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18-06-2008, 05:55 AM
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aag lagi thi seena seena, har shola jawala thaa
ab k shehar mai roshniyo ka manzar dekhne wala thaa
darwazo par paray hoan thay dher shikasta khuwabo k
dalaano may nafrat k aseb ne dera dala thaaa
galiyo galiyo bhatak raha tha ik sunhara khuwab jise
meray baro ne apni lakhon nendain beech k pala thaa
apni apni kashti le kar yun dariyan may kud paray
jesay sirf jehaz hi is is tufan may dobnay wala thaa 
AMJAD ye taqdeeer thi us ki ye qudrat ka khel!
gira jahan par raat k panchi ,thori duur ujala thaa.
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18-06-2008, 11:13 AM
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POri poetry A1 hai............ mgr i like these most............
darwazo par paray hoan thay dher shikasta khuwabo k
dalaano may nafrat k aseb ne dera dala thaaa
AMJAD ye taqdeeer thi us ki ye qudrat ka khel!
gira jahan par raat k panchi ,thori duur ujala thaa
bht khob NEo....... 
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18-06-2008, 12:23 PM
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gira jahan par raat k panchi ,thori duur ujala thaa.
lolz:)
lo bhayee maya ko bhi wohi pasand aya jo mujhey:)
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18-06-2008, 07:23 PM
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29-06-2008, 09:40 AM
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Originally Posted by maya pari  POri poetry A1 hai............ mgr i like these most............
darwazo par paray hoan thay dher shikasta khuwabo k
dalaano may nafrat k aseb ne dera dala thaaa
AMJAD ye taqdeeer thi us ki ye qudrat ka khel!
gira jahan par raat k panchi ,thori duur ujala thaa
bht khob NEo....... |
tum bhi puri A1 ho  .. magar i like u when u do my tareefain   warna nahi .... 
thanx maya pari 
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29-06-2008, 09:42 AM
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Originally Posted by Emblem99 AMJAD ye taqdeeer thi us ki ye qudrat ka khel!
gira jahan par raat k panchi ,thori duur ujala thaa.
lolz:)
lo bhayee maya ko bhi wohi pasand aya jo mujhey:)
nice NEO:) | akhir bahi or behan ki pasand kahi na kahi to milti julti hogi na
shukran :o)
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29-06-2008, 09:43 AM
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Originally Posted by Lady Mystique Inniii Mushkil Poetry | tution parhanay ka bahana dhond raha tha isliya
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30-06-2008, 02:06 PM
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Originally Posted by Neo | hahahahhaa.@@ when u do my tareefain.........
hello uncle...........  tumhari tarefaian kab ki main ne...... 
poetry ki tareefain ki thi main ne. tu... 
u r welcome......
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01-07-2008, 08:09 AM
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Originally Posted by maya pari hahahahhaa.@@ when u do my tareefain.........
hello uncle........... tumhari tarefaian kab ki main ne......
poetry ki tareefain ki thi main ne. tu...
u r welcome...... | uncle  bachay ki umr k kam sin nujawan ko unlcke khetay hoan tumhe AHOOO nahi ati? 
han han meri tarefain kartay hoan mashriqui haya ki chadar jo ajati hay darmayan may
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01-07-2008, 02:30 PM
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Originally Posted by Neo | meri DADA/DADI k bacho ki umr k bache............. tu mere UNCLE he hwe na.....
mashrequi haya.... hahahahhahh@@ mgr haya jab ati hai jab sab muje ye kahty hain OYE TU NE ES KI TAREEF KI 
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01-07-2008, 03:14 PM
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meray baro ne apni lakhon nendain beech k pala thaa
darwazo par paray hoan thay dher shikasta khuwabo k
dalaano may nafrat k aseb ne dera dala thaaa
Nice!
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01-07-2008, 09:55 PM
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Originally Posted by maya pari meri DADA/DADI k bacho ki umr k bache............. tu mere UNCLE he hwe na.....
mashrequi haya.... hahahahhahh@@ mgr haya jab ati hai jab sab muje ye kahty hain OYE TU NE ES KI TAREEF KI | hahaha@dada dadiii ki umr k bachay..
to kya dadii dadii apnay ammi abbu k bachay nahi 
SAB kehtay hain 
to tum bhi keh diya karo.... ab achi cheez ki tareef hi ki ja sakti hay buraye to nahi na
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01-07-2008, 09:56 PM
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Originally Posted by Enigma Hmm Nice......... | hmm thanxxx
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01-07-2008, 09:56 PM
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Originally Posted by Angel's Doll galiyo galiyo bhatak raha tha ik sunhara khuwab jise
meray baro ne apni lakhon nendain beech k pala thaa
darwazo par paray hoan thay dher shikasta khuwabo k
dalaano may nafrat k aseb ne dera dala thaaa
Nice! | achaa shukriya
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02-07-2008, 02:00 PM
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Originally Posted by Neo | CHEEZ tum CHEEZ ho???
i was thinking u r a human being... but tum tu cheez ho
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Originally Posted by Neo hmm thanxxx | hmm u r welcom
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