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Old 11-04-2008, 08:19 PM
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Describe ur self wid da help of poetry

Hi guys!

Its a kind of thread in which you all just have to post any poetry which can exactly define what you are! It can be of any language, of any poet. I didnt spend as much time with all you guys. I read so many posts of different members including freek,ayesha, fairness, restless, kool guy,khushi, lahasil, notxtra, aimal, neo, asjad, decent kuri .. and so on but still not able to predict u all completely thats why i m giving this thread in order to know you all thoroughly.. hope so you all will particiapate :)

Regards,
Maham!
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What a lovely sin
All alone at least for now
I wish i could run but I dont know how?

Only once the lies consumed her
Its never ending flames slowly burning
Another time once lost & another tear fell
One more night of pure pained hell

Alone in her room
She wants to run away
This life is too wierd
Its to much for her to take

A simple girl
In a lonley world, nobody notices
But she cries inside
And nobody sees her because she hides
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Old 11-04-2008, 08:22 PM
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Let me be the first one to describe myself with the help of poetry.. :)

I'm an angel, I'm a devil
I am sometimes in between
I'm as bad it can get
And good as it can be
Sometimes I'm a million colors
Sometimes I'm black and white
I am all extremes
Try figure me out you never can
There's so many things I am

I am special
And powerful
Unstoppable
Sometimes I'm miserable
Sometimes I'm pitiful
But that's so typical of all the things I am

I'm someone filled with self-belief
And haunted by self-doubt
I've got all the answers
I've got nothing figured out
I like to be by myself
I hate to be alone
I'm up and I am down
But that's part of the thrill
Part of the plan
Part of all of the things I am

I'm a million contradictions
Sometimes I make no sense
Sometimes I'm perfect
Sometimes I'm a mess
Sometimes I'm not sure who I am!!!
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Locked within
What a lovely sin
All alone at least for now
I wish i could run but I dont know how?

Only once the lies consumed her
Its never ending flames slowly burning
Another time once lost & another tear fell
One more night of pure pained hell

Alone in her room
She wants to run away
This life is too wierd
Its to much for her to take

A simple girl
In a lonley world, nobody notices
But she cries inside
And nobody sees her because she hides
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Old 11-04-2008, 08:39 PM
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Oh!I never give myself the chance
to really make it up
I just let the wind steal my dreams
though I could make it stop
still I don't know why!
and I pretend to have everything
despite the pain I bear inside
I thought I had a feeling that rang a bell
it's so hard for it seems as if i ought to find
it's only air i'm clutching,only dust in hand
and I'll never really understand why
something within me dies
whenever you touch my hand?
each of my heartbeats cries
trying to understand why? I don't know why!
still, I know my trembling heart
will search for the missing part
I shouldn't worry any way,it's hard to say it
but I decided to leave my heart behind.
why? - I wish I could know why
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Told you I'll be here forever
Said I'll always be a friend
Took an oath I'ma stick it out till the end



Now that it's raining more than ever
Know that we'll still have each other
You can stand under my umbrella
You can stand under my umbrella
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Old 12-04-2008, 08:51 PM
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Hatheli samne rakhna Ke sab ansoo giren is mein
jo ruk jaye honto per samjh jana ke wo hoon main

Kabhi jo chand ko dekho To tum yun muskra dena
Ke phir badal bhi ajaen samjh jana ke wo hoon main

Jo chal jaye hawa thandi To ankhen band kerlena
Jo jhonka tez ho sab se samjh jana ke wo hoon main

jo ziada yaad ao main to ro lena jee bhar ke
Agar hichki koi aye to samjh jana ke wo hoon main

Agar tum bhoolna chaho mujhe shayed bhula do tum
magar jab saans aye gi samjh jana ke wo hoon main




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Jisay Tum Chhoray Jatay Ho
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Old 12-04-2008, 09:48 PM
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Hatheli samne rakhna Ke sab ansoo giren is mein
jo ruk jaye honto per samjh jana ke wo hoon main

Kabhi jo chand ko dekho To tum yun muskra dena
Ke phir badal bhi ajaen samjh jana ke wo hoon main

Jo chal jaye hawa thandi To ankhen band kerlena
Jo jhonka tez ho sab se samjh jana ke wo hoon main

jo ziada yaad ao main to ro lena jee bhar ke
Agar hichki koi aye to samjh jana ke wo hoon main

Agar tum bhoolna chaho mujhe shayed bhula do tum
magar jab saans aye gi samjh jana ke wo hoon main




Thnx for sharing ... Its nice!
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What a lovely sin
All alone at least for now
I wish i could run but I dont know how?

Only once the lies consumed her
Its never ending flames slowly burning
Another time once lost & another tear fell
One more night of pure pained hell

Alone in her room
She wants to run away
This life is too wierd
Its to much for her to take

A simple girl
In a lonley world, nobody notices
But she cries inside
And nobody sees her because she hides
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Old 12-04-2008, 09:50 PM
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Oh!I never give myself the chance
to really make it up
I just let the wind steal my dreams
though I could make it stop
still I don't know why!
and I pretend to have everything
despite the pain I bear inside
I thought I had a feeling that rang a bell
it's so hard for it seems as if i ought to find
it's only air i'm clutching,only dust in hand
and I'll never really understand why
something within me dies
whenever you touch my hand?
each of my heartbeats cries
trying to understand why? I don't know why!
still, I know my trembling heart
will search for the missing part
I shouldn't worry any way,it's hard to say it
but I decided to leave my heart behind.
why? - I wish I could know why
Beautiful ,, thnx for sharing savera! :)
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What a lovely sin
All alone at least for now
I wish i could run but I dont know how?

