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10-05-2008, 06:58 AM
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Anjaam...
anjam-e-mehfil dekh kar hairat se hoonay lage mujh ko
itni khamoshi dekhi to wehshat si honay lage mujh ko..
aj duao may asar dekha to dekhta reh gaya..
anjam dekh kar may zara dehal sa gayaaa..
bharpor ronaq thi meray shehar may kabhi..
eik musafir bhi nahi saraye may abhiii..
suna tha mil bethnay may hoti hay barkat..
magar ab to lagta hay qabil-e-mafi nahi yeh harkat..
jhonkay tez ho kar andhiyo may badal gaye...
Mahafiz karwaaan k rehzan may badal gaye...
may eik aisa musafir ho jo manzil par ponch kar toota hooo..
ab har kaam ko pay-e-takmeel tak ponchanay say phelay sochta hooo..
may aik aisa sitara hooo jo kekashan say bichar sa gaya hooo
may eik aise mohabbat ho jo mehboob say rooth sa gaya hoon..
may aik aesi kashti mai hoo jo biphrii lehrou ke hawale hai
may aik aesy manjhdar mai hoo jo tufan mai ghira ha
sitaroo par kumand dalnay k khuwab chhoot sa gaya hay..
may eik aisay diya ki manind ho jo bujh sa gaya hay..
is mehfil say rukhsat honay k dar say seham say gaya ho..
anjaam dekh kar bazam kaaaa... may zara simaaat sa gaya ho..
Last edited by Neo : 10-05-2008 at 05:44 PM.
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10-05-2008, 07:03 AM
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Dareechay Se Jhankti Vo Larki Ajeeb Dukh Se Bhari Hui Hay
K Uss k Aangan Mein Phool Par Ik Neeli Titli Mari Hui Hay
Kabhi Azanoo Mein Khoyi Khoyi,Kabhi Namazoo Mein Royi Royi
Wo Aisy Dunya Ko Dekhti Hay k Jaisy Iss Se Dari Hui Hay
Darood Se Mehki Mehki Saansein,Wazifa Parhti Uss Ki Aankhein
K Ik Shamma-e-Umeed Un Mein Kayi Baras Se Dhari Hui Hay
Baray Zamanoon k Bad Barsi Hay Meri Aankhein Kisi Ki Khatir
Baray Zamanoon k Bad Dil Ki Zameen Phir Se Hari Hui Hay...
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10-05-2008, 04:09 PM
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WooooooooooooooooooooooooooooWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW neoooooooooooooooooooo
chhaaaaaaaaa gaye ho yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar
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aisa aasan nahi lahu rona...
dil main taqqat, jigger main haal kahan...
daboya mujhko honay ne ...
na hota main to kya hota ...
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10-05-2008, 04:22 PM
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nice poetry.........
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may hans dia aakhir sawal uski khushi ka tha
may ne khOy@ wo jo mer@ tha hi nahi
us ne khoy@ wo jo sirf usi ka tha........
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10-05-2008, 09:59 PM
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hahahahaa...... saveraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa. bohot zabardast yaraaa...
kya khooooooooob.... likha hay.@Jis tarha hawaien ek rukh pe nahi rehtien!!
Is tarha samandar ke bhi atwaar badalte hain
Duniya ki is bheer main kise aapna kahe kise paraya
kayi loug sadyoun mein, kayi lamha lamha badalte hain
awesome :o)....  |
10-05-2008, 10:00 PM
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WooooooooooooooooooooooooooooWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW neoooooooooooooooooooo
chhaaaaaaaaa gaye ho yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar
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awwwwwwwwwww.. waqayee.. ?? 
shukraaaaaaaaaann |
10-05-2008, 10:02 PM
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nice poetry.........
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10-05-2008, 10:35 PM
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Wow neo....reallly Gr8 .. !
buhut achi hai...
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10-05-2008, 10:38 PM
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Wow neo....reallly Gr8 .. !
buhut achi hai... |
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww... welcome backkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
achi to tum bhi ho 
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10-05-2008, 10:59 PM
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thanku G
haan woh to main hun hi  hahahha 
ure welcm
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10-05-2008, 11:13 PM
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thanku G
haan woh to main hun hi hahahha
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hahahhaahahaahhaahha @
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11-05-2008, 06:07 AM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Neo
hahahahaa...... saveraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa. bohot zabardast yaraaa...
kya khooooooooob.... likha hay.@Jis tarha hawaien ek rukh pe nahi rehtien!!
Is tarha samandar ke bhi atwaar badalte hain
Duniya ki is bheer main kise aapna kahe kise paraya
kayi loug sadyoun mein, kayi lamha lamha badalte hain
awesome :o).... |
Neooooooooooooooooooooo
Thanks
apki jo poetry thee us mai kuch sawal they yeh unka jawab tha
samjh to gaye hoge aap
Humsafar banke hum saath hai aaj bhee
fir bhee hai ye safar ajnabi ajnabi
raah bhee ajnabi mod bhee ajnabi
jaayen hum kidhar ajnabi ajnabi
zindagi ho gayee hai sulagta safar
door tak aa raha hai dhuaaN sa nazar
jaane kis mod par kho gayee har khushi
deke dard-e-jigar ajnabi janabi
humne chun chun ke tinke banaaya tha jo
aashiyaaN hasraton se sajaaya tha jo
hai chaman mein wahi aashiyaan aaj bhee
lag raha hai magar ajnabi ajnabi
kisko maaloom tha din ye bhee aayenge
mausamon kee tarah dil badal jaayenge
din hua ajnabi raat bhee ajnabi
har ghaDi har pahar ajnabi ajnabi .
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Dareechay Se Jhankti Vo Larki Ajeeb Dukh Se Bhari Hui Hay
K Uss k Aangan Mein Phool Par Ik Neeli Titli Mari Hui Hay
Kabhi Azanoo Mein Khoyi Khoyi,Kabhi Namazoo Mein Royi Royi
Wo Aisy Dunya Ko Dekhti Hay k Jaisy Iss Se Dari Hui Hay
Darood Se Mehki Mehki Saansein,Wazifa Parhti Uss Ki Aankhein
K Ik Shamma-e-Umeed Un Mein Kayi Baras Se Dhari Hui Hay
Baray Zamanoon k Bad Barsi Hay Meri Aankhein Kisi Ki Khatir
Baray Zamanoon k Bad Dil Ki Zameen Phir Se Hari Hui Hay...
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11-05-2008, 10:51 AM
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awwwwwwwwwww.. waqayee.. ??
shukraaaaaaaaaann |
yeah waQi 
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13-05-2008, 03:00 AM
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lolz@sawal thay..
hahaahh.. han samajh gaya ho :o)..
bohot khoob yaraa.. tum jaha say bhi lati ho ye poetry.. kamal lati ho :o)..
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13-05-2008, 03:01 AM
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yeah waQi |
shukran.. :o) |
19-05-2008, 05:45 PM
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well done Neo brother
really very cool
bohat achay words use kiya app ne
good really nice
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19-05-2008, 06:30 PM
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wah g wah chaa gayai ho ustad very nice...
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