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14-02-2008, 10:05 PM
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1 Month k gap k baad POetry competition phir say start kia jata hai ............Humaray Dec k Competition ki winner Alveenathin aur rules k mutabik is Month k competition ka toppic bhi unhonay suggest kia hai .............Is month ka Toppic hai "Bicharna "
Rules
* Poetry jis poet ki ho us ka naam likhna zaroori hai.
* Competition main member sirf aik bar participate kar saktay Hian.
* Agar batay gaya toppic ya word ap ki poetry main kahi darmiyan main use hua ho tou ap usay highlight kar dain.
* Members Poetry repeate nahi kar saktay.
* Jo member winner hoga woh next month ka toppic select karay ga.
* Competition main participate karnay ki last date 24th Feb hai.
__________________ [IMG]  om/sfuk5f.gif[/IMG] اے چشم فلک اے چشم زمیں ہم لوگ تو پھر آنے کے نہیں
دو چار گھڑی کا سپنا ہیں دو چار گھڑی کا خواب ہیں ہم
کیا اپنی حقیقت کیا ہستی’ مٹی کا ایک حباب ہیں ہم
دو چار گھڑی کا سپنا ہیں دو چار گھڑی کا خواب ہیں ہم۔۔
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15-02-2008, 04:13 PM
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Originally Posted by Amial Khan  Assalam O Alikum Members
1 Month k gap k baad POetry competition phir say start kia jata hai ............Humaray Dec k Competition ki winner Alveenathin aur rules k mutabik is Month k competition ka toppic bhi unhonay suggest kia hai .............Is month ka Toppic hai "Bicharna "
Rules
* Poetry jis poet ki ho us ka naam likhna zaroori hai.
* Competition main member sirf aik bar participate kar saktay Hian.
* Agar batay gaya toppic ya word ap ki poetry main kahi darmiyan main use hua ho tou ap usay highlight kar dain.
* Members Poetry repeate nahi kar saktay.
* Jo member winner hoga woh next month ka toppic select karay ga.
* Competition main participate karnay ki last date 24th Feb hai. |
Walaikum Salam!!!
oh gr8 behna u started it again...well main jaldi se kisi achi c poetry k sath hazir hota hoon...
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15-02-2008, 04:28 PM
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Originally Posted by Amial Khan Assalam O Alikum Members
1 Month k gap k baad POetry competition phir say start kia jata hai ............Humaray Dec k Competition ki winner Alveenathin aur rules k mutabik is Month k competition ka toppic bhi unhonay suggest kia hai .............Is month ka Toppic hai "Bicharna "
Rules
* Poetry jis poet ki ho us ka naam likhna zaroori hai.
* Competition main member sirf aik bar participate kar saktay Hian.
* Agar batay gaya toppic ya word ap ki poetry main kahi darmiyan main use hua ho tou ap usay highlight kar dain.
* Members Poetry repeate nahi kar saktay.
* Jo member winner hoga woh next month ka toppic select karay ga.
* Competition main participate karnay ki last date 24th Feb hai. | ahan phir se wow  last time mai hisa nahi le sakii thee kisi waja se lekin is bar zaroor lo gi...Thanks sis 
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Dareechay Se Jhankti Vo Larki Ajeeb Dukh Se Bhari Hui Hay
K Uss k Aangan Mein Phool Par Ik Neeli Titli Mari Hui Hay
Kabhi Azanoo Mein Khoyi Khoyi,Kabhi Namazoo Mein Royi Royi
Vo Aisy Dunya Ko Dekhti Hay k Jaisy Iss Se Dari Hui Hay
Darood Se Mehki Mehki Saansein,Wazifa Parhti Uss Ki Aankhein
K Ik Shamma-e-Umeed Un Mein Kayi Baras Se Dhari Hui Hay
Baray Zamanoon k Bad Barsi Hay Meri Aankhein Kisi Ki Khatir
Baray Zamanoon k Bad Dil Ki Zameen Phir Se Hari Hui Hay...
