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18-06-2008, 06:05 PM
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yani typical boys wala attituted ... ki exams mey bhi dheyaan bahar ... exams shoro honey sey pehlay finishing date ki excitement ... :))
:) well tu yey tu meray saath bhi huwa phir ... main bhi kaafi arsey baad yahan aaee and see ... n very first time having a person like big bro :) which I do not have in real ... otherwise meri nature aisi hey ki I deal others as youngers n as kids
no matter how old they are :))
jee zaroor kamzoori tu durr ker doon gee INSHALLAH per haa'n yey na samjhein ki aap ko mehnat nahi kerni padey gee ... n phir aap ko cheezoo'n ko khud revise kerna hoga :) ... main phir sirf proof read kia karoo'n gee jismey log mujhey kaafi maantey hein since have bit better observation :)
__________________ ........................................ little changes bring the BIG ones ... so let's get changed right from the individual level to change the whole picture RABBIGHFIR WARHAM WA ANTA KHAIR-UR-RAAHIMEEN Verbal Impression lasts longer n matters more than Visual Impression so be thoughtful about it ...........AQUARIAN...........
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18-06-2008, 09:26 PM
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19-06-2008, 09:39 AM
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Originally Posted by maya pari  NADEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEMMMMM BHAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII...... ........................
main ne aj dekhi hai ye poetry............. 
bht zbrdsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssst hai............. 
uf oor kia kahun................... | arey paya guriya thank you so much :)
you are so nice to say so wonderful things na:)
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19-06-2008, 09:44 AM
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Originally Posted by samin very nice............ | thank you samin :) | | | |
19-06-2008, 09:54 AM
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Originally Posted by AQN lolz ..... lo jo baat bilkul saamney likhi nazar aarahi hu wo Shakk kaisey!!! wo tu Genuine baat huee :)
yani typical boys wala attituted ... ki exams mey bhi dheyaan bahar ... exams shoro honey sey pehlay finishing date ki excitement ... :))
:) well tu yey tu meray saath bhi huwa phir ... main bhi kaafi arsey baad yahan aaee and see ... n very first time having a person like big bro :) which I do not have in real ... otherwise meri nature aisi hey ki I deal others as youngers n as kids
no matter how old they are :))
jee zaroor kamzoori tu durr ker doon gee INSHALLAH per haa'n yey na samjhein ki aap ko mehnat nahi kerni padey gee ... n phir aap ko cheezoo'n ko khud revise kerna hoga :) ... main phir sirf proof read kia karoo'n gee jismey log mujhey kaafi maantey hein since have bit better observation :) | haan bus keh sakti ho ke typical boys wala hi attitude hai is muamley main:). mujhey ye to nahin pata ke baqi boys bhi aisey hi hotey hain, but for some reason jub main aik kaam khatam ker leta hoon, to us ko revise kerna ya go through kerna mujhey aik pahar lagta hai:).
I remember ke in the beginning of professional life, mujhey itni mertaba boss se dant perti thi ke poocho mut. hamaisha quotation main, purchase order main communicatiom main presentation main kahin na kahin koi na koi choti si minor si mistake reh jati thi:).
bari mushkil se main ne office ke kaam ko revise kerney ki adat dali hai  but personal baton main abhi bhi dandi maar jata hoon:).
