[AQN]

let’s cherish this full moon night ...
we will sit and feel the beauty,

while silently listening the hilarity of cold breezes
we will go to our fantasy world,

there won’t be anyone around to care about
just our laughters
just our screams of joy,

we will feel the ecstasy of being ourselves
and will cherish each and every moment,

shower our deepest love to each other
show the utmost care we have,

then there every bird will sing for us
and the sound would be full of glee,

all the fireflies will encircle us
and will dance on the beat of love,

every star which will twinkle that day
would be sparkling more than ever
since they would be as rejuvenated
as we would have,

we will be enlivening our hearts
pouring out all pains and sorrows,

we will see the true colors of life
the bright and shiny ...
they will engulf all the darkness of our fate,

there would be nothing
just you and me …
you will kiss my palm
and we both will feel its warmth,

the warmth …
that can melt down all those frozen tears
which I am carrying so long
which I shed down but hid in my hands,

that can melt down all those frozen words
which you wanted to say
but gulped all the way ...
so they never could cross your lips,
the warmth will melt everything down,

when our gaze will meet
all the surroundings will fade away …
the floating mist will wrap its arms around us
and we too will dissolve in it,

what a beautiful end of us
so let's cherish this full moon night, ................................. AQN ............................

[Neo]

Originally Posted by AQN

let’s cherish this full moon night ...
we will sit and feel the beauty,

while silently listening the hilarity of cold breezes
we will go to our fantasy world,

there won’t be anyone around to care about
just our laughters
just our screams of joy,

we will feel the ecstasy of being ourselves
and will cherish each and every moment,

shower our deepest love to each other
show the utmost care we have,

then there every bird will sing for us
and the sound would be full of glee,

all the fireflies will encircle us
and will dance on the beat of love,

every star which will twinkle that day
would be sparkling more than ever
since they would be as rejuvenated
as we would have,

we will be enlivening our hearts
pouring out all pains and sorrows,

we will see the true colors of life
the bright and shiny ...
they will engulf all the darkness of our fate,

there would be nothing
just you and me …
you will kiss my palm
and we both will feel its warmth,

the warmth …
that can melt down all those frozen tears
which I am carrying so long
which I shed down but hid in my hands,

that can melt down all those frozen words
which you wanted to say
but gulped all the way ...
so they never could cross your lips,
the warmth will melt everything down,

when our gaze will meet
all the surroundings will fade away …
the floating mist will wrap its arms around us
and we too will dissolve in it,

what a beautiful end of us
so let's cherish this full moon night, ................................. AQN ............................

when our gaze will meet
all the surroundings will fade away …
the floating mist will wrap its arms around us
and we too will dissolve in it,

what a beautiful end of us
so let's cherish this full moon night


very very b u t ful......... very nice work AQN

well done..........

[AQN]

Originally Posted by Neo

when our gaze will meet
all the surroundings will fade away …
the floating mist will wrap its arms around us
and we too will dissolve in it,

what a beautiful end of us
so let's cherish this full moon night


very very b u t ful......... very nice work AQN

well done..........

:)) thanks so much for this much appreciation

[Neo]

Originally Posted by AQN

:)) thanks so much for this much appreciation

ap ne likhi hi itni achi hai....... thanks for writing such a b u t ful poem.. :=)

[AQN]

Originally Posted by Neo

ap ne likhi hi itni achi hai....... thanks for writing such a b u t ful poem.. :=)

Aa'n haa'n :) ... my pleasure

waisey Neo aur itni sharafat sey msg ... still doubtful :)

[Neo]

Originally Posted by AQN

Aa'n haa'n :) ... my pleasure

waisey Neo aur itni sharafat sey msg ... still doubtful :)

ap ne ye note nahi kya NEO or itni jaldi jaldi replies bhi ??

tired.. sleepy..... n mood ajeeb ne itni sharafat ka muzhara karnay par majboor kar diya hay

[AQN]

Originally Posted by Neo

ap ne ye note nahi kya NEO or itni jaldi jaldi replies bhi ??

tired.. sleepy..... n mood ajeeb ne itni sharafat ka muzhara karnay par majboor kar diya hay

nahi .. Neo jab hota hey tu jaldi jaldi replies ... aur break ayaa tu bhool jao thread : )

I see .... hopefully taking rest now ... cz its been late for this msg :)

[Neo]

Originally Posted by AQN

nahi .. Neo jab hota hey tu jaldi jaldi replies ... aur break ayaa tu bhool jao thread : )

I see .... hopefully taking rest now ... cz its been late for this msg :)

hahahahah @bhool jao thread..
i usually forget k kis thread may kya kiya tha.... user cp may jata nahi hoon.. usually jo samnay list may hoti hain wohi se dekh kar reply karta hoon..

nahi nahi still awake...... ap k message k hi to intezar may nazraye jamaye betha howa tha ....

