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Old 10-05-2008, 06:58 AM
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anjam-e-mehfil dekh kar hairat se hoonay lage mujh ko
itni khamoshi dekhi to wehshat si honay lage mujh ko..

aj duao may asar dekha to dekhta reh gaya..
anjam dekh kar may zara dehal sa gayaaa..

bharpor ronaq thi meray shehar may kabhi..
eik musafir bhi nahi saraye may abhiii..

suna tha mil bethnay may hoti hay barkat..
magar ab to lagta hay qabil-e-mafi nahi yeh harkat..

jhonkay tez ho kar andhiyo may badal gaye...
Mahafiz karwaaan k rehzan may badal gaye...

may eik aisa musafir ho jo manzil par ponch kar toota hooo..
ab har kaam ko pay-e-takmeel tak ponchanay say phelay sochta hooo..


may aik aisa sitara hooo jo kekashan say bichar sa gaya hooo
may eik aise mohabbat ho jo mehboob say rooth sa gaya hoon..

may aik aesi kashti mai hoo jo biphrii lehrou ke hawale hai
may aik aesy manjhdar mai hoo jo tufan mai ghira ha

sitaroo par kumand dalnay k khuwab chhoot sa gaya hay..
may eik aisay diya ki manind ho jo bujh sa gaya hay..

is mehfil say rukhsat honay k dar say seham say gaya ho..
anjaam dekh kar bazam kaaaa... may zara simaaat sa gaya ho..
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Old 10-05-2008, 07:03 AM
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anjam-e-mehfil dekh kar hairat se hoonay lage mujh ko
itni khamoshi dekhi to wehshat si honay lage mujh ko..

aj duao may asar dekha to dekhta reh gaya..
anjam dekh kar may zara dehal sa gayaaa..

bharpor ronaq thi meray shehar may kabhi..
eik musafir bhi nahi saraye may abhiii..

suna tha mil bethnay may hoti hay barkat..
magar ab to lagta hay qabil-e-mafi nahi yeh harkat..

jhonkay tez ho kar andhiyo may badal gaye...
Mahafiz karwaaan k rehzan may badal gaye...

may eik aisa musafir ho jo manzil par ponch kar toota hooo../hay
ab har kaam ko pay-e-takmeel tak ponchanay say phelay sochta hooo..


may aik aisa sitara hooo jo kekashan say bichar sa gaya hooo
may eik aise mohabbat ho jo mehboob say rooth sa gaya hoon..

may aik aesi kashti mai hoo jo biphrii lehrou ke hawale hai
may aik aesy manjhdar mai hoo jo tufan mai ghira ha

sitaroo par kumand dalnay k khuwab chhoot sa gaya hay..
may eik aisay diya ki manind ho jo bujh sa gaya hay..

is mehfil say rukhsat honay k dar say seham say gaya ho..
anjaam dekh kar bazam kaaaa... may zara simaaat sa gaya ho..
Neoooooooooooooooooooooooooo

buhatttttttt hi achi poetry likhii hai apne :)..

iski jintni bhi tareef ki jye kam hai :)

Waqt badalta hai, haalat badalte hain
Soch badalti hai, jazbaat badalte hain

Jis tarha hawaien ek rukh pe nahi rehtien!!
Is tarha samandar ke bhi atwaar badalte hain

Duniya ki is bheer main kise aapna kahe kise paraya
kayi loug sadyoun mein, kayi lamha lamha badalte hain :)
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WooooooooooooooooooooooooooooWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW neoooooooooooooooooooo
chhaaaaaaaaa gaye ho yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar
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nice poetry.........
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Neoooooooooooooooooooooooooo

buhatttttttt hi achi poetry likhii hai apne :)..

iski jintni bhi tareef ki jye kam hai :)

Waqt badalta hai, haalat badalte hain
Soch badalti hai, jazbaat badalte hain

Jis tarha hawaien ek rukh pe nahi rehtien!!
Is tarha samandar ke bhi atwaar badalte hain

Duniya ki is bheer main kise aapna kahe kise paraya
kayi loug sadyoun mein, kayi lamha lamha badalte hain :)
hahahahaa...... saveraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa. bohot zabardast yaraaa...

kya khooooooooob.... likha hay.@Jis tarha hawaien ek rukh pe nahi rehtien!!
Is tarha samandar ke bhi atwaar badalte hain

Duniya ki is bheer main kise aapna kahe kise paraya
kayi loug sadyoun mein, kayi lamha lamha badalte hain

awesome :o)....
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chhaaaaaaaaa gaye ho yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar
awwwwwwwwwww.. waqayee.. ??
shukraaaaaaaaaann
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nice poetry.........
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Wow neo....reallly Gr8 .. !
buhut achi hai...
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buhut achi hai...
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww... welcome backkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
achi to tum bhi ho

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haan woh to main hun hi hahahha

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haan woh to main hun hi hahahha

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hahahahaa...... saveraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa. bohot zabardast yaraaa...

kya khooooooooob.... likha hay.@Jis tarha hawaien ek rukh pe nahi rehtien!!
Is tarha samandar ke bhi atwaar badalte hain

Duniya ki is bheer main kise aapna kahe kise paraya
kayi loug sadyoun mein, kayi lamha lamha badalte hain

awesome :o)....
Neooooooooooooooooooooo
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apki jo poetry thee us mai kuch sawal they yeh unka jawab tha

samjh to gaye hoge aap

Humsafar banke hum saath hai aaj bhee
fir bhee hai ye safar ajnabi ajnabi
raah bhee ajnabi mod bhee ajnabi
jaayen hum kidhar ajnabi ajnabi

zindagi ho gayee hai sulagta safar
door tak aa raha hai dhuaaN sa nazar
jaane kis mod par kho gayee har khushi
deke dard-e-jigar ajnabi janabi

humne chun chun ke tinke banaaya tha jo
aashiyaaN hasraton se sajaaya tha jo
hai chaman mein wahi aashiyaan aaj bhee
lag raha hai magar ajnabi ajnabi

kisko maaloom tha din ye bhee aayenge
mausamon kee tarah dil badal jaayenge
din hua ajnabi raat bhee ajnabi
har ghaDi har pahar ajnabi ajnabi .
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shukraaaaaaaaaann
yeah waQi
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When I mastered the skill of hating,
Somebody started Lovin me...
N when after waiting for the dawn, I fell asleep,
The Sun Came Out..
This z what they call "life"!!!
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Old 13-05-2008, 03:00 AM
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Neooooooooooooooooooooo
Thanks

apki jo poetry thee us mai kuch sawal they yeh unka jawab tha

samjh to gaye hoge aap

Humsafar banke hum saath hai aaj bhee
fir bhee hai ye safar ajnabi ajnabi
raah bhee ajnabi mod bhee ajnabi
jaayen hum kidhar ajnabi ajnabi

zindagi ho gayee hai sulagta safar
door tak aa raha hai dhuaaN sa nazar
jaane kis mod par kho gayee har khushi
deke dard-e-jigar ajnabi janabi

humne chun chun ke tinke banaaya tha jo
aashiyaaN hasraton se sajaaya tha jo
hai chaman mein wahi aashiyaan aaj bhee
lag raha hai magar ajnabi ajnabi

kisko maaloom tha din ye bhee aayenge
mausamon kee tarah dil badal jaayenge
din hua ajnabi raat bhee ajnabi
har ghaDi har pahar ajnabi ajnabi .

lolz@sawal thay..
hahaahh.. han samajh gaya ho :o)..

bohot khoob yaraa.. tum jaha say bhi lati ho ye poetry.. kamal lati ho :o)..

welll done to u
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