Behna, main nahin janta ke how old u r:). but i am sure ke choti hi hogi:). Main apney ghar main sub se chota raha hoon jaisa ke pehley bhi bata chuka hoon:). Mujhey choti behnon ka craze junoon ki hud tuk hai:). shayyad main issi liyeh piyar bhi sub se kerta hoon chahey wo bhai ho ya behan:). ub theoratically dekha jae to meri bhanjiyan bhanjey yahan mojood sub bacchon se barey hongey, but mujhey UNCLE nahin, bhai jaan kehlae janey ka craze hai:). main ne bachpun akaila guzara. kiyun ke barey behan bhai to shadi ke baad idher udher ho gae the na:). to mujhey bari hasrat hoti thi jub koi dost apney chotey behan bhaion ka naam leta tha:). to bus wo hasratain hain jo yahan per poori ker raha hoon:)
aik baat aur batata chaloon ke i dont have parents. they both passed away in 1997. aur mujhey apney wali aur walida dono se hi bohat piyar hai:). jahan mujhey baqi dolls choti behnain nazer aati hain, wahin tum bhi lagti to choti behan hi ho, mager kahin kahin main maan ka aks bhi dekhta hoon. maan aisi hi to hoti hai na:). bacchon ki mistakes ko durust ekrney wali:). aur hakeekat to yehi hai ke chahey wo choti ho ya bari, behan maan ka hi doosra roop hoti hai:).....acha choro is per phir baat karaingey.....abhi mujh se likha nahin jaa raha kuch bhi..... | | | | |
19-06-2008, 07:36 PM
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Originally Posted by Emblem99 haan bus keh sakti ho ke typical boys wala hi attitude hai is muamley main:). mujhey ye to nahin pata ke baqi boys bhi aisey hi hotey hain, but for some reason jub main aik kaam khatam ker leta hoon, to us ko revise kerna ya go through kerna mujhey aik pahar lagta hai:).
I remember ke in the beginning of professional life, mujhey itni mertaba boss se dant perti thi ke poocho mut. hamaisha quotation main, purchase order main communicatiom main presentation main kahin na kahin koi na koi choti si minor si mistake reh jati thi:).
bari mushkil se main ne office ke kaam ko revise kerney ki adat dali hai but personal baton main abhi bhi dandi maar jata hoon:).
..... | jee ... boys r like that mostly :) ... per whtever u said tu is tarah tu aap I guess choti moti mistakes sey badh key mushkil paesh aa sakti sey tu thodi bohat aadat personal matters k hawaley sey bhi daal lein na :) like see ... kabhi shopping list mey kuch ooper neechay hogeya tu yaqeenan bhabhi jaan tu ... u know :) ... plus agar Sharmeen ko aap ney kuch likh ker diya aur usmey kuch mistype hogeya ya kami reh gaee tu ??? ... ab Baba sey ghalati tu nahi honi chahiyey na!!! :)
__________________ ........................................ little changes bring the BIG ones ... so let's get changed right from the individual level to change the whole picture RABBIGHFIR WARHAM WA ANTA KHAIR-UR-RAAHIMEEN Verbal Impression lasts longer n matters more than Visual Impression so be thoughtful about it ...........AQUARIAN........... | | | | |
19-06-2008, 08:26 PM
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Originally Posted by Emblem99 Behna, main nahin janta ke how old u r:). but i am sure ke choti hi hogi:). Main apney ghar main sub se chota raha hoon jaisa ke pehley bhi bata chuka hoon:). Mujhey choti behnon ka craze junoon ki hud tuk hai:). shayyad main issi liyeh piyar bhi sub se kerta hoon chahey wo bhai ho ya behan:). ub theoratically dekha jae to meri bhanjiyan bhanjey yahan mojood sub bacchon se barey hongey, but mujhey UNCLE nahin, bhai jaan kehlae janey ka craze hai:). main ne bachpun akaila guzara. kiyun ke barey behan bhai to shadi ke baad idher udher ho gae the na:). to mujhey bari hasrat hoti thi jub koi dost apney chotey behan bhaion ka naam leta tha:). to bus wo hasratain hain jo yahan per poori ker raha hoon:)
aik baat aur batata chaloon ke i dont have parents. they both passed away in 1997. aur mujhey apney wali aur walida dono se hi bohat piyar hai:). jahan mujhey baqi dolls choti behnain nazer aati hain, wahin tum bhi lagti to choti behan hi ho, mager kahin kahin main maan ka aks bhi dekhta hoon. maan aisi hi to hoti hai na:). bacchon ki mistakes ko durust ekrney wali:). aur hakeekat to yehi hai ke chahey wo choti ho ya bari, behan maan ka hi doosra roop hoti hai:).....acha choro is per phir baat karaingey.....abhi mujh se likha nahin jaa raha kuch bhi..... | :)) kuch nahi likha ja raha!!! itna kuch aap ney likh diya tu hey :) achcha hey mazeed kuch nahi likha ... aankhein halki si num tu hogaein thein meri once I finished it :) ... am really obliged for such a great commentss ...
