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hath pe hath dharay bethay hain........
 
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Old 18-06-2008, 06:30 AM
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hath pe hath dharay bethay hain........


hath pe hath dharay bethay hain,fursat kitni hai?
phir bhi tere dewano ke shohrat kitni hai!

suraj ghar se nikal chuka tha kirnain tez keya
shabnam gul se poch rahi thi"MOHLAT KITNI HAI"!

bemaqsad sab log musalsal bolte rehte hain
shehaar mai dekho sanatay ki,dehshat kitni hai!

lafz to sab k ik jesay hain,kesay baat khulay?
duniya dari kitni hai or chahat kitni hai!

sapnay bechnay Aaa to gaye ho laikin dekh to lo
duniya k bazar may un ki qeemat kitni hai!

dekha gazal ram khurda ki pheli ankhon mai
hum kesay batlaye dil may wehshat kitni hai!

eik adhora wada us ka,eik shakista dil
lut bhi gaye to shehar-e-wafa ki daulat kitni hai!

may sahil hon AMJAD or woh dariya jesa hai
kitni duri hai dono may , qurbat kitni hai !
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wow veryy nice poem n sum words r veryy difficuclt
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hath pe hath dharay bethay hain,fursat kitni hai?
phir bhi tere dewano ke shohrat kitni hai!

suraj ghar se nikal chuka tha kirnain tez keya
shabnam gul se poch rahi thi"MOHLAT KITNI HAI"!

bemaqsad sab log musalsal bolte rehte hain
shehaar mai dekho sanatay ki,dehshat kitni hai!

lafz to sab k ik jesay hain,kesay baat khulay?
duniya dari kitni hai or chahat kitni hai!

sapnay bechnay Aaa to gaye ho laikin dekh to lo
duniya k bazar may un ki qeemat kitni hai!

dekha gazal ram khurda ki pheli ankhon mai
hum kesay batlaye dil may wehshat kitni hai!

eik adhora wada us ka,eik shakista dil
lut bhi gaye to shehar-e-wafa ki daulat kitni hai!

may sahil hon AMJAD or woh dariya jesa hai
kitni duri hai dono may , qurbat kitni hai !

may sahil hon AMJAD or woh dariya jesa hai
kitni duri hai dono may , qurbat kitni hai

sirf ye he samaj aaya.....
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Old 18-06-2008, 12:11 PM
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mushkil poem hai guriya:). amjad ki her nazam ghazal easy kahan hoti hai:)
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mushkil poem hai guriya:). amjad ki her nazam ghazal easy kahan hoti hai:)
haan shayad............
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wow veryy nice poem n sum words r veryy difficuclt
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agar ap ko jo lafz samajh nahi aya... ye samajhna chahti hain to ap bila jhijhak poch sakti hay BAQI LOGO se kyo ka mujhey bhi nahi ati urdu sahi se
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may sahil hon AMJAD or woh dariya jesa hai
kitni duri hai dono may , qurbat kitni hai

sirf ye he samaj aaya.....
tum to ho hi na samajh
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may sahil hon AMJAD or woh dariya jesa hai
kitni duri hai dono may , qurbat kitni hai !

MUJHE BHI SIRF YEHI WALA SAMAJH MAIN AAYA...... :(
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sapnay bechnay Aaa to gaye ho laikin dekh to lo
duniya k bazar may un ki qeemat kitni hai!

may sahil hon AMJAD or woh dariya jesa hai
kitni duri hai dono may , qurbat kitni hai !

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GOCHA..........PASHTO main bhi samaj aajayega fikar not...........
daga da raora.. pista maray dam dam

chalo ab is ka matlab poch kar ana
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may sahil hon AMJAD or woh dariya jesa hai
kitni duri hai dono may , qurbat kitni hai !

MUJHE BHI SIRF YEHI WALA SAMAJH MAIN AAYA...... :(
kya samajh nahi aaya is may
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sapnay bechnay Aaa to gaye ho laikin dekh to lo
duniya k bazar may un ki qeemat kitni hai!

may sahil hon AMJAD or woh dariya jesa hai
kitni duri hai dono may , qurbat kitni hai !

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eska matlab NEO ko roara yani PATHAR se maroo phir PISTE BADAM khilaoo DAM DAR BANAOOO
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kya samajh nahi aaya is may
Sirf yehi wala samajh aay baki nahin aayi......
apki tarha apki poetry bhi mushkil hoti ja rahi hai..............
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kashhhhhhhhhhh!! NEW ROSHNI SCHOOL se na parhi hotii
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Sirf yehi wala samajh aay baki nahin aayi......
apki tarha apki poetry bhi mushkil hoti ja rahi hai..............
aww achaa ..
tution timings set kar lete hain ..
baqi sab khud set ho jaye ga

samajh to gaye hi ho gi ap
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