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haan haan guriya mujhye bhi macademia nut wali crunchy chocholates hi pasand hain aur main wohi doonga tum ko:). nahin aisey nahin, let me read myself first:).....aur sure sure jitney threads hain sub revive ker do.....chocholates meri behan se achi thori hain?:)

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:)) .... thankss Lucky
You're Welcome AQN :)
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really SUPERB .. after along tym i read v nice English poetry really touch ma heart .. AQN sis keep sharing ... u did really v welll .. :)
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haan haan guriya mujhye bhi macademia nut wali crunchy chocholates hi pasand hain aur main wohi doonga tum ko:). nahin aisey nahin, let me read myself first:).....aur sure sure jitney threads hain sub revive ker do.....chocholates meri behan se achi thori hain?:)

Jeeti raho:)
:) well aapko bhi wohi pasand hein tu phir tu aap ko kaafi dil bada ker k dena padey ga :)

jee jee padh k hi count kejyey ga ... but u don't have any idea how much it cud be ..... lolz

achchi tarah soch liya hey na!!!
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really SUPERB .. after along tym i read v nice English poetry really touch ma heart .. AQN sis keep sharing ... u did really v welll .. :)
Ohhh :) thanks so much for this great comment ... I'll try to keep it up :)
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i never knew u liked chocolates !!
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i never knew u liked chocolates !!
I like choclates ... n I may love it if its really wht I love :)

so u too interested in giving me some?? for my poetry or whtever :)
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sure .. why not ... altho i wont giv u for poetry .. i think ill end up broke : )
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I am all alone …
and its dark everywhere,

but what is making me scared!!
this loneliness!
No, and not even the darkness,

I am scared of screams!!
The loud , piercing screams of silence,
These drape my thoughts
And stabbing them,

I am not crying but I want to!!
I want to shout louder n louder
So that these scream of silence get vanquished,

I am crowding peoples around me
Not because they love me
I know, they don’t ...

I want to hide myself
I want to get vanished!!!

But I am hapless,
Everything I tried … anywhere I went
Screams pursued me,

I wonder if I can rest tranquilly in my grave or not??
I wonder if ever I can defeat …
The screams of silence,
I just wonder.

............................... AQN ..............................

theeek hi hay
koi itni khas bhi nahi

thori or koshish karenge to behtari ki koi raah nikal hi aige



























bohot zabardastttttttttt hay
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sure .. why not ... altho i wont giv u for poetry .. i think ill end up broke : )

mmmm .... chalein phir yahan main sirf aam khaaney sey matlab rakhti hoon :))
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lol .................. bohat jaldi dar k line pey aa gaey aap :) mujhey tu laga tha ki agli line mujhey next msg mey miley gee ... but wo tu yaheen scroll down kertey hi nazar aagee ... :)
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thanks again Rapunzel :)
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