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Old 08-04-2008, 11:10 PM
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Old 09-04-2008, 05:23 PM
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ap ka matlab kahi ye to nahi k may ap ko apni id may add karo??
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my first try :$
zindagi ka yeh safar chalte chalte
kiyo achanak ruk sa gaya
Suno...
muje yeh Aitbar karna nahi ata...:)

chalo us jahan mai jahan
na tum ho khafa..na karoo mai jafa
suno...
muje ab Intazar karna bhi nahi ata..:)

kabhi dil ke hatho tou kabhi
halat ke hatho majboor tha
tumne yeh kabhi nahi jana
ab to muje bhi samjhana nahi ata...:)


mai hoo aaj jahan..kal na hoo
shayed wahan ..tum ho aaj jahan
Suno...
muje yeh Waqt rokna keu nahi ata..


na mil sakoo shayed tumhe phir
Suno...
muje to AVLIDA kehna bhi nahi ata ..:)

very Nice. app ki is shairy per ik choti c nazm..
mazrat k sath.. :)

Suno!


Tum Azm waley ho
Bala ka zabt rekhtey ho
Tumhy koch bhee nahi ho ga


Magar daikho !


Jisey tum chor jatey ho
oosey to theek sey syayed
Bicherna bhi nahi ata,

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buhat khob Omer.. app ki frst try buhat achi hai..
PLease likhhtay rahiye ga.. :)
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Old 09-04-2008, 06:07 PM
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very Nice. app ki is shairy per ik choti c nazm..
mazrat k sath.. :)

Suno!


Tum Azm waley ho
Bala ka zabt rekhtey ho
Tumhy koch bhee nahi ho ga


Magar daikho !


Jisey tum chor jatey ho
oosey to theek sey syayed
Bicherna bhi nahi ata,

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buhat khob Omer.. app ki frst try buhat achi hai..
PLease likhhtay rahiye ga.. :)

mazrat to na karay.. :).. ap nay parhi hamaray liya to yehi bohot bari bat hay.. :o).. us par apnay poetry bhi kar di .... hamaray liya to bari izat ki bat hay ... :o)

very nice shair g.. :o)

usay bicharna nahi ataaa.. hamey alvidaa kehna nahi ataa...
magar is tarah say ghut ghut kar humay jeena bhi nahi ataa.. : o)

ap dua kartay rahain k humain tofeeq hoti rahay...:o)

shukran :o)
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Old 09-04-2008, 10:07 PM
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apna dewan ...kyo mera ROAST banao gay ;o)
hana woh kehty hain na k raasti jal gai or bal g gya
tumhara rost bana diya to khaye ga koOn waste hi jaye ga
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Old 09-04-2008, 10:18 PM
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hana woh kehty hain na k raasti jal gai or bal g gya
tumhara rost bana diya to khaye ga koOn waste hi jaye ga
ao phir tumharay saray bal may aaj nikal hi doon
hahhaa.. yeha par log mujhey kacha chabanay ko tayar hay tum roast ki bat kartay ho
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Old 09-04-2008, 10:40 PM
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ao phir tumharay saray bal may aaj nikal hi doon
hahhaa.. yeha par log mujhey kacha chabanay ko tayar hay tum roast ki bat kartay ho
nai woh kal ho jaye ga kam fiker not
kacha :O tab to baray buray din ane wale hain tumhre chalo b kacha hi rehne dety hain Roast cancel
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nai woh kal ho jaye ga kam fiker not
kacha :O tab to baray buray din ane wale hain tumhre chalo b kacha hi rehne dety hain Roast cancel
hahhaha@kaal.. meray bhi nikalwado do char bal phir
buray din abhi or bhi aingay??
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hahhaha@kaal.. meray bhi nikalwado do char bal phir
buray din abhi or bhi aingay??
cosmatics use kia karo
dekho to sahi tumhare sath woh wali hogi Inshallah samaj to gaye hon gay
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cosmatics use kia karo
dekho to sahi tumhare sath woh wali hogi Inshallah samaj to gaye hon gay
apni tarah samajh liya hay ?? @cosmetics use kya karo
hahah@dekho to sahi.. lolzz@INSHALLAH
bahi itni nafrat kartay ho to bata do takay may bhi utni hi karo
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kabhi dil ke hatho tou kabhi
halat ke hatho majboor tha
tumne yeh kabhi nahi jana
ab to muje bhi samjhana nahi ata...:)


