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ho gaya hoon.. !!!!

may eik shesha tha, pathar hogaya hoon
tajub hai k kyo kar hogaya hooono

gabar-e-jaan simat.ta hi nahi hai
may kya tha, kya bikhar kar hogaya hoon

utar kar zeena khuwab-e-muqafil
khud apne ghar se beghar hogaya hoon

bichar kar tujh se aye rashk-e-gul-etar
khizan ka khas manzar hogaya hoon..

teray anchal ki khushboo orh kar mai
muqadar ka sikandar ho gaya hoon..

charagh-e-lamz ki loo hi bohot hai
mai in poroon ko azbar hogaya hoon

abhi kuch din sambhalnay may lage gay
magar phelay se behtar hogaya hoon

mai in ankho k naam pani pe pe k khawar!
bajaye khud samandar ho gaya hooon..


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uf neooooooooooooooooooo ZBRDST.......
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uf neooooooooooooooooooo ZBRDST.......
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phir meri tarreeef

kab karo gi meri poetry ki tareef tum.. ......

acha ji karta raho ga sharing.

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very nice brother

thanks for sharing


shukriya brother for reading..


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oh my God, i was thinking u r a girl , really mistake ho gai.
anyway thanks for nice sharing.waisy mujhay aaj pata chal gaya kay u r not any girl .
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lolzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz @neo gurl
really nice poem thnx 4 sharing neo baji............
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oh my God, i was thinking u r a girl , really mistake ho gai.
anyway thanks for nice sharing.waisy mujhay aaj pata chal gaya kay u r not any girl .


koi bat nahi... galat fehmi .. khush fehmi .. life ka hisa hai.
i m glad k ap ki galat fehmi dur hogaye.. :-)

thank u for reading.
ji acha howa k ap ko pata chal gaya.. :-)

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really nice poem thnx 4 sharing neo baji............



thanks for reading ENIGMA BAHI jaan


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phir meri tarreeef

kab karo gi meri poetry ki tareef tum.. ......

acha ji karta raho ga sharing.

you plz keep on readin

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han thak gaye na tum apni taref sun sun k .....

oho itne farmabardar k se ho gaye????

ya i wikk read bcz main nahein parho gi tu tumhari kon parhe ga poetry.....

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oho itne farmabardar k se ho gaye????

ya i wikk read bcz main nahein parho gi tu tumhari kon parhe ga poetry.....

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han thak kar chor hogaya ho .. chalo jao thanda pani lay kar ao meray liya

may to shoro se hi ho bas tum ne aj pechana hai

han bas tum hi ho jo parthi hai .. baqi sab to sunay ki farmaish karti hai



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han thak kar chor hogaya ho .. chalo jao thanda pani lay kar ao meray liya

may to shoro se hi ho bas tum ne aj pechana hai

han bas tum hi ho jo parthi hai .. baqi sab to sunay ki farmaish karti hai



pani main MORTIEN dal dun.... ek he martaba thand par jaegi tumko

han aj pahchan lia....... tum wo he ho na jis ki pics her police station main hai...

tum sunaty bhi ho.... ya log sunaty hain tumko.......
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pani main MORTIEN dal dun.... ek he martaba thand par jaegi tumko

han aj pahchan lia....... tum wo he ho na jis ki pics her police station main hai...

tum sunaty bhi ho.... ya log sunaty hain tumko.......


nahi jab tak tum US pani ko piyo gi nahi mujhey thand nahi paray ge

aray nahi nahi.. may QUAID-e-AZAM thori na k meri pic har police station may lage hoi hogii...

kyo tum kyo itni raqabat ka izhar kar rahi ho agar log suntay hain to



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Khobsorat sharngg..
.gabar-e-jaan simat.ta hi nahi hai
may kya tha, kya bikhar kar hogaya hoon..... bagi shair b buhat zbrdast.. overall.. pori ki pori hi kOooOoOleSt hai.........

. MAZRAT K SATH..

yea meri kitab e hayat hai
isi dil ki ankh se parh Zara...
mei varq varq Tere Samne
Teray robaro teray pas Hoon..

yeh Teri Umedd ko Kia Hua
kabhi tuney ghour nai kiaa??

kisi sham tunay kaha tha teri.
Sans Hon..teri ass hoonn..

yeh teri judai ka gham nai..
yeh Silsialy tou hain Rozz kay...

teri zaat iska sabab nai.. kayi din se
yunhii udass hoon....

kisi or ankh se dekh kar
mujhey asay wesay laqab na day

tera aetabar hoon.. mei le
NA guman hun na qasan hoon
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Khobsorat sharngg..
.gabar-e-jaan simat.ta hi nahi hai
may kya tha, kya bikhar kar hogaya hoon..... bagi shair b buhat zbrdast.. overall.. pori ki pori hi kOooOoOleSt hai.........

. MAZRAT K SATH..

yea meri kitab e hayat hai
isi dil ki ankh se parh Zara...
mei varq varq Tere Samne
Teray robaro teray pas Hoon..

yeh Teri Umedd ko Kia Hua
kabhi tuney ghour nai kiaa??

kisi sham tunay kaha tha teri.
Sans Hon..teri ass hoonn..

yeh teri judai ka gham nai..
yeh Silsialy tou hain Rozz kay...

teri zaat iska sabab nai.. kayi din se
yunhii udass hoon....

kisi or ankh se dekh kar
mujhey asay wesay laqab na day

tera aetabar hoon.. mei le
NA guman hun na qasan hoon


kisi or ankh se dekh kar
mujhey asay wesay laqab na day

tera aetabar hoon.. mei le
NA guman hun na qasan hoon..

ufff bohot zabardast......................... shukriya ap ka itni khubsurat shairi shair karnay ka.



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wah wah wah



kya wah wah wah wah

agay bhi kuch boliya hazoor kya paan chabatay chabatay zaban atak gaye thi ap ki??

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