[mansoor]

aysa socha tha os k baray may
lagta nahi k saath nibha-ay ga dayr tak
laykin wo mujh ko bhool na paa-ay ga dayr tak
jo bhi qareeb aa-ay ga os k
osa zaroor wo mayri dastan sunay ga dayr tak
dhoonday ga wo mujhay is hi shahar may ek din
dhoonday ga or mujhko na paa-ay ga dayr tak
may sahiloon ke rayt pay likhoon ga os ka nam
wo pani may mayra naqsh bana-ay ga dayr tak
kis hal may hoon os say bicharanay k bad may
sun kar osay yaqeen na aa-ay ga dayr tak

[Lady Mystique]

Nice Poetry... thanx for sharing .. :)

[Sav3rA]

Originally Posted by mansoor

aysa socha tha os k baray may
lagta nahi k saath nibha-ay ga dayr tak
laykin wo mujh ko bhool na paa-ay ga dayr tak
jo bhi qareeb aa-ay ga os k
osa zaroor wo mayri dastan sunay ga dayr tak
dhoonday ga wo mujhay is hi shahar may ek din
dhoonday ga or mujhko na paa-ay ga dayr tak
may sahiloon ke rayt pay likhoon ga os ka nam
wo pani may mayra naqsh bana-ay ga dayr tak
kis hal may hoon os say bicharanay k bad may
sun kar osay yaqeen na aa-ay ga dayr tak

buhattttttttt khoob :).....

aik aik shair buhat zabardast hai :)

[Style Mantra]

waqayi bht kamal poetry hai...

[mansoor]

Originally Posted by Lady Mystique

Nice Poetry... thanx for sharing .. :)

thanx......................

[mansoor]

Originally Posted by Sav3rA

buhattttttttt khoob :).....

aik aik shair buhat zabardast hai :)

thankssssssssssssssss

[mansoor]

Originally Posted by §t¥l€ Mنnt®a

waqayi bht kamal poetry hai...

thankzzzzzzzzzzzzz