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07-04-2008, 08:58 PM
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| Muje Alvida kehna nahi ata my first try :$     zindagi ka yeh safar chalte chalte kiyo achanak ruk sa gaya Suno... muje yeh Aitbar karna nahi ata...:) chalo us jahan mai jahan na tum ho khafa..na karoo mai jafa suno... muje ab Intazar karna bhi nahi ata..:) kabhi dil ke hatho tou kabhi halat ke hatho majboor tha tumne yeh kabhi nahi jana ab to muje bhi samjhana nahi ata...:) mai hoo aaj jahan..kal na hoo shayed wahan ..tum ho aaj jahan Suno... muje yeh Waqt rokna keu nahi ata.. na mil sakoo shayed tumhe phir Suno... muje to AVLIDA kehna bhi nahi ata ..:)
__________________  “Nothing is given to man on earth - struggle is built into the nature of life, and conflict is possible - the hero is the man who lets no obstacle prevent him from pursuing the values he has CHOSEN.” Last edited by Neo; 07-04-2008 at 09:01 PM..  |
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07-04-2008, 09:04 PM
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| ahaaannnn ... i can c ..... assar padh raha hai  buhut achi hai :) very very shweet ..... 
__________________ Chaahe Jo Tumhen Poore Dil Se Milta Hai Woh Mushkil Se Aesa Jo Koi Kahin Hai Bas Wohi Sab Se Haseen Hai  Us Haath Ko Tum Thaam Lo Woh Mehrbaan Kal Ho Na Ho .... |
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07-04-2008, 09:18 PM
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 chalo us jahan mai jahan na tum ho khafa..na karoo mai jafa suno... muje ab Intazar karna bhi nahi ata..:) na mil sakoo shayed tumhe phir Suno... muje to AVLIDA kehna bhi nahi ata ..:) ZbErdaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaast!!! Jeetay rahO baita buhat acha likha! Kaha tha na "Likh saktay hO" Buhat hi zbErdast! mEri First pOEm iss QadEr buri thi bata nahi sakti.... But Tussi tay kamal kEr chhadiya! GOD BLESS U! Regards, MaYa
__________________  JiYa mOra GhabrayE baabUl... Bin bOlaY raha na jayE baabUl... BaabUl mEri itni Arazz sUnn lijO mOhaY sUnaar kaY ghar na dijO... mOhaY Zaivar kabhi na bhaayE baabUl... JiYa mOra GhabrayE baabUl... BaabUl mEri itni Arazz sUnn lijO mOhaY rAjA ghar na dijO... mOhaY rAAj na kErna aayE baabUl... JiYa mOra GhabrayE baabUl... BaabUl mEri itni Arazz sUnn lijO mUjhy lOOhaar kaY ghar daY dijO... jO mEri zanjEErain PighlaayE baabUl... JiYa mOra ghabrayE baabUl... |
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07-04-2008, 09:28 PM
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| Mujhy jazbOn sE na-ashna shakhs jO hai thhehraya… Mujhy JazbOn kay rOubarOu khud kO rakhna Nahi aata… Main jO bOlta hOn… Ussy HaQeeQat na jaan aay dOst! Mujhy sachai kay bhanwar mein DOObna hErgizz nahi aata! Mujhy jO samjhnay kay daway kErtay rahay mEry Ahbaab… MEri HaQeeQat kO parkhna Unhay Bhi nahi aata! Bay shak aaj hOn main Tan Tanha… Dunya ki NazEr mEin… PEr Hai yEh kya Tanhai… Kabhi Daikh mEri nazEr sE! Mujhy lOgOn kay hajOOm mEin khud kO khOOna Nahi aata!
__________________ JiYa mOra GhabrayE baabUl... Bin bOlaY raha na jayE baabUl... BaabUl mEri itni Arazz sUnn lijO mOhaY sUnaar kaY ghar na dijO... mOhaY Zaivar kabhi na bhaayE baabUl... JiYa mOra GhabrayE baabUl... BaabUl mEri itni Arazz sUnn lijO mOhaY rAjA ghar na dijO... mOhaY rAAj na kErna aayE baabUl... JiYa mOra GhabrayE baabUl... BaabUl mEri itni Arazz sUnn lijO mUjhy lOOhaar kaY ghar daY dijO... jO mEri zanjEErain PighlaayE baabUl... JiYa mOra ghabrayE baabUl... |
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07-04-2008, 09:37 PM
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| dat is sweet nice one buddy likhty rehiyeh ga ;) |
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08-04-2008, 01:13 AM
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   thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx... 
