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23-06-2008, 06:28 AM
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| maut sa khaamosh hey ..wo bhi ab meri tarah!! chaar suu hey ghup andhera … bas ik sisakta sa diya her guzartey pal mey merta … jalta buujhta sa diya, raat si tanhaee mey .. ik bas ussi ka tu saath tha! jaaney kis pal kho diya … main ney thirakta sa diya, na wo ab hiddat rahi … kho jagmagahut bhi gaee kis qadar pur josh tha … wo her pal bharakta sa diya, zakhm zakhm hokey bhi.. hum dono ab nahi rootey chupkey idhar main sulagti ..udhar wo sulagta sa diya, maut sa khaamosh hey ..wo bhi ab meri tarah!! tha kabhi is dil ki manind ...jo dharakta sa diya, ................................. AQN ..................................
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24-06-2008, 11:36 AM
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| very nice:) i instantly liked this poem when i read it first time in the contest:) very nicely put sis:)...... maut sa khaamosh hey ..wo bhi ab meri tarah!! tha kabhi is dil ki manind ...jo dharakta sa diya
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01-07-2008, 03:41 AM
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| very very nicee...... buhut hi achi hai .. thanx for sharing :)
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01-07-2008, 04:05 AM
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| zakhm zakhm hokey bhi.. hum dono ab nahi rootey chupkey idhar main sulagti ..udhar wo sulagta sa diya, maut sa khaamosh hey ..wo bhi ab meri tarah!! tha kabhi is dil ki manind ...jo dharakta sa diya ZABERDAST SIS REALLY NICE..... 
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02-07-2008, 04:58 AM
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02-07-2008, 05:03 AM
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02-07-2008, 05:07 AM
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02-07-2008, 05:16 AM
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| JI BILKUL AAP BHI ZABERDAST HAIN AUR APKI PYARI SI POETRY BHI
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03-07-2008, 04:14 AM
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03-07-2008, 06:24 PM
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her guzartey pal mey merta … jalta buujhta sa diya, ufff... zbrdst.............  keep sharing 
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04-07-2008, 03:05 AM
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keep encouraging and I'll keep posting :)
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04-07-2008, 11:28 AM
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Tere khoo janey ka dar sa laga rehta ha.. kuch pass rehne ki adat ho gai dewane ko hijer ki tanhai ka abb dar sar laga rehta ha...
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04-07-2008, 11:38 AM
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| ???? :) Anyways Welcome to the Forum Chinto
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04-07-2008, 11:59 AM
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 ..........ya sure i will.....................
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05-07-2008, 03:49 AM
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| AQN Aap ki kaavish achhi hai. specialy Ash'aar maiN jo mazmoon Aap ne baandhhey hain..wo pasand aaye....keep writing :)
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05-07-2008, 04:57 AM
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| bohat shukriya Ather ... gehraee sey jaanchney ka :)
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