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15-02-2008, 09:04 PM
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titliyun k mosam mein nochna gulabun ka
reet is nagar ki hai aur janay kab se hai
dekh kr parindun ko baandhna nishanun ka
reet is nagar ki hai aur janay kab se hai
shaher ka yeh bashinda, nafratun ko boo kar bhi
intizaar kartay hain, fasal ho mohabbat ki
bhool kar hakeekat ko, dhoondna suraboon ka
reet is nagar ki hai aur janay kab se hai
tum abhi naya ho na, issi liya pareshan ho
aasmaan ki janib, is tarha mat dekho
aaftain jab aani hoon, tootna sitaroon ka
reet is nagar ki hai aur janay kab se hai
khamoshi mera shaiwa, guftagoo hunar un ka
meri be-gunahi ko loog kesay maanein ge
baat baat par maangna jawabun ka
reet is nagar ki hai aur janay kab se hai
ajnabi fizaon mein, ajnabi musafir sa
apne har ta'alluq ko daimee bana lana
bicharna jab uska tu maangna duaon ka
reet is nagar ki hai aur janay kab se hai...
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15-02-2008, 10:08 PM
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Rep Power: 11 | | Asjad ..........poetry comp. ko members passand kartay hain isliya is ki wapsi zaroori thi :)
Savear........ab time pay participate kar laina kahi ab bhi dair na hojaye 
__________________ [IMG] om/sfuk5f.gif[/IMG] اے چشم فلک اے چشم زمیں ہم لوگ تو پھر آنے کے نہیں
دو چار گھڑی کا سپنا ہیں دو چار گھڑی کا خواب ہیں ہم
کیا اپنی حقیقت کیا ہستی’ مٹی کا ایک حباب ہیں ہم
دو چار گھڑی کا سپنا ہیں دو چار گھڑی کا خواب ہیں ہم۔۔
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15-02-2008, 10:17 PM
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Originally Posted by Amial Khan Asjad ..........poetry comp. ko members passand kartay hain isliya is ki wapsi zaroori thi :)
Savear........ab time pay participate kar laina kahi ab bhi dair na hojaye | hmm bilkul sahi behna...
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16-02-2008, 01:58 AM
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also rules
Muhje bi bata diya karo aisay achay achay thread
main Poetry paste kon se karo soch raha ho lolz |
16-02-2008, 10:34 AM
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gud to c the comp. thread  or topic b bht lash hey
AJJJJJJJJ..........u ney me ki poetry chura li  is leay ab me ko fir se soch k share kerna parey ga | | | |
16-02-2008, 11:59 AM
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Originally Posted by Amial Khan Assalam O Alikum Members
1 Month k gap k baad POetry competition phir say start kia jata hai ............Humaray Dec k Competition ki winner Alveenathin aur rules k mutabik is Month k competition ka toppic bhi unhonay suggest kia hai .............Is month ka Toppic hai "Bicharna "
Rules
* Poetry jis poet ki ho us ka naam likhna zaroori hai.
* Competition main member sirf aik bar participate kar saktay Hian.
* Agar batay gaya toppic ya word ap ki poetry main kahi darmiyan main use hua ho tou ap usay highlight kar dain.
* Members Poetry repeate nahi kar saktay.
* Jo member winner hoga woh next month ka toppic select karay ga.
* Competition main participate karnay ki last date 24th Feb hai. | walaikum assalam sis....yara jus one Question yani aik member sirf aik ghazal post ker sakta hai ?? did u mean that na??? plz tell i've never participated so i need ur assistance....
