[t3xPeRt]

Assalam-o-Alaikum:

sorry for being late.. but ab jaldi se is Month ka Topic note ker lein.............

moqey ki munasbat se hey yeh topic............... sal k end hey.......... thand b ho rahi ehy....... to is thatharti serdi mein kahin kahin kuch kuch yadein b hoon gi...... kuch ansoo........... kuch muskurahatein............arey arey.. aap ney to theek guess kia........ is bar ka topic hey........

'December"

ab jaldi se rules b dekh lein.......

RULES:

1. * Poetry k poet ka nam maloom hey to us ka naam likh dein.
   
2. * Competition main member sirf aik bar participate kar saktay Hian.
   
3. * Agar batay gaya toppic ya word ap ki poetry main kahi darmiyan main use hua ho tou ap usay highlight kar dain.
   
4. * Members POetry repeate nahi kar saktay.
   
5. * Competition main participate karnay ki last date 23rd Dec hai.

pls pls pls post kertey hoay in rules ka zaroor dehan rakhein............ otherwise aap ko award nai miley ga..........

[dil2dil]

i woz expecting the topic should be Bakra @ moqay ki munasibat

[t3xPeRt]

Originally Posted by dil2dil

i woz expecting the topic should be Bakra @ moqay ki munasibat

lol......... not bad ......... infact me ko pehley aap bata detey to shaid yehi topic hota

[Farhanmughal]

acha topic, hai,


inshallah karain gay post

[Khu$h!]

Afsoos us ne mera naam tak bhula diya
is saal december ne behad rulaa diya.
her sal december mein barasta raha paani
is saal december ne bhi aanso baha diya
aab ajnabi sa lagta hai her shakhs mujhe q?
bazar-e-ishq ne mujhe kis se milaa diya
is sard raat mein bhi tapish tan badan mein hai
teri judaayi ne mujhe esa jala diya
chadar wafa ki orhh kar khud chain se soye
tanhayi k takiya per mujhe tanha sula diya
aanso k samander mujhe tohfey mein dey diye
meri wafa ka tu ne kiya acha sila diya
rakha tha saal bhar jise sambhaal kar
aatey he december ne wo diya baha diya

[La Ha$!L]

humaray haal pe roya December
woh daikho....toot ke barsa December
guzar jata hai sara saal yooN to...
nahiN kat'ta magar...tanha December
bhala barish say kiya sairaab hoga!
tumharay wasl ka piyasa December
woh kab bichra?...nahiN ab yad..lekin
bas itna ilm hai...ke tha December
milan ke chand sik'kay daal ismaiN...
mere hathoN maiN hai kaasa December
yooN palkaiN bheegti rehti haiN ... jaisay
meri aankhoN maiN aa thehra December
jama poonji yehi hai umr bhar ki
meri tanhaai aur....mera December
sabab na pooch mere aansuoN ka...
hai pehlay hijr ka... pehla December
maiN in yadoN say bach ke jaooN kaisay?
ke meeloN door hai phaila December..
meri ankhoN say gar daikho ...to jano..
ke hai barsaat maiN jalta December
abhi tak kohr maiN dooba hai aangan..
abhi tak yad hai... pichla December.. :)

[Im_Sha]

Hummm Nice Topic
ok phir December Ko He Send kar detay hain Takay January Or Paas Aa Sakay.

[Im_Sha]

Ab Ki Baar December
--------------------------


Ab Ki Baar December

Ak Or Dukh Naam Apnay Likhwa Giya

Kese Ke Mehakti Shamo Ko

Wo Tanha Raton Main Dhaal Giya

Machaltay Jazbo Ko Wo

Sard Hawa'on Say Sula Giya

Aankhon Main Utartay Rango Ko

Wo Barishon Say Mita Gia

Bay-Bas Udaasi Tanhaii Or Dard Say Lipti Khamoshi

Har Sougaat Apni Dil Main Utaar Giya

Bohat Naaz Say Kehti Thi

Mousam December Ka

Dil Ko Bohat Lubhata Hai

Ab Ki Baar December.

[Farhanmughal]

3non

nay itni achi shairi post kar di hai

k

mashallah,


main ab sochnay pay majboor hon k kaya karon?

