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Old 08-05-2005, 02:31 AM
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kitney din huey ..main rooee nahi hoon!!!
kitney din huey ..main rooee nahi hoon!!!

Aey Maa’n!!!!

mera sar apney shaaney sey tika ker
mujhey holey sey thapki dey…
key meray nainoo’n ka khush darya
pal mey samander hojaey
aur meray ander ka ghum
usmey kaheen kho jaaey,

tu mujhey holey sey thapki dey…
key kab sey main roee nahi hoon,

Aey Maa!!!

mujhey apni aaghosh mey chhupa ker
meray baaloo’n ko dheeray dheeray…
apni ungliyoo’n sey sawaanr
aur piyaar sey lori suna…
key meri aankhoo’n sey roth jaaney wali neendein
teray lams sey hi manein gee,

mujhey lori suna key main…
na jaaney kab sey soee nahi hoon,

Aey Maa!!!

apni baa’nhein phela ker aawaaz dey mujhey
main bhatak rahi hoon idher udhur
bilkul us bachchey ki terha…
jo bheer mey Maa ki unglee chhorr deta hey,

aawaaz dey mujhey key
tujh sey durr hokey bhi ...
logoo’n key is majmey mey khoee nahi hoon,

Aey Maa!!!
kitney din huey main roee nahi hoon,


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thanxx raima....sahil n aamir for these words
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thanxx raima....sahil n aamir for these words
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Time brings changes and time let us learn so I edited a line which I can feel out of flow now :) ...
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