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16-02-2008, 12:13 PM
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Originally Posted by Texpert Appii Walaikum assalam :)
gud to c the comp. thread or topic b bht lash hey
AJJJJJJJJ..........u ney me ki poetry chura li is leay ab me ko fir se soch k share kerna parey ga | Haha.......waisay asjad nay jo poetry post ki hai main bhi wohi soach rahi thi bus thora late ho gaye :)
__________________ [IMG] om/sfuk5f.gif[/IMG] اے چشم فلک اے چشم زمیں ہم لوگ تو پھر آنے کے نہیں
دو چار گھڑی کا سپنا ہیں دو چار گھڑی کا خواب ہیں ہم
کیا اپنی حقیقت کیا ہستی’ مٹی کا ایک حباب ہیں ہم
دو چار گھڑی کا سپنا ہیں دو چار گھڑی کا خواب ہیں ہم۔۔
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16-02-2008, 12:13 PM
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Dukh Bicharnay Ka Nahi
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Dukh Bicharnay Ka Nahi
Balkay Un Rishto Kay
Tootnay Ka Hota Hay
Jo Barsoo Ke Rafaqat Kay Baad
Pal Bhar Main Toot Jatay Hain
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Jo Dhaga Tootnay Wala Ho Us Ko Torr Deta Hoon
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16-02-2008, 12:15 PM
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Originally Posted by freeek walaikum assalam sis....yara jus one Question yani aik member sirf aik ghazal post ker sakta hai ?? did u mean that na??? plz tell i've never participated so i need ur assistance.... | Yes Mehwish right .........aik member aik he poetry post kar sakta hai ........!!
__________________ [IMG] om/sfuk5f.gif[/IMG] اے چشم فلک اے چشم زمیں ہم لوگ تو پھر آنے کے نہیں
دو چار گھڑی کا سپنا ہیں دو چار گھڑی کا خواب ہیں ہم
کیا اپنی حقیقت کیا ہستی’ مٹی کا ایک حباب ہیں ہم
دو چار گھڑی کا سپنا ہیں دو چار گھڑی کا خواب ہیں ہم۔۔
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Originally Posted by mirzakamran Hmmm wow Amial very nice thread again
also rules
Muhje bi bata diya karo aisay achay achay thread
main Poetry paste kon se karo soch raha ho lolz | Thanks..............jo bhi post karo jaldii karna kahi dair an ho jaye aur award miss ho jaye
__________________ [IMG] om/sfuk5f.gif[/IMG] اے چشم فلک اے چشم زمیں ہم لوگ تو پھر آنے کے نہیں
دو چار گھڑی کا سپنا ہیں دو چار گھڑی کا خواب ہیں ہم
کیا اپنی حقیقت کیا ہستی’ مٹی کا ایک حباب ہیں ہم
دو چار گھڑی کا سپنا ہیں دو چار گھڑی کا خواب ہیں ہم۔۔
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Dard Kiya Hota Hai ,Tanhai Kise Kehte Hain
Char Su Goonjti Ruswai Kise Kehte Hain
Ab Jo Bichre Hain To Ehsas Howa Hai Hum Ko
Koi Lamha Ho Teri Yad Mein Kho Jate Hian
Ab To Khud Ko Bhi Muyassar Nahin Aa Pate Hain
Rat Ho Din Ho Tere Piyar Mein Hum Behte Hain
Dard Kiya Hota Hai Tanhai Kise Kehte Hain
Ab Jo Bichre Hain To Ehsas Howa Hai Hum Ko
Jo Bhi Ghum Aaye Usay Dil Peh Saha Karte Thay
Aik Wo Waqt Tha Hum Mil Ke Raha Karte Thay
Ab Akele Hi Zamane Ke Sitam Sehte Hain
Dard Kiya Hota Hai Tanahi Kise Kehte Hain
Ab Jo Bichre Hain To Ehsas Howa Hai Hum Ko
Hum Ne Khud Apne Hi Raste Mein Bichaye Kante
Ghar Mein Phoolon Ki Jaga La ke Sajaye Kante
Zakham Is Dil Mein Basaye Hoay Khud Rehte Hain
Dard Kiya Hota Hai Tanhai Kise Kehte Hain
Ab Jo Bichre Hain To Ehsas Howa Hai Hum Ko
Yoon To Duniya Ki Her Ek Cheez Haseen Hoti Hai
Piyar Se Barh Ke Mager Koi Nahin Hoti Hai
Rasta Rok Ke Her Ek Se Yehi Kehte Hain
Dard Kiya Hota Hai Tanhai Kise Kehte Hain
Char Su Goonjti Ruswai kise Kehte Hain
Ab Jo Bichre Hain To Ehsas Howa Hai Hum ko
[By: Wasi Shah]
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16-02-2008, 01:33 PM
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Originally Posted by Amial Khan Yes Mehwish right .........aik member aik he poetry post kar sakta hai ........!! | aah thanQ so much sis.... main zaroor post karoongi....