[kaka manna]

Is da TARJUMA ve kar k vekhao na saday jiya loka vastay

[AQN]

Originally Posted by Neo

hahahahah @bhool jao thread..
i usually forget k kis thread may kya kiya tha.... user cp may jata nahi hoon.. usually jo samnay list may hoti hain wohi se dekh kar reply karta hoon..

nahi nahi still awake...... ap k message k hi to intezar may nazraye jamaye betha howa tha ....

really sppedy reply : )

I see @ user CP

ohh ye tu phir zulm hogeya @ meray msg k intezaar mey

[Neo]

Originally Posted by AQN

really sppedy reply : )

I see @ user CP

ohh ye tu phir zulm hogeya @ meray msg k intezaar mey

magar dekhay maine UFFF tak nahi kya ....... @ zulam

[AQN]

Originally Posted by kaka manna

Is da TARJUMA ve kar k vekhao na saday jiya loka vastay

aisey kaisey terjuma! .... jo cheez jis zaban mey likhi gaee hey uska taste usi mey aaey ga ... like aap chaho ki chinese spaghetti ko punjabi masaley aur tadkey key saath banaya jaey tu phir wo baat tu nahi hogee na!

so for the change of taste, enjoy it as it is : )

[AQN]

Originally Posted by Neo

magar dekhay maine UFFF tak nahi kya ....... @ zulam

jee MAHAN hein aap tu :)

[desperado.w3]

Thanks for the post.. LIked It..

[AQN]

Originally Posted by desperado.w3

Thanks for the post.. LIked It..

'Thanks for the post.. LIked It' ka stamp banwaya na aap ney her poem pey laganey k leye : ) ...

[kaka manna]

Originally Posted by AQN

aisey kaisey terjuma! .... jo cheez jis zaban mey likhi gaee hey uska taste usi mey aaey ga ... like aap chaho ki chinese spaghetti ko punjabi masaley aur tadkey key saath banaya jaey tu phir wo baat tu nahi hogee na!

so for the change of taste, enjoy it as it is : )

maaf karna tussi, par mai thaanu tarjuma karan da kaha c mashwara den da nae

hun next time wastey ithay tusi tarjuma kar dena agar ho sakiya te wade meharbani hogi tuhadi

[AQN]

Originally Posted by kaka manna

maaf karna tussi, par mai thaanu tarjuma karan da kaha c mashwara den da nae

hun next time wastey ithay tusi tarjuma kar dena agar ho sakiya te wade meharbani hogi tuhadi

jee kaha tu nahi I know ... per jaisey udhar sey bey dharak fermaish aaee ... waisey hi idhar sey bey dharak mashwara geya : ) .... aur waisey bhi kabhi kabhi kisi k bina maangey bhi cheezein dey deni chahiyey .... baaz dafa banda maangtey heuy jhijhak bhi tu sakta hey na! : )

[kaka manna]

Originally Posted by AQN

jee kaha tu nahi I know ... per jaisey udhar sey bey dharak fermaish aaee ... waisey hi idhar sey bey dharak mashwara geya : ) .... aur waisey bhi kabhi kabhi kisi k bina maangey bhi cheezein dey deni chahiyey .... baaz dafa banda maangtey heuy jhijhak bhi tu sakta hey na! : )

ina vi bedharki tuaday wastay theek nae haige . aiwain chuk shuk pay gaye to maasail ho janay hai

eik farmaish kiti se tussi pura te nae kitta us nu fer kehnday jo banda jhijiakta haiga

[AQN]

Originally Posted by kaka manna

ina vi bedharki tuaday wastay theek nae haige . aiwain chuk shuk pay gaye to maasail ho janay hai

eik farmaish kiti se tussi pura te nae kitta us nu fer kehnday jo banda jhijiakta haiga

nahi koee masla nahi .... itni 'bey dharaki' tu main dikhati bhi nahi jis sey masaail hojaaney ka khadsha ho ... so u don't worry abt chuk shuk : )

rahi baat fermaish ki ... tu wo kiya hey na ki her fermaishish poori kernay wali hoti bhi nahi aur na kerni chahiyey ... is sey bhi 'masaail ho jaaney hein' .... aur dobara jo kaha "MEHARBANI ka tu wo is leye nahi kiya ki jab fermaish poori nahi ki tu meharbaani bhi nahi kerni chahiyey ... u know ... achcha nahi lagta ki aisey hi kisi pey "MEHARBAANI' ka bojh daal diya jaey : )