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Chand Mere Angan Mai..By Savera



Chand Mere Angan Mai..A Movie By Savera

Episode # 1




Starting..Maya..Rija ..sisters

Adi..Maya aur Rija ka cousin

Anas and savera...sister brother..



Sunday.. 10:00 AM Malik house




Rija...Ammi Nashta tayar hai kiya??

Ammi...han jao jaldi jake kha lo aur phir tayar ho jana sab aaj bari phopho aa rahi hai dubai se

Rija....oh wow.......unhe to humne itne salo se nahi dekha..

Adi...kon aa raha hai aur kis ki bat ho rahi hai??

Maya...ufffffff Mehman ...nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii aaj to humne sea view jana tha....

Adi...aik to is Maya ko Mehmano ke nam se bhi Bukhar ho jata hai..kisi kam ki nahi yeh to..

Maya..kiya kaha tumne??subha subha apni Bander jesi shakal leke yahan keu atey ho ..

Ammi..Addi beta aao aao kese ho...

Adi..theek hoo taee..abou ne kaha ke jake pata karo phopho walo ka ke waqee aaj rahe hain na??


Ammi..haan beta raat ko hi unka phone aya tha ke aaj sham 5 baje ki flight hai..

Maya...kiya??phopho aa rahi hain..phir to buhatt maza aye ga..savera bhi aye gi..

Addi..theek hai aunty phir aap log hamare sah chaliye ga airport pe..abhi chalta hoo mai sham mai milte hain..

Maya...tumhe to bahana chahiye yahan bar bar aney ka Huhh...

Adi..(serghosi se)...to bahane khatam kar do aik hi bar aa jao tum hamare ghar hamesha ke liye...

Maya..sudhro ge nahi tum adddiiiiiii...

Adi..acha suno to kaha ja rahi ho??

Rija..wo apke ghar jane ke liye tayar hone gaee hain..

Adi..acha?mohtarma ko kahe sabar ka daman sambhale rakhe,..itni jaldi kis bat ki hai..

Rija...Adi,phopho itne salo bad aa rahi hain na..jab wo yahan se gaee thee tab to Anas aur savera bhi itne chote chote se they..

Adi...aaj aa rahe hain na,.. na jane ke liye isliye..wese bhi acha hai Anas aa jaye tum dono cousins se to na meri banti hai na tumhari mujse..tum logo ko shopping aur makeup ke siwa aur kisi bat ka hosh hi kaha hota hai..

Rija..kiya kaha apne??aur aap konsa hume time dete hain kabhi,,,kabhi aik bar bhi kahi leke gaye hume huh..

Adi..leke to roz jaoo..lekin wo kiya hai ke apke aur apne Abba ka dar hai muje bas..

Maya...yeh gaya nahi abhi tak??

Adi..ary maine to suna aap mere sath chalne ke liye tayar hone gaee hain??

Maya.....Addddiiiiiiii subha subha mera mood kharab mat karo...

Adi.acha baba nahi karta..mai ja raha hoo sham mai milte hain...

Rija...Maya baji, Savera aa rahi hai..kitna maza aye ga na..

Maya..haan, savera ko dekhe to Zamana guzar gaya..

Ammi....Lakiyo tum dono abhi tak yahan bethee baten kar rahi ho??jaldi Nashta karo aur raat ke khane ki tayari bhi karni hai..

Rija..ammi kiya phopho wale hamare ghar rahe ge??

Ammi..haan beta jab tak unke apne ghar ki setting nahi ho jati..


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8:00 PM Malik House...

Maya......ufffffff kaha phasa gaee Ammi hume...khud jake mehmano ke sath beth gaee hain aur sara kam hamare oooper.

Rija..KOnsa sara kam??khana to unho ne bana liya hai apko sirf Salad aur Shami kabab banane ko kaha hai aur muje Rotiya..aur yeh bhi apko itna lag raha hai..

Maya..tum chup karo kuch ziyada nahi bolne lag gae ho..aik to germi se mera bura hal ho raha hai..ooper se tum mera dimagh kharab kar rahi ho...

Adi..( kitchen mai jhankte howe )..mohtarma apke pas Dimagh hai hi nahi to kharab hone ka sawal hi nahi paida hota..

Maya..(cheeeekhte howe )..Addddiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

Savera..Ahem Ahem kiya mai ander aa sakti hoo??