[Faraz]

zabar10

supercollection

3no ka

[Optimistic]

December ke Mahinay ka shayad wo aakhri din tha,
Baras guzray kaee
Maine Mohabbat lafz likha tha
Kisi Kaghaz k tukray per
achanak yaad aya hay
Baras guzray kaee
Mujh ko kisi se baat karni thi
Usse kehna tha Jaan-e-Jaan!
Mujhe tum se Mohabbat hai,magar mein keh nahin paya
Wo Kaghaz aaj tak lipta para hay dhool mein lekin,
Kisi ko day nahi paya
Dobara chah kar bhi Mohabbat kar nahi paya!!

[dil2dil]

AwsUm!!!

[t3xPeRt]

دسمبر کی آس

دسمبر جب بھی آتا ہے
وہ پگلی۔۔۔۔۔
پھر سے بیتے موسموں کی
تلخیوں کو
یاد کرتی ہے
پرانا کارڈ پڑھتی ہے
کہ جس میں اُس نے
لکھا تھا
میں لوٹوں گا دسمبر میں

نئے کپڑے بناتی ہے
وہ سارا گھر سجاتی ہے
دسمبر کے ہر اک دن کو
وہ گن گن کر بتاتی ہے
جونہی 15 گزرتی ہے
وہ کچھہ کچھہ ٹوٹ جاتی ہے
مگر پھر بھی
پرانی البموں کو کھول کر
!!!ماضی بلاتی ہے
نہیں معلوم یہ اُس کو
کہ بیتے وقت کی خوشیاں
بہت تکلیف دیتی ہیں
محض دل کو جلاتی ہیں۔۔۔
یونہی دن بیت جاتے ہیں
دسمبر لوٹ جاتا ہے
مگر وہ خوش فہم لڑکی۔۔۔
دوبارہ سے کیلنڈر میں
دسمبر کے مہینے کے صفحےکو
موڑ کر، پھر سے
پھر سے
دسمبر کے سحر میں
ڈوب جاتی ہے
کہ آخر اُس نے لکھا تھا۔۔۔۔
میں لوٹوں گا دسمبر میں

[La Ha$!L]

DECEMBER kO High light bi karna hai..... RULes main hai

[dil2dil]

Originally Posted by Alveena

DECEMBER kO High light bi karna hai..... RULes main hai

ap nahi sudhro gi
ap nay kiya highlight?

[La Ha$!L]

Originally Posted by dil2dil

ap nahi sudhro gi
ap nay kiya highlight?

yuppppppp... Bcoz last time when i submitted my cards for compitition in logo nay bahanay se reject kar diye thay k ... uspar forum pk ani likha HUh...... rules nai follow kiye aur yahan rule bnanay walay KHUDI follow nai kar rahay

[dil2dil]

Originally Posted by Alveena

yuppppppp... Bcoz last time when i submitted my cards for compitition in logo nay bahanay se reject kar diye thay k ... uspar forum pk ani likha HUh...... rules nai follow kiye aur yahan rule bnanay walay KHUDI follow nai kar rahay

hahahahah reject isi liye kiye thay k award lena tha dena nahi
hahahaha yeh to hota a rha hai forum main abi tak nai pata chala

[t3xPeRt]

Originally Posted by Alveena

yuppppppp... Bcoz last time when i submitted my cards for compitition in logo nay bahanay se reject kar diye thay k ... uspar forum pk ani likha HUh...... rules nai follow kiye aur yahan rule bnanay walay KHUDI follow nai kar rahay

i think abhi kafi time hey comp. end honey mein.......... tab tak i'll edit my post... :)

2ndly we dont need to search for any bahana........ jo hey so hey.......... ab kisi ki self assumptions ka koi illaj nai hey..........

Originally Posted by dil2dil

hahahahah reject isi liye kiye thay k award lena tha dena nahi
hahahaha yeh to hota a rha hai forum main abi tak nai pata chala

ahan....... aap to khud b phir isi ghum chakar ka hisa hein.............. q k award to aap b ik le chukey hein

[Farhanmughal]

uzzi aunty ,

nice poetry

[La Ha$!L]

Originally Posted by dil2dil

hahahahah reject isi liye kiye thay k award lena tha dena nahi
hahahaha yeh to hota a rha hai forum main abi tak nai pata chala

I Know @ lena tha DEna nahi ..... Thats Y i Say this OUT LOUD!!
Rules dene wali Rules par KHudi amal kar nahi sakiii.........................and talkng abt SElf assumption?? what self assumption ... LOlzz you need to say Thnx Instead... warna Poetry Compitition se hi NIkal jaty maagar ... yahan tHxn kahnay ki bajay ulta mere se hi ulajhna shuru ...