[freeek]

LOve hai jahan stories hain wahan lol

what you have to do in this competition?
well you just need to write a love story using the given languages i.e. Urdu, english n punjabi. Your Love story should be a mixture of these three. Fun part is You can take any two members of the forum and make them the characters of your Love story excluding offence and those members shouldnt be one of those who have left the forum... ya ho bhi jayen to chalay ga.

RULES:
* forbid using offencive words
* dont exploit any personal secrets of members (if u include their names as characters in ur love story)
* Story should be of 150-200 words only
* It should be in accordance with the topic thereby given
* AT-MOST 3 MEMBERS OF ONE TEAM CAN POST LOVE STORIES PER WEEK AS PER TOPIC!
* No copy pasted stuff allowed
* Judges are in authority to decide which was the funniest/best Love story.
* You can write love stories in your stride; as you like, just mould it make a serious one or a funny BUT IT SHOULD BE CONTAINING WORDS FROM ALL THREE ABOVE MENTIONED LANGUAGES.
* No colloquial/rough slang allowed

[freeek]

THIS WEEK's TOPIC IS :

"PHATICHAR LOVE KAHANI" !!

[Style Mantra]

Members for my team :

Neo
Savera
Dil2Dil

Our Team will post in Blue colour

[Kool Guy]

Members for my team

Maaya.000
Kool Guy
Loyal

Our team will post in ORANGE colour

[MaYa.000]

Intahai "PHATICHAR LOVE stOrY"
Mohabbat mein laakhon zakhm khaye humne, afsos unhe hum par aitbaar nahi...
Mat poocho kya guzarti hai dil par, jab wo kehte hain unhe humse pyaar nahi ...

Ahh yEh story pyAAr mOhabbat ka jEEta jAAgta gEhwara hai!
lOlz!yEh kahani hAi
OmEr Or MkjAAn ki!Aap sAb nE pEhli nazEr k IshQ k baray mEin tOu suna hOga!
TOu jAnab hOa kUch yOn,Badal Garaj rahay thy thandi thandi hawain chal rahin thin,OmEr shouts pEr mOujOod tha kahEEn sE Urrtay hOyE jAAn ji,bhi aa gayE wahan lOlzBas Phir kYa tha bAn gai dEvdAAs part 3!Phir kahan rahi kUch kUch hOta hai Or kahan rahi Dil tO pagal hai!Bas Phir tOu shouts pEr aik hi sada gOOnji… jAAAAAAAn jAAAAn jAAAAAn tUm kahan hO! TUm kYa kEr rahay hO!tUm nE khana khaya?Ahhh Nai sadii Ka naya IshQ!Phir yOn hOa dOnO Roz milnay lagay,sUchy jhOOtay waday hOyE Qasmain khai gain…Aik ItEm number bhi GAA lia “kEhta hAi pAl pAl OmEr sE hO k MK dEEwana,Eik pAl bhi jAAn E jAnA mUjh sE dOr nAHi jAnA pyAAr kiya tO nibhana pyAAr kiya tO Nibhana”pEr kEhtay hain nA pyAAr ishQ mOhabbat ka anjaam dard nAAk hOta hai…kUch aisa hi hOa hUmaray OmEr kay sath…dOnO pyAAr kErnay walOn kay beech mEin aa gaYa ‘NaEEm” Phir wOhi hOa jO nahi hOna chahiyE tha lOlz shouts pEr phir wOhi sadain gOOnji jAAAAAn jAAAAn jAAAAn pEr iss bAAr yEh OmEr nahi NaEEm kay jalway thy!lOlz phir yOn hOa OmEr kO kOi Or mil gaYa ooppss I mean gai… jAAn jEE kO NaEEm Or naEEm ji kO jAAn ji! yEh hOi hUmari story ki happy Ending!

[Kool Guy]

Asjad ban gaya SALMAN

Haan to janab may hazir hoon yahan ek anokhi aur bohat hi ard bhari praim kahani,
Kahani hai ek larkay ki jo DDLJ ki kajol ki tarhan gana gaya kerta tha ..MERAY KHAWABON MAY

JO AYE... lakin phuti qismat khuwabmay bhi kuch aisa ata tha k bechara ghabra ker uth jata

tha.. ek dafa ASJAD urf majno bhaiya dahi baray k thailay per kharay hoye gol gappay kha

rahay thay k achanak ek khuboo songh ker madhosh hogaye aur usi time kisi ka nazuk kandha un k kandhay say takraya jis nay un ko saktay say nikala... us nazuk kandhay wali ko daikh majno bhai ki aankhain khuli ki khuli rehgayin aur 2/3 mulaqaton may dono nay ek dosray ko apna nay ka waada kerlia... ghar walon nay bohat muqalfat ki lakin akhir kaar asjad ki zid k samnay haar maan ni pari.. isi tarhan din guzartay rahay aur shadi ka waqt aa pohancha...

CLIMAX : shadi k din baaration say asjad uchal uchal ker mil rahay thay jin ko kabhi daikhna bhi pasand nahi kertay thay un say galay mil rahay thay aur jo un k jani dushman thay un ko apnay haathon say pani pila rahay thay.. k achanak shadi hall may hungama mach gaya k dulhan nay nikah namay per sign kernay say inkaar kerdia.. asjad bhaga hoga ghabrahat k alam may dulhan k pass pohncha aur waja pochi to maloom hoa k .. . dulhan ka kehna hai k us k sign kernay ka to koi khana hi nahi cuz yahan per sirf MALE & FEMALE ka khana bana hoa hai .. yeh sun ker majno bhaiya behosh hogaye...jab hosh may aye to pata chala andhairay kamray may paray hain aur ghar walay un say poch rahay hain k yehi mila tha kia shadi k liye ?? yeh daikh ker asjad ek baar phir behosh hogaye .. (Lakin mujhay yaqeen hai k woh behosh nahi hoye thay natak ker rahay thay )
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[Sav3rA]

Anus urf nimbu nichor ...
yeh un dino ki baat hai jab Anus subha subha bare se dhood lene jata tha..achanak aik din uski nazar mazar-e-quaid ke samne jharoo lagati shabo pe pari..phir kiya tha..anus apne hosh-o-hawas kho betha...
roz subha uske aney se pehley jata aur uski rahe dekh raha hota..wo jab tak jharo laga laga ke chali na jati anus apni jaga se nahi hilta..
aik din anus uske liye Chole wali Chat leke gaya..lekin kiya dekhta hai ke wo Chicken burger kha rahi hai..bechare ne apni chat ki izat bachane khatir khud hi kha li..next day yeh bechara uske liye chicken burger leke gaya aur Jhariyoo ke peechey khara ho ke soch raha tha ke kese jaoo kee buger doo aur kese dil ki baat kahoo..abhi aik soch hi raha tha ke aik bilil jhapti aur buger urha ke le gaee....(qisa mukhtrsaran)
Anus uske ghar rishta lene gaya bari himat se ...lal rumal mouh pe rakh ke..sharmane ki practice kar ke...wahan gaya to bechare ke dil pe kya guzri mat puche..wahan 4/5 bache uwa uwa kar ke shabo ke as pas bethe they puche pe pata chala ke yeh shabo ke bache hain..bechara Anas dil ke arman dil mai rakh ke hi wapas aaa gaya