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Polling 4 February Poetry Competition

Assalam O Alikum

Is month ka toppic tha "Bicharna".............aur ab Voting k zariya winner ka naam ka selection karain gain...............Lakin post karnay say pehlay in rules ko zaroor follow karain

1. Members khud ko vote nahi day saktay nahi tou un ka vote cancel kar dia jaye ga

2.Voting ki last date 2nd March hai.

Best of Luck Members..

asjad_pices

titliyun k mosam mein nochna gulabun ka
reet is nagar ki hai aur janay kab se hai
dekh kr parindun ko baandhna nishanun ka
reet is nagar ki hai aur janay kab se hai

shaher ka yeh bashinda, nafratun ko boo kar bhi
intizaar kartay hain, fasal ho mohabbat ki
bhool kar hakeekat ko, dhoondna suraboon ka
reet is nagar ki hai aur janay kab se hai

tum abhi naya ho na, issi liya pareshan ho
aasmaan ki janib, is tarha mat dekho
aaftain jab aani hoon, tootna sitaroon ka
reet is nagar ki hai aur janay kab se hai

khamoshi mera shaiwa, guftagoo hunar un ka
meri be-gunahi ko loog kesay maanein ge
baat baat par maangna jawabun ka
reet is nagar ki hai aur janay kab se hai

ajnabi fizaon mein, ajnabi musafir sa
apne har ta'alluq ko daimee bana lana
bicharna jab uska tu maangna duaon ka
reet is nagar ki hai aur janay kab se hai...

I Am In Love

Dukh Bicharnay Ka Nahi
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Dukh Bicharnay Ka Nahi

Balkay Un Rishto Kay

Tootnay Ka Hota Hay

Jo Barsoo Ke Rafaqat Kay Baad

Pal Bhar Main Toot Jatay Hain

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notxtra

Ab Jo Bichre Hain To Ehsas Howa Hai Hum Ko
Dard Kiya Hota Hai ,Tanhai Kise Kehte Hain
Char Su Goonjti Ruswai Kise Kehte Hain
Ab Jo Bichre Hain To Ehsas Howa Hai Hum Ko

Koi Lamha Ho Teri Yad Mein Kho Jate Hian
Ab To Khud Ko Bhi Muyassar Nahin Aa Pate Hain
Rat Ho Din Ho Tere Piyar Mein Hum Behte Hain
Dard Kiya Hota Hai Tanhai Kise Kehte Hain
Ab Jo Bichre Hain To Ehsas Howa Hai Hum Ko

Jo Bhi Ghum Aaye Usay Dil Peh Saha Karte Thay
Aik Wo Waqt Tha Hum Mil Ke Raha Karte Thay
Ab Akele Hi Zamane Ke Sitam Sehte Hain
Dard Kiya Hota Hai Tanahi Kise Kehte Hain
Ab Jo Bichre Hain To Ehsas Howa Hai Hum Ko

Hum Ne Khud Apne Hi Raste Mein Bichaye Kante
Ghar Mein Phoolon Ki Jaga La ke Sajaye Kante
Zakham Is Dil Mein Basaye Hoay Khud Rehte Hain
Dard Kiya Hota Hai Tanhai Kise Kehte Hain
Ab Jo Bichre Hain To Ehsas Howa Hai Hum Ko

Yoon To Duniya Ki Her Ek Cheez Haseen Hoti Hai
Piyar Se Barh Ke Mager Koi Nahin Hoti Hai
Rasta Rok Ke Her Ek Se Yehi Kehte Hain
Dard Kiya Hota Hai Tanhai Kise Kehte Hain
Char Su Goonjti Ruswai kise Kehte Hain
Ab Jo Bichre Hain To Ehsas Howa Hai Hum ko