per aap sey kyun kuch nahi likha jaraha tha!! aap ko unki (May ALLAH rest their soul in peace ..Aameen) yaad ney upset ker diya tha kia? ya waisey hi ...
agar aisa hey tu bas udaas na hoon :) ...
jee mujhey andaza hey ... jis tarah I always wish ki aik bada bhai hota achhca wala :) not the typical one ... lol ... since all my bros r younger than me (though they don't bother much ki they r younger n am older ... lol)
waisey main shayed itni choti tu nahi aap sey but choti hoon isi leyey tu aapko big bro kaha :) like sometime back I guess I saw u somewhere asking asjad to change ur id and DOB as well ... am I right!! ... I guess from 1971 to 1969 or so ... BTW am 31 :) ... not so young :)
ok ... bas aap apna kheyal rakhein takey isi tarah sab ka kheyal rakh sakein ... aakhir ko intneyyy saaarey behan bhayoo'n ki zimmedari uuthaee hey aap ney :)
__________________ ........................................ little changes bring the BIG ones ... so let's get changed right from the individual level to change the whole picture RABBIGHFIR WARHAM WA ANTA KHAIR-UR-RAAHIMEEN Verbal Impression lasts longer n matters more than Visual Impression so be thoughtful about it ...........AQUARIAN........... | |
21-06-2008, 01:40 PM
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21-06-2008, 01:41 PM
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Originally Posted by Emblem99 good good tabedari achi cheez hoti hai, faida deti hai  | ji deti to hay faida 
magar depneds kis ki ke ja rahi hai  :o)
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21-06-2008, 09:32 PM
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Originally Posted by Neo |
hmmm .... yaqeenan aap ko kuch zeyadah padhna pad geya hoga is leyey .... ya baat ser pey sey guzar gaee hogee.
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24-06-2008, 11:21 AM
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Originally Posted by AQN jee ... boys r like that mostly :) ... per whtever u said tu is tarah tu aap I guess choti moti mistakes sey badh key mushkil paesh aa sakti sey tu thodi bohat aadat personal matters k hawaley sey bhi daal lein na :) like see ... kabhi shopping list mey kuch ooper neechay hogeya tu yaqeenan bhabhi jaan tu ... u know :) ... plus agar Sharmeen ko aap ney kuch likh ker diya aur usmey kuch mistype hogeya ya kami reh gaee tu ??? ... ab Baba sey ghalati tu nahi honi chahiyey na!!! :) | lolz
bara zaberdast scenario paish kiya hai guriya:). is liyeh ke aisa akser hota hai.....
for example shopping ke baad ghar wapis aaun to, "aap se kaha bhi tha ke falaan shay laani hai, aap wo to lae nahin, utha ke poori dukan le ae" 
main tumhian bataun aisa itni baar ho chuka hai ke ub to mera mazak bun gaya hai 
for example mujhey merey dost ya begum, koi bhi akaila aur wo bhi bhook ki halat mian shopping per nahin bhejta kiyun ke mujhe jo laney ko kaha jata hai main wo bhool jata hoon aur baqi duniya jahan ki cheezain utha lata hoon  .