__________________ “Nothing is given to man on earth - struggle is built into the nature of life, and conflict is possible - the hero is the man who lets no obstacle prevent him from pursuing the values he has CHOSEN.” |
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08-04-2008, 01:20 AM
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| good try ....U can go long way ! keep writing more ! :-)
__________________  ye dasht-e-junoon ye pagalpan ye peecha kerti ruswai ye ranj-o-alam yeh hizn-o-malal ye nala-e-shab yeh soz-e-kamaal Dil main Kahin benaam chubhan aur had-e-nazar tak tanhai hum dasht-e-junoon k sodai |
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08-04-2008, 01:24 AM
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 .. KHALAAA g... itna bara anhiyan shukran KHALA G ap ko paasand aye may shair to nahi.... magar aye haseen.. jab say dekha hai mainay tujh ko mujh ko shairiiiiii . agaiiiiiiiiiiiiii look can b deceiving naa. :o) achaa :o). koi bat nahi g.. we live we learn.. @first poem. thanks.. once again.. :o)
__________________ “Nothing is given to man on earth - struggle is built into the nature of life, and conflict is possible - the hero is the man who lets no obstacle prevent him from pursuing the values he has CHOSEN.” |
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08-04-2008, 01:27 AM
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i shall try my best .. :o)
__________________ “Nothing is given to man on earth - struggle is built into the nature of life, and conflict is possible - the hero is the man who lets no obstacle prevent him from pursuing the values he has CHOSEN.” |
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08-04-2008, 01:28 AM
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thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx. .:o)
__________________ “Nothing is given to man on earth - struggle is built into the nature of life, and conflict is possible - the hero is the man who lets no obstacle prevent him from pursuing the values he has CHOSEN.” |
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08-04-2008, 01:46 AM
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| very nice ....................... |
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08-04-2008, 02:23 AM
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__________________ “Nothing is given to man on earth - struggle is built into the nature of life, and conflict is possible - the hero is the man who lets no obstacle prevent him from pursuing the values he has CHOSEN.” |
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08-04-2008, 04:25 AM
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GhamooN se Iss Qadar Hai Dosti Ab Khushi kee Bhee Nahin Mujh ko Khushi Ab Khuda Jaanay Issay Kiya ho Gaya Hai Bohat hee Bolti Hai Khamshi Ab Qana“at Seekh Lee Hai Mairay Dil Ne Kammi Mujh ko Nahin Lagti Kammi Ab Kabhi Kehtay tu Kitni Eham Hoti Wohi Ikk Baat Jo Tum ne Kahi Ab Jissay Tareekiyan Raas Aa Gai HaiN Ussay Kyun Dhoondti Hai Roshni Ab Kabhi jiss kee Talab hee Zindagi Thee Zaroorat hee Nahin Uss ke Rahi Ab KarooN ga Yaad jo Fursat Milli Tu Barri Masroof Hai Yeh Zindagi Ab
__________________ “Nothing is given to man on earth - struggle is built into the nature of life, and conflict is possible - the hero is the man who lets no obstacle prevent him from pursuing the values he has CHOSEN.” |
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08-04-2008, 04:46 AM
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i saw this post earlier on .. but for some strange reason it disappear aswell .. ne clue??
__________________ “Nothing is given to man on earth - struggle is built into the nature of life, and conflict is possible - the hero is the man who lets no obstacle prevent him from pursuing the values he has CHOSEN.” |
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08-04-2008, 05:05 AM
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koi khas matlab nahi hay :o)... aiwain likh diya tha.. :o)
__________________ “Nothing is given to man on earth - struggle is built into the nature of life, and conflict is possible - the hero is the man who lets no obstacle prevent him from pursuing the values he has CHOSEN.” |
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08-04-2008, 04:43 PM
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| Back to topic .. don't post Personal comments . Last edited by Kool Guy; 08-04-2008 at 04:46 PM.. |
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08-04-2008, 07:41 PM
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tumhari poetry par to aj main jal gya  soch rha hon apna b diwaan post kar don ;) |
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08-04-2008, 08:14 PM
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| wOw Superb neO uncle.............!!!
__________________ U will miss me… I still remember the last Moment When u said to me goodbye forever…… My tears didn’t melt Ur heart But I know ……… U will miss me!!! Whenever u will feel like to cry U will look around here and there … U won’t find any shoulder to cry on… On that moment U will miss me!!! Whenever in darkness night moon won’t smile And stars won’t bright ……… And loneliness will tease u …. On that moment U will miss me!!! Yeah my heart knows U will miss me……..  |
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08-04-2008, 11:08 PM
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__________________ “Nothing is given to man on earth - struggle is built into the nature of life, and conflict is possible - the hero is the man who lets no obstacle prevent him from pursuing the values he has CHOSEN.” |
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08-04-2008, 11:09 PM
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apna dewan ...kyo mera ROAST banao gay ;o)
__________________ “Nothing is given to man on earth - struggle is built into the nature of life, and conflict is possible - the hero is the man who lets no obstacle prevent him from pursuing the values he has CHOSEN.” |
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