Amial Khan

Bicharne walay
Chalay jo ho to bata k jao
K kitni shaamein udaas aankhon main kaat-ni hein
K kitni subhain akelay pann mein guzaarni hein
Bata k jao k kitne sooraj..azaab rastoon ko dekhna hai
K kitne mehtaab..sarrd raatoon ki wus-at-ton se nikaalne hein
Bata k jao k chaand raatoon mein waqt kaise guzaarna hai
Khamosh lamhoon mein tujh ko kitna pukaarna hai
Bata k jao k kitne lamhay shumaar karne hein hijj ratoon kay
K kitne mousam aik aik kar k judaiyoon mein guzaarne hein
Bata k jao k panchiyoon ne akele pann ka sabbab jo poocha
Tou kaya kahoon ga?
Bata k jao ..main kis se tera gilla karoon ga
Bicharr kay tujh se habbib..kis se mila karoon ga
Bata k jao k aankh barsi to kon moutii chuna karay ga
Udaas lamhoon mein dil ki dharkan suna karay ga
Bata k jao k mousamoon ko payaam dene hein ya nahee hain
Fallk ko,taroon ko,jugnooon ko salaam dene hein ya nahee hain
Bata k jao k kis pe hai aitebaar karna
To kis ki baatoon pe be-niyazi kay silsale ikhtiyaar karna
Bata k jao k abb ravviyoon ki chaal kiya ho
Jawaab kiya ho,sawaal kiya ho
Arooj kiya ho,zawaal kiya ho
Nighah,rukhsaar,zulff,chehra ..nidhaal kiya ho
Bata k jao k meri haalatt pe chaandani khikhila pari tou main kiya karoon ga
Bata k jao k meri soorat pe tairgi muskara parri tou
Main kiya karoon ga
Bata k jao k tum ko kitna pukaarna hai
Bicharr k tujh se ye waqt kaise guzaarna hai
Ujaarna hai? nikhaarna hai?
Chalay jo ho tou bata kay jao
kay loutna bhi hai ya................????????


MaYa.000

~:Jab Din Guzar Rahey They:~
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Hum Tum Se Keh Rahe They,
Mushkil Hai ab Bichharna,
Or Door Tum se Rehna,
Tum Sun ke Hans Pari Thein,
Or Hum Se Ye kaha Tha ,
Hum Tum ko Bhool Jaen,
Tum ko Na Yaad Aaein ,
Sun ker Tumhari Batein ,
Hum Chup Se Ho Gaye They,
Phir Tum Bichhar Gaye They,
Tum Se Bichhar ke Hum Bhi,
Her Lamha Gin Rahey They,
Mausam Badal Rahey They,
Aur Hum ke Jal Rahey They,
Her Sans Thi ke sakat ,
Khushbu Bhi Aur Hi Thi,
Barish ka Pehla Qatra ,
Jab Bhi Gira Zameen Per,
Hum ko Lag Raha Tha,
Jungal Pighal Raha Tha,
Phir Hum Behal Gaye They,
Or Ho Gaye They Aadi,
Dunya Ki Mehfilon Ke ,
Ab Phir Se Mil Gaye Ho ,
Or Hum Se Keh Rahey Ho ,
MUSHKIL HAI AB BICHARNA,
AB DOOR TUM SE REHNA. !!!

savera

Is Raat Ki...Tanhayeeon K
Sab Rang Badal Gaye Hain
Chand Nikla Hai Waisay He
Andharay Badal Gaye Hain

Jin K Bharosay Theen Khushian
Woh Badal Thahar Gaye Hain
Manzilain To Ab Bhi Woh He Hain
Kuch Rastay Badal Gaye Hain

Jin Pe Kiya Tha Bharosa Hum Nay
Woh Dost Bichad Gaye Hain
Dekhay Thay Jo Hum Nay
Woh Khuwab Badal Gay Hain

Jo Banay Thay Kabhi Humsafar
Aaj Woh He Mukar Gaye Hain
Iss Tutay Huay Dil K Saray
Jazbaat Badal Gaye Hain

