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maut sa khaamosh hey ..wo bhi ab meri tarah!!
 
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maut sa khaamosh hey ..wo bhi ab meri tarah!!

chaar suu hey ghup andhera … bas ik sisakta sa diya
her guzartey pal mey merta … jalta buujhta sa diya,

raat si tanhaee mey .. ik bas ussi ka tu saath tha!
jaaney kis pal kho diya … main ney thirakta sa diya,

na wo ab hiddat rahi … kho jagmagahut bhi gaee
kis qadar pur josh tha … wo her pal bharakta sa diya,

zakhm zakhm hokey bhi.. hum dono ab nahi rootey
chupkey idhar main sulagti ..udhar wo sulagta sa diya,

maut sa khaamosh hey ..wo bhi ab meri tarah!!
tha kabhi is dil ki manind ...jo dharakta sa diya,

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very nice:)
i instantly liked this poem when i read it first time in the contest:)
very nicely put sis:)......

maut sa khaamosh hey ..wo bhi ab meri tarah!!
tha kabhi is dil ki manind ...jo dharakta sa diya
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very very nicee......

buhut hi achi hai ..

thanx for sharing :)
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zakhm zakhm hokey bhi.. hum dono ab nahi rootey
chupkey idhar main sulagti ..udhar wo sulagta sa diya,

maut sa khaamosh hey ..wo bhi ab meri tarah!!
tha kabhi is dil ki manind ...jo dharakta sa diya

ZABERDAST SIS REALLY NICE.....
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very nice:)
i instantly liked this poem when i read it first time in the contest:)
very nicely put sis:)......

maut sa khaamosh hey ..wo bhi ab meri tarah!!
tha kabhi is dil ki manind ...jo dharakta sa diya
thts nice to know :) thanks for the encouragement Nadeem Bhai
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very very nicee......

buhut hi achi hai ..

thanx for sharing :)
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zakhm zakhm hokey bhi.. hum dono ab nahi rootey
chupkey idhar main sulagti ..udhar wo sulagta sa diya,

maut sa khaamosh hey ..wo bhi ab meri tarah!!
tha kabhi is dil ki manind ...jo dharakta sa diya

ZABERDAST SIS REALLY NICE.....
u mean ur calling me Zabardast Sis na!! :) ok really thankful for liking it :)
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:)) ................. I knew :)
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chaar suu hey ghup andhera … bas ik sisakta sa diya
her guzartey pal mey merta … jalta buujhta sa diya,

raat si tanhaee mey .. ik bas ussi ka tu saath tha!
jaaney kis pal kho diya … main ney thirakta sa diya,

na wo ab hiddat rahi … kho jagmagahut bhi gaee
kis qadar pur josh tha … wo her pal bharakta sa diya,

zakhm zakhm hokey bhi.. hum dono ab nahi rootey
chupkey idhar main sulagti ..udhar wo sulagta sa diya,

maut sa khaamosh hey ..wo bhi ab meri tarah!!
tha kabhi is dil ki manind ...jo dharakta sa diya,

................................. AQN ..................................
chaar suu hey ghup andhera … bas ik sisakta sa diya
her guzartey pal mey merta … jalta buujhta sa diya,

ufff... zbrdst.............

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ufff... zbrdst.............

keep sharing
:) I liked ur "Ufff zabardast" :) ............

keep encouraging and I'll keep posting :)
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Anyways Welcome to the Forum Chinto
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AQN Aap ki kaavish achhi hai.
specialy Ash'aar maiN jo mazmoon
Aap ne baandhhey hain..wo pasand
aaye....keep writing :)
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