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Ajnabi To Tha Magar Apna Bahut Laga
 
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002 Ajnabi To Tha Magar Apna Bahut Laga

Magroor Hi Sahi Mujhe Achcha Bahut Laga
Ajnabi To Tha Magar Apna Bahut Laga

Sehra Mein Jo Jee Raha Tha Dirya Dili Ke Saath
Dekha Jo Gor Se To Woh Pyasa Bahut Laga

Wo JisKe Daam kadam Se Thin Basti Ki Ronnakein
Basti Ujad Gayi To Akela Bahut Laga

Lipta Hua Khaher Mein Khizan Ka Chand
Maile Libas Mein Bhi Woh Pyara bahut Laga

Resham Pehan Ke Bhi Meri kimat Na Bardh Saki
Khadar Bhi Uske Jism Par Mehnga Bahut Laga

Jab Aaine Pe Meri Saans Jam Gayi
MujhKo Khud Apna Aks Bhi Dhundla Bahut Laga
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Magroor Hi Sahi Mujhe Achcha Bahut Laga
Ajnabi To Tha Magar Apna Bahut Laga

Sehra Mein Jo Jee Raha Tha Dirya Dili Ke Saath
Dekha Jo Gor Se To Woh Pyasa Bahut Laga

Wo JisKe Daam kadam Se Thin Basti Ki Ronnakein
Basti Ujad Gayi To Akela Bahut Laga

Lipta Hua Khaher Mein Khizan Ka Chand
Maile Libas Mein Bhi Woh Pyara bahut Laga

Resham Pehan Ke Bhi Meri kimat Na Bardh Saki
Khadar Bhi Uske Jism Par Mehnga Bahut Laga

Jab Aaine Pe Meri Saans Jam Gayi
MujhKo Khud Apna Aks Bhi Dhundla Bahut Laga

Magroor Hi Sahi Mujhe Achcha Bahut Laga
Ajnabi To Tha Magar Apna Bahut Laga

Wo JisKe Daam kadam Se Thin Basti Ki Ronnakein
Basti Ujad Gayi To Akela Bahut Laga

Very Nice
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Re: Ajnabi To Tha Magar Apna Bahut Laga

Jab Aaine Pe Meri Saans Jam Gayi
MujhKo Khud Apna Aks Bhi Dhundla Bahut Laga
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Magroor Hi Sahi Mujhe Achcha Bahut Laga
Ajnabi To Tha Magar Apna Bahut Laga

Sehra Mein Jo Jee Raha Tha Dirya Dili Ke Saath
Dekha Jo Gor Se To Woh Pyasa Bahut Laga

Wo JisKe Daam kadam Se Thin Basti Ki Ronnakein
Basti Ujad Gayi To Akela Bahut Laga

Lipta Hua Khaher Mein Khizan Ka Chand
Maile Libas Mein Bhi Woh Pyara bahut Laga

Resham Pehan Ke Bhi Meri kimat Na Bardh Saki
Khadar Bhi Uske Jism Par Mehnga Bahut Laga

Jab Aaine Pe Meri Saans Jam Gayi
MujhKo Khud Apna Aks Bhi Dhundla Bahut Laga


bohot bohot umda intikhab kya hay apne shairi ka..
har har shair is ka bohot hi umda hai..

parh kar bohot acha laga.. thankss


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Magroor Hi Sahi Mujhe Achcha Bahut Laga
Ajnabi To Tha Magar Apna Bahut Laga

Wo JisKe Daam kadam Se Thin Basti Ki Ronnakein
Basti Ujad Gayi To Akela Bahut Laga

Very Nice
thnk u.............
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wow very nice :)
acha bhala aisi kia khas baat lagy iss mai?
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nice very nice
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bohot bohot umda intikhab kya hay apne shairi ka..
har har shair is ka bohot hi umda hai..

parh kar bohot acha laga.. thankss


jab maine first time read kia tha mjhe bhi kuch aisa hi ehsaas huwa tha isi liye share kia
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Re: Ajnabi To Tha Magar Apna Bahut Laga

Jab Aaine Pe Meri Saans Jam Gayi
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kya baat hai , very nice
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kya baat hai , very nice

iss ghazal main mjhe bhi sab se ziada yahi share acha laga
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jab maine first time read kia tha mjhe bhi kuch aisa hi ehsaas huwa tha isi liye share kia


magar ap ki feelings to untrue haii or is poetry ki feelings to true hai

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magar ap ki feelings to untrue haii or is poetry ki feelings to true hai


kabhi true thy baad main untur ho gayi
mager kabhi kabhi unture hone ke bawajood kuch cheezain bht ach lagty hai jaise true feelingz
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kabhi true thy baad main untur ho gayi
mager kabhi kabhi unture hone ke bawajood kuch cheezain bht ach lagty hai jaise true feelingz

sahi kaha!!!

chalen it's good k ap may abhi tak true feelings ka ehsas zinda hai :-)

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sahi kaha!!!

chalen it's good k ap may abhi tak true feelings ka ehsas zinda hai :-)

ager yeh ehsas mar gaya to zinda rehne ka ehsas bhi pheeka ho ajye ga
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ager yeh ehsas mar gaya to zinda rehne ka ehsas bhi pheeka ho ajye ga

ji mashALLAH ap to bohot achi achi batain kartay/karti hain




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ji mashALLAH ap to bohot achi achi batain kartay/karti hain





aye mjhe two in one samjha hai kia jo kartay/karti hai likha hai?
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