main pakistan jub bhi jata hoon, meri bari bajiyan mujhey hamaisha HATH jor ker kehti hain ke bakery mut jaya karo kiyun ke main jata hoon aur specialy bhook lagi ho, to yoon samajh lo ke half the bakery ends up in our house 
kehney ka maksad hai, ub to yeh demagh aur ye baal boorhey ho gae hain ub in main flexibility nahin hai jo main khud ko change karoon .....biwi ki dantain kha ke aadi ho gaya hoon, ub betiyan bhi kuch arsa dantaingi, phir khud hi samajh laingi ke "baba to kabhi nahin badal saktey" | | | | |
24-06-2008, 11:26 AM
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Originally Posted by AQN :)) kuch nahi likha ja raha!!! itna kuch aap ney likh diya tu hey :) achcha hey mazeed kuch nahi likha ... aankhein halki si num tu hogaein thein meri once I finished it :) ... am really obliged for such a great commentss ...
per aap sey kyun kuch nahi likha jaraha tha!! aap ko unki (May ALLAH rest their soul in peace ..Aameen) yaad ney upset ker diya tha kia? ya waisey hi ...
agar aisa hey tu bas udaas na hoon :) ...
jee mujhey andaza hey ... jis tarah I always wish ki aik bada bhai hota achhca wala :) not the typical one ... lol ... since all my bros r younger than me (though they don't bother much ki they r younger n am older ... lol)
waisey main shayed itni choti tu nahi aap sey but choti hoon isi leyey tu aapko big bro kaha :) like sometime back I guess I saw u somewhere asking asjad to change ur id and DOB as well ... am I right!! ... I guess from 1971 to 1969 or so ... BTW am 31 :) ... not so young :)
ok ... bas aap apna kheyal rakhein takey isi tarah sab ka kheyal rakh sakein ... aakhir ko intneyyy saaarey behan bhayoo'n ki zimmedari uuthaee hey aap ney :) | jeeti raho:)
acha to mashallah se poorey 7 saal choti ho mujh se:).
Khush raho:).
aur haan, main mazeed kuch kehnye se issi liyeh ruk gaya tha ke zahir si baat hai, main ammi abbu dono ka ladla beta tha. aur un se judai bhi merey japan aaney ke baad hui, apni aankhon se un ke aakhri lamhat nahin dekhey, merey liyeh to wo 1993 main hi chaley gae the kiyun ke us ke baad main pakistan un ki death per hi gaya tha. lihaza aik tishnigi si mehsoos hoti hai. Although main ne kabhi sog nahin manaya aur na hi unhain yaad kerkey bohat ziada roya hoon. kiyun ke ALLAH TALLAH ke kaamon main dakhal de nahin saktey hain hum. Haan mager ub bhi akser yaad zaroor aa jati hai un ki:). you know main ne kabhi kisi ke samney aisa kuch nahin kaha:). you are the second person after my wife to whom I am saying all this:).
dont worry guriya, bhai jaan itney kamzor hergiz nahin:). aur inshallah in chotey chotey siblings ki zimmadariyan mehsoos kerta hoon khud per:) aur inshallah bashurtey zindagi nibhaunga bhi:)
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24-06-2008, 11:28 AM
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Originally Posted by Neo | haan ub to tumhain cheenk bhi aati hai to main samajh leta hoon ke asal "LOCHA" kahan pe hai
berkhordar, tumhari nanni munni ankhain thak jati hain na lambi lambi posts perh perh ker ......
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24-06-2008, 11:29 AM
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Originally Posted by Neo ji deti to hay faida
magar depneds kis ki ke ja rahi hai :o) | bilkul bilkul....kaho to list haath main thama doon?