mai hoo aaj jahan..kal na hoo
shayed wahan ..tum ho aaj jahan
Suno...
muje yeh Waqt rokna keu nahi ata..


na mil sakoo shayed tumhe phir
Suno...
muje to AVLIDA kehna bhi nahi ata ..:)





aap ne bhi kaafi time se kuch nahin likha ....

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yaar SUPERBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBB

dil jale lag rahy ho tum..............
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kabhi dil ke hatho tou kabhi
halat ke hatho majboor tha
tumne yeh kabhi nahi jana
ab to muje bhi samjhana nahi ata...:)


mai hoo aaj jahan..kal na hoo
shayed wahan ..tum ho aaj jahan
Suno...
muje yeh Waqt rokna keu nahi ata..


na mil sakoo shayed tumhe phir
Suno...
muje to AVLIDA kehna bhi nahi ata ..:)





aap ne bhi kaafi time se kuch nahin likha ....

han kafi arsa hogaya hay :o)..
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Old 07-07-2008, 05:56 AM
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dil jale lag rahy ho tum..............
han kya hay??@Neoo

or tum DIL jALE ki VIllian Amrish puri lag rahi ho

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my first try :$
zindagi ka yeh safar chalte chalte
kiyo achanak ruk sa gaya
Suno...
muje yeh Aitbar karna nahi ata...:)

chalo us jahan mai jahan
na tum ho khafa..na karoo mai jafa
suno...
muje ab Intazar karna bhi nahi ata..:)

kabhi dil ke hatho tou kabhi
halat ke hatho majboor tha
tumne yeh kabhi nahi jana
ab to muje bhi samjhana nahi ata...:)


mai hoo aaj jahan..kal na hoo
shayed wahan ..tum ho aaj jahan
Suno...
muje yeh Waqt rokna keu nahi ata..


na mil sakoo shayed tumhe phir
Suno...
muje to AVLIDA kehna bhi nahi ata ..:)
theme is greatt ... shoroaat bhi kaafi achchi thi aagey jakey laga ki aap ney zeyada concentrate nahi kia :) .... but first one k lehaaz sey u got quite good marks .... keep writing and it will automatically get the flow.

(PS. I always say ppl ki never take me worng if I do some changes ... meri bad habit hey ki if i feel something can be better in my views, I do let the other person know ... it never means tht I try to be better than anyone esle ... neverr).

khair take a look :)

zindagi ka yeh safar chalte chalte
kiyo achanak ruk sa gaya
Suno...
muje Aitbar karna nahi ata...:)

chalo us jahan mai jahan
na tum ho khafa..na karoo mai jafa
suno...
muje Intazar karna bhi nahi ata..:)

kabhi dil ke hatho majboor tha
kabhi haalat they roothey huey
suno ...
tumne nahi jana
aur muje samjhana nahi ata...:)


mai hoo aaj jahan..
kal na hoon shayed wahan ..
Suno...
dhoond tum lena
k mujhey theharna nahi aata ...

ger na mil sakoo tumko kabhi phir
Suno...
main Alvida kehta hoon

per muje to AVLIDA kehna bhi nahi ata ..:)
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han kya hay??@Neoo

or tum DIL jALE ki VIllian Amrish puri lag rahi ho

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lo bol tu ese rahy ho. jese @@ TUM NE PUKARA LO MAIN CHALA AAYA...

AMRESH PORi................ DIL JALE i havnt seen

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