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Kho ChUkA.... !!!

Manzil Bhi Khoo Chuka Hon Safar Bhi Nahin Raha
Meri Kisi Bhi Duaa Main Asaar Bhi Nahin Raha

Jab Se Huyee Hai Dil Ko Khabar Hijar Yaar Ki
Lafzoon Ko Jornay Ka Hunaar Bhi Nahin Raha

Tu Kia Chala Gaya Main Takhkhil Bhi Khoo Chuka Hoon
Kuch Pass Hi Nahin Hai Tu Daar Bhi Nahin Raha

Awaargi Main Lutf Kahan Ek Azaab Hai
Par Kia Karoonga Loat K Ghar Bhi Nahin Raha

Ghintii K Din Hain Mout Main Lakin Ye Waqt Bhi
Kab Se Hi Tham Gaya Hai Ghuzar Bhi Nahin Raha

Dafnaa Do Mujhay Mout Se Pehle
Ab Tu Kisi Ka Lakhte Jigar Bhi Nahin Raha
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Manzil Bhi Khoo Chuka Hon Safar Bhi Nahin Raha
Meri Kisi Bhi Duaa Main Asaar Bhi Nahin Raha

Jab Se Huyee Hai Dil Ko Khabar Hijar Yaar Ki
Lafzoon Ko Jornay Ka Hunaar Bhi Nahin Raha

Tu Kia Chala Gaya Main Takhkhil Bhi Khoo Chuka Hoon
Kuch Pass Hi Nahin Hai Tu Daar Bhi Nahin Raha

Awaargi Main Lutf Kahan Ek Azaab Hai
Par Kia Karoonga Loat K Ghar Bhi Nahin Raha

Ghintii K Din Hain Mout Main Lakin Ye Waqt Bhi
Kab Se Hi Tham Gaya Hai Ghuzar Bhi Nahin Raha

Dafnaa Do Mujhay Mout Se Pehle
Ab Tu Kisi Ka Lakhte Jigar Bhi Nahin Raha

Khoo Chuka Hon Safar Bhi Nahin Raha
Meri Kisi Bhi Duaa Main Asaar Bhi Nahin Raha

Jab Se Huyee Hai Dil Ko Khabar Hijar Yaar Ki
Lafzoon Ko Jornay Ka Hunaar Bhi Nahin Raha

Dafnaa Do Mujhay Mout Se Pehle
Ab Tu Kisi Ka Lakhte Jigar Bhi Nahin Raha


esi poetry jis ki tareef karna behad mushkil hai.......mere pas lafz nahien ... muje bht bht bht TOUCHY lagi

SUPERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRbbbbb...
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very nice poetry. thank u for sharing.
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Bhutttttttttttt Khoobbbb. :)..

thx 4 sharing..
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Khoo Chuka Hon Safar Bhi Nahin Raha
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Jab Se Huyee Hai Dil Ko Khabar Hijar Yaar Ki
Lafzoon Ko Jornay Ka Hunaar Bhi Nahin Raha

Dafnaa Do Mujhay Mout Se Pehle
Ab Tu Kisi Ka Lakhte Jigar Bhi Nahin Raha


esi poetry jis ki tareef karna behad mushkil hai.......mere pas lafz nahien ... muje bht bht bht TOUCHY lagi

SUPERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRbbbbb...
huh.. poetry ki tareef k liya alfaz nahi ?..

meri tareef karnay jao gi to pata nahi kya hoga

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very nice poetry. thank u for sharing.
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Bhutttttttttttt Khoobbbb. :)..

thx 4 sharing..
shukriyaa.. :o)
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huh.. poetry ki tareef k liya alfaz nahi ?..

meri tareef karnay jao gi to pata nahi kya hoga

shukran
lo aj tumhari tareef kar he deti hun......

kia yad karoge.....

tumhe khuda taala ne bht fursat se banaya hai....

kiu k tum khas ho bht.....

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FALTO cheezen fursat main he banai jati hain....

khush ab ...
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nice work neo....
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lo aj tumhari tareef kar he deti hun......

kia yad karoge.....

tumhe khuda taala ne bht fursat se banaya hai....

kiu k tum khas ho bht.....

kiu k .

FALTO cheezen fursat main he banai jati hain....

khush ab ...

Jal GAYA... BARNUL lagayeyaa ..

tum bhi fair n lovely lagaya karo.. takay tumhe meray husan se phir koi shikayat na ho
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tum bhi fair n lovely lagaya karo.. takay tumhe meray husan se phir koi shikayat na ho
tum cherry blossom lagaya karooo
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uumm ..boht khoob..nice sharing
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nahi tumharay ITNAY PAKKAY RANG par fair n lovely bhi asar nahi kar sakti


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kiu kia tum try kar chukey ho kia......???
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its nice : )
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