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mirzakamran 2 14.29%
asjad_pisces 2 14.29%
Amial_khan 2 14.29%
Aisha khan 5 35.71%
minal 18 0 0%
notxtra 0 0%
Aashir Jani 1 7.14%
~pari~ 1 7.14%
Nain Tara 0 0%
Rider of Success 0 0%
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V-o-t-i-n-g For THe Best Poetry of Parveen Shakir
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Old 15-05-2008, 12:00 AM
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V-o-t-i-n-g For THe Best Poetry of Parveen Shakir

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Poetry of Parveen Shakir, shared by members:

Mirzakamran:




asjad_pisces:

Kamal e zabt ko khud bhi to azamaungi
Main apane hath se us ki dulhan sajaungi

Supurd kar ke use chandani ke hathon
Main apane ghar ke andheron ko laut aungi

Badan ke karb ko wo bhi samajh na payega
Main dil may roungi ankhon may muskuraungi

Wo kya gaya ke rafaqat ke sare lutf gaye
Main kis se ruth sakungi kise manaungi

Wo ik rishta e benam bhi nahi lekin
Main ab bhi us ke isharon pe sar jhukaungi

Bicha diya tha gulabon ke sath apana wajud
Wo so ke uthe to khwabon ki rakh uthaungi

Ab us ka fan to kisi aur se manasub hua
Main kis ki nazm akele may gungunaungi

Jawaz dhundh raha tha nai muhabbat ka
Wo kah raha tha ke main us ko bhul jaungi

Sama`aton may ghane jangalon ki sansen hain
Main ab kabhi teri awaz sun na paungi



Amial_khan:



Aisha_khan:


minal_18:

Is nay dekha hie nahin warna yeh ank
Dil ka ahwaal kaha kartei hai

Mashafay dil pay ajab rungoon main
Ek tasveer bana kartei hai

Bay nayaaz kafey darya ungisht
Rayete par naam likha kartei hai

Dekh tu aan k chehra mera
Ek nazar bhi teri kya kartei hai

Zindagi bhar kie yeh takheer apni
Runjh milnay ka sawa kartei hai

Shaam partay hei kisie shakh kie yaad
Koocha e jaan main sada kartei hai

Masla jub bhi charaghoon ka utha
Faisala sirf huwa kartei hai

Mujh say hie hai is ka waisa salook
Haal jo tera anaa kartei hai

Dukh huwa karta hai kuch aur bayaan
Baat kuch aur huwa kartei hai

Ek hunar tha ,kamaal tha ,kya tha
Mujh main tera jamaal tha kya tha

Teray janay par ab k kuch na kaha
Dil main darr tha, malaal tha kya tha

Barq nay mujh ko kar diya roshan
Tera aks laal tha kya tha


notxtra:



Aashir_Jani:

ab kaisi parda daari , khabar aam ho chuki
maa ki rida tu din howe neelam ho chuki

ab aasmaa.n sey chadar-e shab aay bhi tu kiya
be-chadari zameen pe ilzaam ho chuki

ujrey howe diyaar pe phir kyu nigah hai
is kasht pe tu barish-e ikraam ho chuki

soraj bhi us ko dhondh k wapas chala gaya
ab hum bhi ghar ko lout chalain shaam ho chuki

shimley sanbhaltey hi rahey maslehat passand
hona tha jis ko piyaar main bad-naam ho chuki

aankhain hain a ur subha talak tera intezaar
mishal bad'dast raat terey naam ho chuki

koh-e nida sey bhi sukhan utrey agar tu kiya
na-sameoo.n main hurmat-e ilhaam ho chuki


~pari~:



Nain_Tara:

raat ki raani ki khushboo se koi ye keh de
aaj ki shab na mere paas aaye
aaj taskeen'e mashaam'e jaan ko dil ke zakhmon ki mehek kafi hai
ye mehek aaj sare shaam hi jaag uthi hai
ab yeh bheegi hui bojhal palkein
aur namnaak udaas ankhein liye
ratjaga aise manain gi ke khud bhi jage
aur pal bher ko main bhi na sone paon,
Deo'malai fasanon ki kisi muntazir'e mosam'e gul raajkumaari ki khizan bakht
dukhi rooh ki manind
bhatakne ke liye
koo ba koo abr'e pareshaan ki terha
jaye gi
door uftadah samander ke kinare bethi
pehron us simt takey gi jahan se aksar
us ke gum'gashtah jaziron ki hawa aati hai
gaye mosam ki shanasa khushboo
yoon rag'o pay main uterti hai
ke jaise koi chamkila rupehla sayyal
jism main aise saraiyet ker jai
jese sehraon ki sheryanon main
pehli barish
gher mehsoos sarosh'e nikhat
zehen ke haat main woh ism hai
jis ki dastak
yaad ke band darichon ko bari narmi se
aise khole gi ke aangan mera
har dariche ki alag khushboo se
rang dar rang chalak jaye ga,
yeh dil'aawaiz khazane mere
mere piyaron ki ataa bhi hain
mere dil ki kamaii bhi hain
in ke hote huey auron ki zaroorat kia hai
raat ki raani ki khushboo se koi yeh keh de
aaj ki shab na mere paas aaye.....


Rider Of Success:

paa-ba-gil sab hain rehai ki kare tadbir kaun
dast basta shahar mein khole meri zanjir kaun

mera sar hazir hai lekin mera munsif dekh le
kar raha hai mere fard-e-jurm ki tabeer kaun

aaj darvaazon pe dastak jaani pahchani si hai
aaj mere naam laata hai meri taazir kaun

neend jab Khuwabon se pyari ho to aise ehad mein
Khuwabb dekhe kaun aur Khuwabon ko de taabeer kaun

ret abhi pichle makanon ki na vapas aai thi
phir lab-e-sahil gharaunda kar gaya tamir kaun

saare rishte hijraton mein saath dete hain to phir
shahar se jaate hue hotaa hai daamangeer kaun

meri chaadar to cheeni thi shaam ki tanhai ne
beridai ko meri phir de gayaa tashaheer kaun

dushmanon ke saath mere dost bhi aazad hain
dekhna hai khenchta hai mujh pe pahla teer kaun

MaYa.000:

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AnkhOn ki cEEpi mEin khwabOn kay mOti hain...
mOti TarrastaY hain,pYaar kaY liY...
Kabhi sOcha hAi kYa...???

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Aisha_khan:

superb choice its really awesome...
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Maine Hawwa K Paron K Likha Hai
Deewane Dil Ka Fasana

Tu Ne Padha K Nahin Janejana
Mil K Mujhe Batlana





Meri Adhuri Muhabbat ......


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Suno!
Tum Azm Walay Ho
Bala Ka Zabt Rakhtay Ho
Tumhain Kuch Bhi Nahi Hoga
Magar Dekho
Jisay Tum Chhoray Jatay Ho
Usay Tou Theek Se Shayad
Bichharna Bhi Nahi Aata
Suno!
Tum Azam Walay Ho
Usay Matt Chhor Ke Jao

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What a lovely sin
All alone at least for now
I wish i could run but I dont know how?

Only once the lies consumed her
Its never ending flames slowly burning
Another time once lost & another tear fell
One more night of pure pained hell

Alone in her room
She wants to run away
This life is too wierd
Its to much for her to take

A simple girl
In a lonley world, nobody notices
But she cries inside
And nobody sees her because she hides

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Chah kar bhi na palat pao, itne duur mat jana

Ye fasley har rabta bhi phir torr dain
Mere bad tum mujhe bolao, itne duur mat jana

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K Uss k Aangan Mein Phool Par Ik Neeli Titli Mari Hui Hay

Kabhi Azanoo Mein Khoyi Khoyi,Kabhi Namazoo Mein Royi Royi
Vo Aisy Dunya Ko Dekhti Hay k Jaisy Iss Se Dari Hui Hay

Darood Se Mehki Mehki Saansein,Wazifa Parhti Uss Ki Aankhein
K Ik Shamma-e-Umeed Un Mein Kayi Baras Se Dhari Hui Hay

Baray Zamanoon k Bad Barsi Hay Meri Aankhein Kisi Ki Khatir
Baray Zamanoon k Bad Dil Ki Zameen Phir Se Hari Hui Hay...


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