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18-06-2008, 05:39 PM
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Hame zindagi ne thakaya bht hai…
Tanha hain ham to sataya b bht hai…. 
Yun he rotey rahty hain ham her dam khushk ankhoon se..
En ansoo’n ko ham ne chupaya b bht hai.. 
Machalta hai dil yun he be-sakhta kabhi…
Armanoo ko ham ne dabaya b bht hai… 
Pholoon ka karwaa’n to ham se roth gaya…
Kan’ton ka rasta dil ko bhaaya b bht hai… 
Khush karti hun dunia ko yun he her dam her pal…mgr…
Her kisi ne bewaja muje rulaya b bht hai… 
Tanha bethe khojti rahti hun qismat ko pal pal…
En hath ki lakeeron ne muje uljhaya b bht hai…
By.....Maya 
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19-06-2008, 09:59 AM
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so shweet baby:)
and it is a very nice poem:)
keep on sharing:) |
19-06-2008, 03:07 PM
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Originally Posted by Emblem99  acha to meri maya rani likhti bhi hai:)
so shweet baby:)
and it is a very nice poem:)
keep on sharing:) | NADEEM BHAI................
inni sari poetr hain es section main meri........
THNX.... 
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19-06-2008, 08:34 PM
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thanx for sharing
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19-06-2008, 09:22 PM
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kya baat hay.................. :o)...
kisi or nay tareef ki thi k itni achi likhi hay to may majboor hogaya dekhnay ko  kyo k tumhari is poetry ki sifarish itni onchi thi 
bohot zabardast......... ........... keeep writing.. one day u will improveee :
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20-06-2008, 01:33 AM
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Aap ki kaavish bohat pasand aaii.
Good going:)
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20-06-2008, 11:00 AM
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Originally Posted by Lady Mystique Reallly Nice maya ... achi laggi :)
thanx for sharing | thnak u soooooooooooo much............ 
poetry pasan karne ka shukria............
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20-06-2008, 11:06 AM
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Originally Posted by Neo mayaaaaaaa pariiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiiiiii
kya baat hay.................. :o)...
kisi or nay tareef ki thi k itni achi likhi hay to may majboor hogaya dekhnay ko kyo k tumhari is poetry ki sifarish itni onchi thi
bohot zabardast......... ........... keeep writing.. one day u will improveee :: | shukira NEO tareef karne ka..........
kisi oor ne matlab...........  tum majboor bhi hoty hoo.......
tareef karne ka ek baar phir shukria.....
tareef bhi karna tu jale bhunne andaz main karna... 
hahahahahahaha definatly ap log isi tarha se appriciate karty rahy tu i will improve it
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20-06-2008, 11:15 AM
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Originally Posted by S.Ather Ali Ahaaan...bari Achi Ghazal hai Maya,
Aap ki kaavish bohat pasand aaii.
Good going:) | thnx Mr. Athar.......
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20-06-2008, 11:40 AM
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Originally Posted by maya pari shukira NEO tareef karne ka..........
kisi oor ne matlab........... tum majboor bhi hoty hoo.......
tareef karne ka ek baar phir shukria.....
tareef bhi karna tu jale bhunne andaz main karna...
hahahahahahaha definatly ap log isi tarha se appriciate karty rahy tu i will improve it | koi bat nahi MAYA PARI ab tum ne itni mehnat ki hay to mera to farz banta na k tumhe jhooti tasali doo
han kyo majboor nahi ho sakta ?  
huh. jalay bhunay andaz may nahi kar raha may tareef
may tumharay andaz may hi tumhari tareef kar raha ho
awww. u r moshhht welcome
eik request thi... 
itnay emo na send kya karooooooooo phir meray liya gunjaish khatam ho jati hayyyy
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20-06-2008, 11:57 AM
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Originally Posted by Neo koi bat nahi MAYA PARI ab tum ne itni mehnat ki hay to mera to farz banta na k tumhe jhooti tasali doo
han kyo majboor nahi ho sakta ?
huh. jalay bhunay andaz may nahi kar raha may tareef
may tumharay andaz may hi tumhari tareef kar raha ho
awww. u r moshhht welcome
eik request thi...
itnay emo na send kya karooooooooo phir meray liya gunjaish khatam ho jati hayyyy : | hmmmmmmmmm jhooti tassali........
tum kisi kisi se tu majboor ho sakty ho.....  i know... samaj tu gaye honge ap. 
request......  mujse hahahhhahahahhahahhahahaha maan li jaoo kia yaad karoge..
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20-06-2008, 12:06 PM
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Originally Posted by maya pari hmmmmmmmmm jhooti tassali........
tum kisi kisi se tu majboor ho sakty ho..... i know... samaj tu gaye honge ap.
request...... mujse hahahhhahahahhahahhahahaha maan li jaoo kia yaad karoge.. |
hahahhaha han to u kya samjhiiii  @jhooti tasali
tum to majboori k pechay hath pao dho kar par gaye ho
nahi samjha kyo k tumhe samjhana h nahi ata hay 
hahahha shukran.. @request man li
nahi manti to asusual mujhey u k saray emoz delete karnay partay
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20-06-2008, 12:29 PM
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Originally Posted by Neo hahahhaha han to u kya samjhiiii :@jhooti tasali
tum to majboori k pechay hath pao dho kar par gaye ho
nahi samjha kyo k tumhe samjhana h nahi ata hay :
hahahha shukran.. @request man li
nahi manti to asusual mujhey u k saray emoz delete karnay partay | tum se jhooti tassali ki he umeed thi....
hath dhoo k ..hahahahhhahah....... 
tum ne request bht ache andaz main ki thi to man li.......warna....  kabhi nahien manti..............
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21-06-2008, 01:04 PM
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Originally Posted by maya pari tum se jhooti tassali ki he umeed thi....
hath dhoo k ..hahahahhhahah.......
tum ne request bht ache andaz main ki thi to man li.......warna.... kabhi nahien manti.............. | umeeedain laga le mujh se ....... khair to haina samajh rahi honaa
may to har baat achay andaz may karta hooooo
warna kya ?? haaan warna kya?
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23-06-2008, 04:03 PM
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Originally Posted by Neo umeeedain laga le mujh se ....... khair to haina samajh rahi honaa
may to har baat achay andaz may karta hooooo
warna kya ?? haaan warna kya | haan umedain lagai hain k NEO BHAI aayenge oor kahien ge ........... MUJE JOB MIL GAI..................... 
itefaq se ache andaz main ki thi ye bolna chaheye tumko....
warna.................. warna ahoo kar deti tumko bhi.........
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23-06-2008, 06:22 PM
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Her kisi ne bewaja muje rulaya b bht hai…
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En hath ki lakeeron ne muje uljhaya b bht hai…
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23-06-2008, 06:33 PM
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Originally Posted by Enigma Khush karti hun dunia ko yun he her dam her pal…mgr…
Her kisi ne bewaja muje rulaya b bht hai…
Tanha bethe khojti rahti hun qismat ko pal pal…
En hath ki lakeeron ne muje uljhaya b bht hai…
ZABARDAST!!! | thnxxxxxxxxx
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07-07-2008, 09:46 AM
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Originally Posted by maya pari |
BHAI bolo gi or phir bhi umeed lagao ki NEO aiga ..
kisi boht bari bhool ka shikar ho tum
ittefaq may barkat jo hay
nahi tumharay husan may woh bat nahi k may GHAYAL oh i mean AHOO ho sakoo
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