[notxtra]

Originally posted by miss_y_81
ghaliban is shair main "hum" ki jagah "tum" hai

nahi, yeh hum hi hai..... dobara parhiye aur sochiye keh kia kaha hai poet nay......?

[miss_y_81]

Originally posted by notxtra
its cheating....... aik hi ghazal ko bar bar .................!!!

xcuse me.....thread ka topic hai....write a shair

so i think aisa kiya ja sakta hai.....

[Amial Khan]

Originally posted by miss_y_81
chalain ab yahan tau aap se mulakat hoti rahay geeeeeee

Zaroor...mujhay nahi maloom tha k aap ko bhi poetry ka shoq ha...woh tu is thread say pata chala

[miss_y_81]

Originally posted by notxtra


nahi, yeh hum hi hai..... dobara parhiye aur sochiye keh kia kaha hai poet nay......?

chalain aap kehtay hain tau maan lete hain..................

[Amial Khan]

Bohat Dinon Say Nahi Apnay Darmeyaan Wo Shaks
Udass Kar Kay Hamey Chal Deya Kahan Wo Shaks

Wo Jis Kay Naqhs-E-Kadam Say Charagh Jalte Thay
Jalay Charagh Tu Khud Ban Gaya Dhowan Wo Shaks

[notxtra]

uss aik shakhs main thiin dil-rubaaiyaan kya kya
hazaar log milain gay magar kahan woh shakhs

chupaa liya jisay pat-jharr kay zard patton nay
abhi talak hai baharon peh hukmraan woh shakhs

[t3xPeRt]

Umeed-e-wisl bhi Amjad hai kanch ki chori
k pehn-ney mein kai bar toto jati hai

(pls dont make any correction to this.......coz abhi mujhey esa hi yaad hai...agr koi correction hoi to i'll make tmrw..)

[t3xPeRt]

Gair lagta hai na apno ki tarah milta hai,
Tu zamanay ki tarah mujko sataata kyon hai!

Waqt kay saath khayalaat badal jaatay hain,
Yeh haqeeqat hai magar mujko sunaata kyon hai!

[t3xPeRt]

chup chap tamasha daikhay ga,bolla tha zamana theek nahin
khamoosh sitaroon ko takna or deep jalana theek nahin
main ulty sidhy batoon say hud ko behla loon gy lakin
milna he nahin too such bollo, furssat ka bahana theek nahin

[notxtra]

Adab ki baat hay warna muneer socho to
Jo shaks sunta hay, woh bol bhi to sakta hay

[Amial Khan]

Darakht-a-jaan pay ajeeb rut thi na barg jagay na phool aaiea
Bahar waadi say jitnay panchi idhar aaiea ma'alool aaiea
Woh sari khushiyan jo is nay cahi utha k jhooli main apni rakh li
Humaray hissay main azar aaiea,jawaz aaiea,assool aaiea

[Haya_Khan]

Ta'ajub kia agar Iqbal duniya mujhe say na'khush hai
Bohat say log duniya mein pasandida nahi hotay

[miss_y_81]

andhairi rat main rehtay tau kitna acha tha

hum apni zat main rehtay tau kitna acha tha

ghamon ne cheen liya hai hamain tumharay bad

tumharay hath main rehtay tau kitna acha tha

[miss_y_81]

tum ne dekha hai wo chehra, wo rukhsaar, wo hont

zindagi jis k tasawwur main luta di hum nae

[miss_y_81]

jin k ghar main ameeri ka shajar lagta hai

unka har aib zamanay ko hunar lagta hai

maa muje dekh k naraz na ho jaye kaheen

sar pe aanchal nahi hota hai tau dar lagta hai

[notxtra]

ujjrrray howay logon say guraizaan na howa kar
halaat ki qabron kay yeh katbay bhi parha karrrr

har waqt ka hansna tujhay barbaad na kar day
tanhaii key lamhon main kabhi ro bhi liya kar

[miss_y_81]

wo ashk bun k mere chashm-e-tar main rehta hai

ajeeb shakhs hai pani k ghar main rehta hai

[miss_y_81]

in barishon se dosti achi nahi faraz

kacha tera makan hai kuch tau khyal kar

[notxtra]

Originally posted by miss_y_81
wo ashk bun k mere chashm-e-tar main rehta hai

ajeeb shakhs hai pani k ghar main rehta hai

ashk ki jageh aks hai.... aap bhi kahian gi meray her shair ki correction karni zaroori hai

[miss_y_81]

Originally posted by notxtra


ashk ki jageh aks hai.... aap bhi kahian gi meray her shair ki correction karni zaroori hai

g nahi main ye nahi kahoon ge....


bcoz ghalti jo correct kar di jaye doobara nhai hoti........thanks