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16-02-2008, 01:43 PM
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Chalay jo ho to bata k jao
K kitni shaamein udaas aankhon main kaat-ni hein
K kitni subhain akelay pann mein guzaarni hein
Bata k jao k kitne sooraj..azaab rastoon ko dekhna hai
K kitne mehtaab..sarrd raatoon ki wus-at-ton se nikaalne hein
Bata k jao k chaand raatoon mein waqt kaise guzaarna hai
Khamosh lamhoon mein tujh ko kitna pukaarna hai
Bata k jao k kitne lamhay shumaar karne hein hijj ratoon kay
K kitne mousam aik aik kar k judaiyoon mein guzaarne hein
Bata k jao k panchiyoon ne akele pann ka sabbab jo poocha
Tou kaya kahoon ga?
Bata k jao ..main kis se tera gilla karoon ga
Bicharr kay tujh se habbib..kis se mila karoon ga
Bata k jao k aankh barsi to kon moutii chuna karay ga
Udaas lamhoon mein dil ki dharkan suna karay ga
Bata k jao k mousamoon ko payaam dene hein ya nahee hain
Fallk ko,taroon ko,jugnooon ko salaam dene hein ya nahee hain
Bata k jao k kis pe hai aitebaar karna
To kis ki baatoon pe be-niyazi kay silsale ikhtiyaar karna
Bata k jao k abb ravviyoon ki chaal kiya ho
Jawaab kiya ho,sawaal kiya ho
Arooj kiya ho,zawaal kiya ho
Nighah,rukhsaar,zulff,chehra ..nidhaal kiya ho
Bata k jao k meri haalatt pe chaandani khikhila pari tou main kiya karoon ga
Bata k jao k meri soorat pe tairgi muskara parri tou
Main kiya karoon ga
Bata k jao k tum ko kitna pukaarna hai
Bicharr k tujh se ye waqt kaise guzaarna hai
Ujaarna hai? nikhaarna hai?
Chalay jo ho tou bata kay jao
kay loutna bhi hai ya................????????
__________________ [IMG] om/sfuk5f.gif[/IMG] اے چشم فلک اے چشم زمیں ہم لوگ تو پھر آنے کے نہیں
دو چار گھڑی کا سپنا ہیں دو چار گھڑی کا خواب ہیں ہم
کیا اپنی حقیقت کیا ہستی’ مٹی کا ایک حباب ہیں ہم
دو چار گھڑی کا سپنا ہیں دو چار گھڑی کا خواب ہیں ہم۔۔
Life and death are different sides of the same coin | |
16-02-2008, 01:45 PM
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Originally Posted by freeek aah thanQ so much sis.... main zaroor post karoongi.... | Wellcome Sis
__________________ [IMG] om/sfuk5f.gif[/IMG] اے چشم فلک اے چشم زمیں ہم لوگ تو پھر آنے کے نہیں
دو چار گھڑی کا سپنا ہیں دو چار گھڑی کا خواب ہیں ہم
کیا اپنی حقیقت کیا ہستی’ مٹی کا ایک حباب ہیں ہم
دو چار گھڑی کا سپنا ہیں دو چار گھڑی کا خواب ہیں ہم۔۔
Life and death are different sides of the same coin |
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