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09-12-2004, 07:19 PM
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| jo baat hey chhupaaney ki woh bataney ko dil karey jo baat hey chupaaney ki, who bataaney ko dil karey her raaz pey gira jo perdah hey, uthaaney ko dil karey, woh shakhs jo jaan leta hey bin kahey hi dil ki baat us sey phir bhi roothney, manaaney ko dil karey, her lab khulein tu bas, hamara hi zikr ho aur her dil mey bas yunhi, samaaney ko dil karey, her rah ka jo hamsafer hey, jab saath chaley apney tu haathoon mey haath, qadm sey qadm milaaney ko dil karey, dil ki baatein dil hi jaaney, kia kia yeh kerwata hey kisi piyaar kerney waaley ko akser, sataaney ko dil karey, khoobsurat dikhney wala her saraab bulata hey us saraab ko hi manzil, banaaney ko dil karey, ......................................rights reserved................................
__________________ ........................................ little changes bring the BIG ones ... so let's get changed right from the individual level to change the whole picture Verbal Impression lasts longer n matters more than Visual Impression so be thoughtful about it ...........AQUARIAN...........  |
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10-12-2004, 12:43 AM
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| nice!!
__________________ Kya Ishq Ne Samjha Hay,, Kya Husn Ne Jana Hay,, Hum Khaak Nasheenon Ki Thokar Main Zamana Hay!!!!! |
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10-12-2004, 04:45 PM
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| thanx @optimistic
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10-12-2004, 08:31 PM
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__________________ ~*~A life is like a tree -- if you don't make it straight when its young and green, you'll never do it when it's old and dry.~*~ <*><*><*><*><*><*><*><*><*><*><*><*><*><*> ~*~The woods are lovely, dark and deep. But I have promises to keep, and miles to go before I sleep.~*~ <*><*><*><*><*><*><*><*><*><*><*><*><*><*>  |
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12-12-2004, 05:31 PM
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| thanx @ lil dil
__________________ ........................................ little changes bring the BIG ones ... so let's get changed right from the individual level to change the whole picture Verbal Impression lasts longer n matters more than Visual Impression so be thoughtful about it ...........AQUARIAN........... |
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16-07-2008, 03:44 PM
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| Assume Poem re-posted :)
__________________ ........................................ little changes bring the BIG ones ... so let's get changed right from the individual level to change the whole picture Verbal Impression lasts longer n matters more than Visual Impression so be thoughtful about it ...........AQUARIAN........... |
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16-07-2008, 06:37 PM
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| very nice.........
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16-07-2008, 10:44 PM
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| jo baat hey chupaaney ki, who bataaney ko dil karey her raaz pey gira jo perdah hey, uthaaney ko dil karey, woh shakhs jo jaan leta hey bin kahey hi dil ki baat us sey phir bhi roothney, manaaney ko dil karey, Buhat Khoob 
__________________  Qurb k na wafa k hotey hein sarey jhagrey ana k hotey hein wo hamarey hein is tarha se Faiz jesey bandey Khuda k hotey hein bat niayt ki sirf hey werna waqt sarey Dua k hotey hein bhool jatey hein mat bura kehna log putley khata k hotey hein wo bazahir jo kuch nahi lagtey un se rishtey balaa k hotey hein |
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17-07-2008, 08:51 AM
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17-07-2008, 08:53 AM
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__________________ ........................................ little changes bring the BIG ones ... so let's get changed right from the individual level to change the whole picture Verbal Impression lasts longer n matters more than Visual Impression so be thoughtful about it ...........AQUARIAN........... |
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17-07-2008, 05:20 PM
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| jo baat hey chupaaney ki, who bataaney ko dil karey her raaz pey gira jo perdah hey, uthaaney ko dil karey, woh shakhs jo jaan leta hey bin kahey hi dil ki baat us sey phir bhi roothney, manaaney ko dil karey, REALLY NICE SIS:)
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17-07-2008, 09:43 PM
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| Thankss Rija :))
__________________ ........................................ little changes bring the BIG ones ... so let's get changed right from the individual level to change the whole picture Verbal Impression lasts longer n matters more than Visual Impression so be thoughtful about it ...........AQUARIAN........... |
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17-07-2008, 09:50 PM
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| Sis yeh apne khud likhii hai ?? 
__________________ Qurb k na wafa k hotey hein sarey jhagrey ana k hotey hein wo hamarey hein is tarha se Faiz jesey bandey Khuda k hotey hein bat niayt ki sirf hey werna waqt sarey Dua k hotey hein bhool jatey hein mat bura kehna log putley khata k hotey hein wo bazahir jo kuch nahi lagtey un se rishtey balaa k hotey hein |
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18-07-2008, 01:06 AM
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| jee Savera :) ...( for a moment, I thought ye aik msg pari k msg k baad mujh sey miss hogeya but next mmoment I realized ki u basically changed ur nick ... for sum reason i guess) yahan jitni bhi poems I post, are all mine :) ... isi leyey I say ki if someone like to suggest me something where I lack, one can say anything frankly :) ...theek hey na!!
__________________ ........................................ little changes bring the BIG ones ... so let's get changed right from the individual level to change the whole picture Verbal Impression lasts longer n matters more than Visual Impression so be thoughtful about it ...........AQUARIAN........... Last edited by AQN; 18-07-2008 at 01:08 AM. |
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18-07-2008, 10:06 AM
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| hmmmmmmm Sis, Savera is back :$.. jee sis is poetry ki aik aik line aur apke rights reserved ko dekh ke lag gaya tha ke aapki hey magar yeh normal section mai thee isliye pucha :) becuase apki sari likhii howi poetries "your Own Poetry" sections mai hoti hain isliye :). mai soch rahi thee aap isko wahan move karwan den us section mai if u want to :) buhat acha likhti hain app Masha ALLAH :)
__________________ Qurb k na wafa k hotey hein sarey jhagrey ana k hotey hein wo hamarey hein is tarha se Faiz jesey bandey Khuda k hotey hein bat niayt ki sirf hey werna waqt sarey Dua k hotey hein bhool jatey hein mat bura kehna log putley khata k hotey hein wo bazahir jo kuch nahi lagtey un se rishtey balaa k hotey hein |
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18-07-2008, 11:45 AM
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| good to see Savera back with lil change ... :) oh yeaa! ...since it was posted yrs back and then, I had a feeling that one can post own poetry section wise as well :) like as per topic ... phir pata chala ki ppl used that just for other's stuff ... tu bas is leyey ... old postings are in every section while now I just post in Your Own Poetry ... rights reserved thing!! ...lol ... wo bas waisey hi, I came across with some of my poems posted at poetrypk with someone's else name :) so bas started writing this underneath though I wasn't bothered exactly :) n BTW is tarah sarahney ka bohat shukriya savera :)
__________________ ........................................ little changes bring the BIG ones ... so let's get changed right from the individual level to change the whole picture Verbal Impression lasts longer n matters more than Visual Impression so be thoughtful about it ...........AQUARIAN........... |
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