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Old 22-07-2008, 12:33 PM
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Wh3N LoV3 3nD$...!!

When Love Ends,
A new pain begins..
An empty feeling,
A broken spirit that needs healing.
Emotions hard to control,
A tattered heart, hard to console.
Dreams so shattered,
Unspoken thoughts left scattered.
No answers to be found..
Only to the pain you are bound.

When love ends,
Misery sets in..
You're left to fight it alone.
Into a battle of heart and mind, you are thrown.
Trying to forget the one in your heart..
While you slowly fall apart.
Drifting away from a love you knew,
Is so much easier to say than to do.
Pain that leaves you feeling drained,
A lonely feeling, hard to explain.

When Love Ends...
A New Pain Begins....!!!

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Old 22-07-2008, 12:35 PM
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kewl .... nice sharing... : )
shud be saved in diary lolz
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