Na Badla Kabhi Zamana
Na Badley Zamane Ke Khayal
Bas Rona Hai Yehi
Kuch Log Badal Gaye Hain
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اے چشم فلک اے چشم زمیں ہم لوگ تو پھر آنے کے نہیں
دو چار گھڑی کا سپنا ہیں دو چار گھڑی کا خواب ہیں ہم
کیا اپنی حقیقت کیا ہستی’ مٹی کا ایک حباب ہیں ہم
دو چار گھڑی کا سپنا ہیں دو چار گھڑی کا خواب ہیں ہم۔۔


Life and death are different sides of the same coin

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Old 25-02-2008, 09:20 PM
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Rules main likha hai k poet ka naam likhna zaroory hai aur srf asjad mainay aur maya nay poet ka naam likha hai.. baki sab ki poetry tau cancel honi chahiye since unho nay rules ko follow hi nai kiya
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Amial Agar aap meri poetry cancel karna chahe tou kar sakti hain :)
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Meri bhi cancel nahi hoge kyun k mujhay pata hai k meri poetry k poet kon hia
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اے چشم فلک اے چشم زمیں ہم لوگ تو پھر آنے کے نہیں
دو چار گھڑی کا سپنا ہیں دو چار گھڑی کا خواب ہیں ہم
کیا اپنی حقیقت کیا ہستی’ مٹی کا ایک حباب ہیں ہم
دو چار گھڑی کا سپنا ہیں دو چار گھڑی کا خواب ہیں ہم۔۔


Life and death are different sides of the same coin
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Amial Agar aap meri poetry cancel karna chahe tou kar sakti hain :)
Savera pehlay bhi yahan poetry comp hue hain aur kisi nay rules follow nahi kia............so u don't worry :)
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اے چشم فلک اے چشم زمیں ہم لوگ تو پھر آنے کے نہیں
دو چار گھڑی کا سپنا ہیں دو چار گھڑی کا خواب ہیں ہم
کیا اپنی حقیقت کیا ہستی’ مٹی کا ایک حباب ہیں ہم
دو چار گھڑی کا سپنا ہیں دو چار گھڑی کا خواب ہیں ہم۔۔


Life and death are different sides of the same coin
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gr8 poetryzz guyzz
well sab k bht achay hai but
my vote goez 2
asjad...
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Rules main likha hai k poet ka naam likhna zaroory hai aur srf asjad mainay aur maya nay poet ka naam likha hai.. baki sab ki poetry tau cancel honi chahiye since unho nay rules ko follow hi nai kiya
Ap sahi keh rahi ho...par ab kya krian yeh tu amial sis hi decide krain g...me ko tu maya ki poetry k poet ka naam b nahi likha nazar aa raha wesay...
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gr8 poetryzz guyzz
well sab k bht achay hai but
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thanx q? mayne tumhe vote nai diya
ur poetryz ko diya smjhay lolzz
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thanx q? mayne tumhe vote nai diya
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haha surma dani bht taiz cheez ho tum ... main samajh gaya hoon fiqar not !!!
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haha surma dani bht taiz cheez ho tum ... main samajh gaya hoon fiqar not !!!
leh tumhe ab pata chala kia lolllz
acha theek m nt fiqr karing u dnt fiqr 2
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mainay khud ko vote kia hai

bro yeh rule no.1 parho

1. Members khud ko vote nahi day saktay nahi tou un ka vote cancel kar dia jaye ga


apka vote cancel ho gaya hai bro...
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sab ki poetryzz bahut achi hain
but mera vote savera k liye hai
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Rules Should be followed by every 1..
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Rules Should be followed by every 1..
& jis jis ko POet ka name pata hai to post keray..warna ... Poetry Cancel us ki.
hmm.....its Ok Anas ............Savera, I Am In love aur Maya nay jo poetry send ki hai un k poets ka naam nahi maloom ..........so 1st time ignore kar daitay hain :)
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دو چار گھڑی کا سپنا ہیں دو چار گھڑی کا خواب ہیں ہم
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دو چار گھڑی کا سپنا ہیں دو چار گھڑی کا خواب ہیں ہم۔۔


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