1) Biwi ki karogey to ghar main sukh paogey
2) walidain ki karogey to duniya main aur akhirat main sawab paogey aur aqibat sanwarogey
3) barey behan bhaiyon ki karogey to duniya jahan ki beshumaar cheezain paogey
4) aur choton ki karogey to un se behud piyar aur respect paogey:)
to chanda, dekh lo tabedari kerney se hamaisha hi insaan bohat kuch pata hai | | | |
03-07-2008, 06:36 AM
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Originally Posted by Emblem99 lolz
bara zaberdast scenario paish kiya hai guriya:). is liyeh ke aisa akser hota hai.....
for example shopping ke baad ghar wapis aaun to, "aap se kaha bhi tha ke falaan shay laani hai, aap wo to lae nahin, utha ke poori dukan le ae"
main tumhian bataun aisa itni baar ho chuka hai ke ub to mera mazak bun gaya hai
for example mujhey merey dost ya begum, koi bhi akaila aur wo bhi bhook ki halat mian shopping per nahin bhejta kiyun ke mujhe jo laney ko kaha jata hai main wo bhool jata hoon aur baqi duniya jahan ki cheezain utha lata hoon .
main pakistan jub bhi jata hoon, meri bari bajiyan mujhey hamaisha HATH jor ker kehti hain ke bakery mut jaya karo kiyun ke main jata hoon aur specialy bhook lagi ho, to yoon samajh lo ke half the bakery ends up in our house
kehney ka maksad hai, ub to yeh demagh aur ye baal boorhey ho gae hain ub in main flexibility nahin hai jo main khud ko change karoon .....biwi ki dantain kha ke aadi ho gaya hoon, ub betiyan bhi kuch arsa dantaingi, phir khud hi samajh laingi ke "baba to kabhi nahin badal saktey" |
lolzzz ... mujhey pata thaa :)
yey hamarey chotey bhai sahib bhi hein ... jis cheez pey focus hoga wohi bhoolein gey ... jab ghar mey baar baar remind kerwao tu like .."theek hey na sun liya" .... jab na ley k aaein tu like " jo last time aap logon ney chezein bataein thein us mey nahi tha yey" .... bhaley das dafa pehlay bata chukey hoon :)
cheezein saamney nikal k rakh do ki yey ley k jana hey ... per u know :))
so yea hum bechari behnein n betyaa'n ... aik aadat daalney k siwa reh kia jata hey :)
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03-07-2008, 06:45 AM
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Originally Posted by Emblem99 jeeti raho:)
acha to mashallah se poorey 7 saal choti ho mujh se:).
Khush raho:).
aur haan, main mazeed kuch kehnye se issi liyeh ruk gaya tha ke zahir si baat hai, main ammi abbu dono ka ladla beta tha. aur un se judai bhi merey japan aaney ke baad hui, apni aankhon se un ke aakhri lamhat nahin dekhey, merey liyeh to wo 1993 main hi chaley gae the kiyun ke us ke baad main pakistan un ki death per hi gaya tha. lihaza aik tishnigi si mehsoos hoti hai. Although main ne kabhi sog nahin manaya aur na hi unhain yaad kerkey bohat ziada roya hoon. kiyun ke ALLAH TALLAH ke kaamon main dakhal de nahin saktey hain hum. Haan mager ub bhi akser yaad zaroor aa jati hai un ki:). you know main ne kabhi kisi ke samney aisa kuch nahin kaha:). you are the second person after my wife to whom I am saying all this:).
dont worry guriya, bhai jaan itney kamzor hergiz nahin:). aur inshallah in chotey chotey siblings ki zimmadariyan mehsoos kerta hoon khud per:) aur inshallah bashurtey zindagi nibhaunga bhi:)
Sada sukhi raho:) | Aameen .... aur aap bhi hamesha khush rahein n sab ko khush rakhein .. Aameen Summa Aameen.
aw!! chalein jo ALLAH ki maslehat ... per zahir hey physical existence matter kernay k bawajood somehow matter nahi kerti ... agar dil mey sab kuch as it is maujood ho ... sab yaadein zinda hoon ... sab hidayatein zabani yaad hoon ... unki pasand na pasand ka unkey jaaney k baad bhi kheyal rakha jaey ... tu jaaney waley hamesha zinda rehtey hein ... :)
INSHALLAH ... May ALLAH bless you enough strength ... Aameen
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