[AQN]

it was but same morning…
when a new-fangled feeling ensued,

she was by my bed side…
and looking for something,
glancing here n there…
she was ignorant of my gaze,

too closed!!!
to make me smell her freshly wet hair…
to make me listen to the rhythm of her breaths,

I was about to feel the glee…
but all of a sudden!
fragrance got fade..
and the rhythm diminished,

I opened my eyes …
she was leaving…
she found what she was in search of,

without knowing!
that at the very same moment…
I lost myself,

........................ AQN .......................

[untruefeelings]

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
sho shad

[mezzedup]

*scratches his head ....

[AQN]

Originally Posted by untruefeelings

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
sho shad

hmmmm .... may be its taken as Sad feeling or may be I cudn't descirbed it tht way :) .... but it was abt falling in love ... but yeah it has some sad aspect as well

[AQN]

Originally Posted by mezzedup

*scratches his head ....

Nah! do not need to :)

[untruefeelings]

Originally Posted by AQN

hmmmm .... may be its taken as Sad feeling or may be I cudn't descirbed it tht way :) .... but it was abt falling in love ... but yeah it has some sad aspect as well

or may be I felt it the way I want it to be any ways........

[AQN]

Originally Posted by untruefeelings

or may be I felt it the way I want it to be any ways........

yea .... yey bhi sahi hey :)

[untruefeelings]

Originally Posted by AQN

yea .... yey bhi sahi hey :)

ji janab sahi kaha aap ne