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Write a shair on the word given below.....

in this thread u have to write a shair on the word which is given below,

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then write another word on which next member will write a shair...


so lets start...................

first word................


gham
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jo jana hai chalay jao......

magar ye dil q ab tak keh rha hai

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in this thread u have to write a shair on the word which is given below,

n


then write another word on which next member will write a shair...


so lets start...................

first word................


gham


Ghum utha loonga to aur sanwar jaaunga...
main teri zulf nahi hoon jo bikhar jaaunga...
jo bhi chahe bina maange de dena mujhko...
haanth failaunga to nazaron se utar jaaunga.....



Next WORD is BARISH
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Kharay hain khwab hathaili pe rakh kar

aur us main band hain wo jugnu lamhay

tumhari dastakain gum ho rhi hain

na aanay k bahanay dhoondhtay ho

samajhna hai, samajh jao

jo jana hai chalay jao......

magar ye dil q ab tak keh rha hai

zara thehr jao......zara thehr jao
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Re: Re: Write a shair on the word given below.....

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Ghum utha loonga to aur sanwar jaaunga...
main teri zulf nahi hoon jo bikhar jaaunga...
jo bhi chahe bina maange de dena mujhko...
haanth failaunga to nazaron se utar jaaunga.....



Next WORD is BARISH
in baarishon se dosti achi nahi Faraz
katcha tera makan hai kuch tu khyal kar


next word is BARSAAT
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Kharay hain khwab hathaili pe rakh kar

aur us main band hain wo jugnu lamhay

tumhari dastakain gum ho rhi hain

na aanay k bahanay dhoondhtay ho

samajhna hai, samajh jao

jo jana hai chalay jao......

magar ye dil q ab tak keh rha hai

zara thehr jao......zara thehr jao
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Tamam Mosmoom Per Aik Mosam Havi Hay
Tumhari Yaad Bin Barsat Barsata Hoa Mosam

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in baarishon se dosti achi nahi Faraz
katcha tera makan hai kuch tu khyal kar


next word is BARSAAT

Maza barsat ka chahoo tu in ankhoon main aa basoo
woh barsoo main kahien barsay yeh barsoon hi barasty hain


Next wors tanhai
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...tere ishq mein main qurban..."ju ho gaya woh ho gaya ...
ju ho raha hai usko honay dien ... aur ju hoga acha hoga ...
believe in ALLAH n urself"
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Tamam Umar Jiss Ki Rafaqat K Khoab Daikhay
Sonp Kar Chal Diya Wo Shakhs Hum Ko Tanhai
Or Ab To AIsay Hi Guzray Gee Zindagi "AHSAN"
Jiasay Qabr May Insaan Kay Sath Tanhai !

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Next Is "Lamhay"
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main heraan hon
ke lamhay kaise sadiyoon mein badalte hain
kisi table par rakhe phool se khusboo bagawat kar chuki hai
aur hathoo ne koi janbish nahi ki hai
aankhoon mein koi radd-e-amal ab tak nahi jaagha
kisi ke paas bethe chand lamhe hi hue hain
aur yeh mahsoos hota hai ke sadiyoon se kisi naraz pathar ki rafaqat hai
na-jane kitni sadiyoon se yaha par wakt tahra hai
hawaa apne paroo ko khol kar oonchay darakhtoo par khari hai
dhund chandar mein lipti khamoshi lay ban gaii hai
sooraj ki haraarat kho gaii hai
kisi ki chaap ubharti hai to fitrat chonk uth-ti hai
hawaa ke ik jhonke se bohat se zawiye ghamgeen nigahoo ko trawat de rahe hain
main hairaan hon ke
lamhay kaise sadiyoon mien badalte hain...."


next


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...tere ishq mein main qurban..."ju ho gaya woh ho gaya ...
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believe in ALLAH n urself"
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main heraan hon
ke lamhay kaise sadiyoon mein badalte hain
kisi table par rakhe phool se khusboo bagawat kar chuki hai
aur hathoo ne koi janbish nahi ki hai
aankhoon mein koi radd-e-amal ab tak nahi jaagha
kisi ke paas bethe chand lamhe hi hue hain
aur yeh mahsoos hota hai ke sadiyoon se kisi naraz pathar ki rafaqat hai
na-jane kitni sadiyoon se yaha par wakt tahra hai
hawaa apne paroo ko khol kar oonchay darakhtoo par khari hai
dhund chandar mein lipti khamoshi lay ban gaii hai
sooraj ki haraarat kho gaii hai
kisi ki chaap ubharti hai to fitrat chonk uth-ti hai
hawaa ke ik jhonke se bohat se zawiye ghamgeen nigahoo ko trawat de rahe hain
main hairaan hon ke
lamhay kaise sadiyoon mien badalte hain...."


next


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dil-e-wahshi ki khawhish hai tumhare darr par aane ki
deewana hai liken baat kahta hai thikane ki
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dil-e-wahshi ki khawhish hai tumhare darr par aane ki
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the next word is Lamhe
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udas logon se pyar karna koi tau seekhay

sufaid lamhon main rang bharna koi tau seekhay
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aur us main band hain wo jugnu lamhay

tumhari dastakain gum ho rhi hain

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jo jana hai chalay jao......

magar ye dil q ab tak keh rha hai

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Kharay hain khwab hathaili pe rakh kar

aur us main band hain wo jugnu lamhay

tumhari dastakain gum ho rhi hain

na aanay k bahanay dhoondhtay ho

samajhna hai, samajh jao

jo jana hai chalay jao......

magar ye dil q ab tak keh rha hai

zara thehr jao......zara thehr jao
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next>>>>>>>>>>>>charagh

Ik chiragh dil mein jalana bhi bujha bhi dena
Yad karna bhi usay roz bhula bhi dena
Kya kahun ye meri chahat hai ek nafrat uski
Nam likhna bhi mera likh ke mita bhi dena.
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Ik chiragh dil mein jalana bhi bujha bhi dena
Yad karna bhi usay roz bhula bhi dena
Kya kahun ye meri chahat hai ek nafrat uski
Nam likhna bhi mera likh ke mita bhi dena.
nice sis


but u dint give the nxt word
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Kharay hain khwab hathaili pe rakh kar

aur us main band hain wo jugnu lamhay

tumhari dastakain gum ho rhi hain

na aanay k bahanay dhoondhtay ho

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jo jana hai chalay jao......

magar ye dil q ab tak keh rha hai

zara thehr jao......zara thehr jao
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ok m writing a sher on KHWAB


MAIN US KO DEKHTA REHTA HOON FASILE SE FAQAT
WOH MERA KHWAB HAI AUR KHWAB TOOT JATA HAI



the next word is

ISHQ
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ishq ne seekh he li wakt ki takseem k ab

wo muje yad tau ata hai magar kaam k bad



"dil"
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tumhari dastakain gum ho rhi hain

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jo jana hai chalay jao......

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Dil sambhal jaye ga is ka muje andaza hai
bat ye hai ke mera zakham abhi taza hai.






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shakhon se phool, phool se khushbu juda na ho

abad shehr-r-dil main koi doosra na ho

yuoun khoye taer yaad main khud ko bhula diya

k jese khud ko khud se koi wasta na ho




jafa...
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jo jana hai chalay jao......

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