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Old 22-07-2008, 08:22 PM
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I Wish I Cud.......

I WSH I CUD,

count da tears u made me cry

so dat 1 day,

if i ask u,

u can pay 'em bk 2 me

n u wud b left tearless

still thr wud b sum left on your part...

I WISH u cud sense da pain,

u make me go through

n den cry so hard,

until u nomore cud feel dat ur crying,

scream so loud,

dat u nomore cud hear ur own voice...

I WISH i cud

make u wait dumbly al nights

n den aftr a single glimpse,

i wud snatch away

ur sweetheart frm u...

I WISH I CUD
make u live a single life of mine....
I WISH I CUD.......
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Old 22-07-2008, 08:29 PM
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yeah i wish i cud too...nice !!!
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Old 22-07-2008, 08:51 PM
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Old 23-07-2008, 05:50 PM
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Nice1 Raima... Good going
likd it ..keep on sharing :)
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I WSH I CUD,

count da tears u made me cry

so dat 1 day,

if i ask u,

u can pay 'em bk 2 me

n u wud b left tearless

still thr wud b sum left on your part...

I WISH u cud sense da pain,

u make me go through

n den cry so hard,

until u nomore cud feel dat ur crying,

scream so loud,

dat u nomore cud hear ur own voice...

I WISH i cud

make u wait dumbly al nights

n den aftr a single glimpse,

i wud snatch away

ur sweetheart frm u...

I WISH I CUD
make u live a single life of mine....
I WISH I CUD.......
wow gr8 gr8 .....very touchy .......nice sharing..
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Old 18-08-2008, 01:45 PM
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bohot shukriaaaa..........thnxxxxxx to all of yaaaaaaaa.........
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Old 18-08-2008, 02:05 PM
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so sorry ....actually mein holidays k liye PIND gai hoi thi na..abhi aye tu reply kiaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa............
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so sorry ....actually mein holidays k liye PIND gai hoi thi na..abhi aye tu reply kiaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa............
lolzzzz ,apkay PIND main internet nhi hae kia????
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so sorry ....actually mein holidays k liye PIND gai hoi thi na..abhi aye tu reply kiaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa............
chalo kar to diya na:)
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lolzzzz ,apkay PIND main internet nhi hae kia????
ab Holidays mein b net use keroun tobahhhhhhhhhhhhh wanted to enjoy my

holidays .................. wasay us pind mein tau light b nahi thi an germi

itni k uffffffffffffffffffffffffffff tobah.......
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chalo kar to diya na:)
roz a k yehi check karta tha main

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh mujay kiya pata tha k itna wait kero gay ...werna mein

aek PATTER snd ker deti forum walon ko ka yeh reply hay d2d k liye....
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Old 19-08-2008, 08:58 PM
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ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh mujay kiya pata tha k itna wait kero gay ...werna mein

aek PATTER snd ker deti forum walon ko ka yeh reply hay d2d k liye....
pata rakhna chahiyeh tha na apko chaliyen choriye ap a gye yehi kafi acha kiya forum walon ko nai diya pattar awain jealous hoty kesa rha ap ka trip
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pata rakhna chahiyeh tha na apko chaliyen choriye ap a gye yehi kafi acha kiya forum walon ko nai diya pattar awain jealous hoty kesa rha ap ka trip

trip waz fyn bt it waz 222222 hot dere so dint enjoy dat much......r u on vacation?
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trip waz fyn bt it waz 222222 hot dere so dint enjoy dat much......r u on vacation?
kyun wahan light b nai thi kia thn hath waly fan le jati ap ajkal to wohi in hain main kuch karun b ya na karun phr b vocation pe hi rehta hoOn
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Ufffffffffff My GOD.. My Eyes...Itni Jalaannn kyun horhi hai.. like i wctng LAWAA..
mamaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.. i cnt c anything.asa lag raha hai kisi nay type nai kia balkay keray makoray hain jo choray hay hain..
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Ufffffffffff My GOD.. My Eyes...Itni Jalaannn kyun horhi hai.. like i wctng LAWAA..
mamaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.. i cnt c anything.asa lag raha hai kisi nay type nai kia balkay keray makoray hain jo choray hay hain..
uff koi hai jo hatyee isayyyyyyy..


Maaaaaaaaam yeh jo kuch ap nay fermaya hay kia ezi wrds mein keh sakti

hein kay ap kia kehna chah rahi hein.........u knw me naaaaaaaaa

mein seedhi sadi an seedhi baat hi samjh mein ati hay .......

so can u translate it plzzzzzzzzz
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Many thxxxxxxx Hasan..........
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