Rija..ary savera tum yahan kiya kar rahi ho??jao ander jake betho yahan buhat germi hai..

Savera ...ary nahi koi bat nahi..mai to khud ammi ke sath sara din kitchen mai hi hoti hoo..

Adi..tum larkiya beth ke khana banao aur fashion ki baten karo mai chala yahan se ..

Maya..shukar hai ke gaya..warna to isko chain nahi, ulta seedha bolta rehta hai huhh..

Rija...savera tum kuch din aur bhi rehna yahan buhat maza aye ga...mai tumhe apni friends ke ghar bhi leke jaoo gi..

Savera..acha jee jese aapka hukum..
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9:00..PM:..@ dinner
Ammi...Anas beta tum kuch keu nahi kha rahe..

Anas..aesi bat nahi aunty kha raha hoo ...

Maya..Ammi Adi ko iski side se hata le warna wo baten karta rahe ga aur Anas ko khane nahi dega..

Ammi...(ghoorte howe..) Maya araam se khana khao tum bhi..

(isi doran Anas ne piyar bhari aankhon se us taraf dekha jahan ..savera maya aur rija bethee khana kha rahi thee....jisay Anas ki ammi ki dekh chuki thin ..
wo wese bhi Maya ko dekh kar hi usay Bahoo banane ka faisla kar chuki thee..aur ab sirf Anas se puchna reh gaya tha...lekin jis tarha bar bar Anas wahan dekh raha tha uski ammi yeh Andaza laga chuki thee ke Anas bhi Maya ko pasand kar chuka hai...)

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11 PM ...

Adii..sab wahan chaye pe baten kar hain tum yahan akeli kya kar rahi ho?

Maya..chand ko dekh rahi hoo..tumhe to pata hai na ke muje chand kitna pasand hai...

Adi...haan pata hai..ab meri samjh aya ke Ammi muje chand keu kehti hai..keu ke mai unhe bhi chand jesa lagta hoo aur tumhe bhi isliye tum chand ko dekhti rehti ho..

Maya...Adddddiiiiiii kabhi to mazak ke ilawah bhi bat kar liya karo..

Adi..acha to batao aunty se shadi ki bat kab karoo??

Maya..Kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa....kiya keh rahe ho pagal ho kiya??aram se bolo kisi ne sun liya to?

Adi..Touba hai larki..tumse mazak mai bat karo tab bhi tumhe Masla hai tumse Serious hoke bat karo tab bhi..

Maya...buhat hi batamiz ho..mai ja rahi hoo neechy ...

Addi...ruko mai bhi aya.....


to be continued..
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or you can smile because she has lived.
You can close your eyes and pray that she'll come back,
or you can open your eyes and see all she's left.
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Sweetoo ji, sabhar ka phal meetha hota hai !! Savera jaldi next episode post karo.. mujhe rija ki fikar ho rahi hai.
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Dilwale sahi time ka wait kar rahe hain.. warna kab ke utha ke le jate ji !!
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You can close your eyes and pray that she'll come back,
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or you can be full of the love you shared.
You can turn your back on tomorrow and live yesterday,
or you can be happy for tomorrow because of yesterday.
You can remember her only that she is gone,
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“You can shed tears that she is gone,
or you can smile because she has lived.
You can close your eyes and pray that she'll come back,
or you can open your eyes and see all she's left.
Your heart can be empty because you can't see her,
or you can be full of the love you shared.
You can turn your back on tomorrow and live yesterday,
or you can be happy for tomorrow because of yesterday.
You can remember her only that she is gone,
or you can cherish her memory and let it live on.
You can cry and close your mind,
be empty and turn your back.
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smile, open your eyes, love and go on.”
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WOWWW its amazing !!! very realistic and touchy !! ahem cant wait for other episodes.. AWESOME WORK SAVERA!!! waise.. jori lash banayee hai ;)
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haye rabba mera kia hoga .. kia maayya ko hasil ker paonga ya AADI meray pyar ki rah may rukawat ban ker ayega

daikhtay hain short break k baad lols

Excellent work Savera
hahahahahahhahahhahahahhahahahhahah ....

Ulta chor kotwal ko dante....

yeh Fikar to Addi ko honi chahiye aur tumhe ho rahi hai wo bhi ABHI se..

Mazeed Tafseelat ke liye intzar farmaiye Next episode tak.

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