Only once the lies consumed her
Its never ending flames slowly burning
Another time once lost & another tear fell
One more night of pure pained hell

Alone in her room
She wants to run away
This life is too wierd
Its to much for her to take

A simple girl
In a lonley world, nobody notices
But she cries inside
And nobody sees her because she hides
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Old 13-04-2008, 01:06 AM
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Hum vo be-dard hain
khawab ganwa ker bhi jinhain neend aa jati hai
soch soch ker bhi jinkay zehnon ko kuch nahi hota....
toot phoot ker bhi jinkay dil dharakna yaad rakhtay hain....
Hum vo be-dard hain.......
Jinkay aansu unki ankhon ka rasta nahi bhooltay...
toot ker ronay ki khawahish main ........
jo baat be-baat muskuratay hain.......
or shaam say pehlay mar jaanay ki aarzu main jee jatay hain.....
Or jeetay hi chalay jatay hain....
Hum vo be-dard hain janaan.....
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ye ranj-o-alam yeh hizn-o-malal
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Dil main Kahin benaam chubhan
aur had-e-nazar tak tanhai
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Old 13-04-2008, 01:19 AM
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"Merey wahm-o- guman se bhi zyada toot jata hai.
Ye dil apni hadoon mein reh kar itna toot jata hai.

Mein roaoon to daro dewar mujh pey hansney lagtey hain.
Hansoon to merey andar janey kya kya toot jata hai.

Mein jis lamhey ki khawahish mein safar karta hoon sadyoon sey.
Kahin paoon taley aa kar who lamha toot jata hai.

Merey khwaboon ki basti sey janazey uthtey jatey hain.
Meri aankhein jisey choo lein who sapna toot jata hai.

Najaney kitni mudat se hai dil mein ye amal jari
Zara si thees lagti hai zara sa toot jata hai

Dil e nadan hamari to namo hi na muqamal thi
To herat kya jo bantey hi irada toot jata hai

Muqadar mein merey sagar shikast o rekhat itni hai
Mein jis ko apna keh doon who sitara toot jata hai・・・.

Regards,
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She walks in beauty, like the nightOf cloudless
> climes and starry skies;And all that's best of dark
> and brightMeet in her aspect and her eyes:Thus
> mellow'd to that tender lightWhich heaven to gaudy
> day denies.
> One shade the more, one ray the less,Had half
> impair'd the nameless graceWhich waves in every
> raven tress,Or softly lightens o'er her face;Where
> thoughts serenely sweet expressHow pure, how dear
> their dwelling-place.
> And on that cheek, and o'er that brow,So soft, so
> calm, yet eloquent,The smiles that win. the tints
> that glow,But tell of days in goodness spent,A mind
> at peace with all below,A heart whose love is
> innocent!
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Old 15-04-2008, 03:33 AM
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She walks in beauty, like the nightOf cloudless
> climes and starry skies;And all that's best of dark
> and brightMeet in her aspect and her eyes:Thus
> mellow'd to that tender lightWhich heaven to gaudy
> day denies.
> One shade the more, one ray the less,Had half
> impair'd the nameless graceWhich waves in every
> raven tress,Or softly lightens o'er her face;Where
> thoughts serenely sweet expressHow pure, how dear
> their dwelling-place.
> And on that cheek, and o'er that brow,So soft, so
> calm, yet eloquent,The smiles that win. the tints
> that glow,But tell of days in goodness spent,A mind
> at peace with all below,A heart whose love is
> innocent!
Nice poetry! thnx for sharing! :)
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What a lovely sin
All alone at least for now
I wish i could run but I dont know how?

Only once the lies consumed her
Its never ending flames slowly burning
Another time once lost & another tear fell
One more night of pure pained hell

Alone in her room
She wants to run away
This life is too wierd
Its to much for her to take

A simple girl
In a lonley world, nobody notices
But she cries inside
And nobody sees her because she hides
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Old 15-04-2008, 03:36 AM
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Hum vo be-dard hain
khawab ganwa ker bhi jinhain neend aa jati hai
soch soch ker bhi jinkay zehnon ko kuch nahi hota....
toot phoot ker bhi jinkay dil dharakna yaad rakhtay hain....
Hum vo be-dard hain.......
Jinkay aansu unki ankhon ka rasta nahi bhooltay...
toot ker ronay ki khawahish main ........
jo baat be-baat muskuratay hain.......
or shaam say pehlay mar jaanay ki aarzu main jee jatay hain.....
Or jeetay hi chalay jatay hain....
Hum vo be-dard hain janaan.....
Very impressive Freek!
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What a lovely sin
All alone at least for now
I wish i could run but I dont know how?

Only once the lies consumed her
Its never ending flames slowly burning
Another time once lost & another tear fell
One more night of pure pained hell

Alone in her room
She wants to run away
This life is too wierd
Its to much for her to take

A simple girl
In a lonley world, nobody notices
But she cries inside
And nobody sees her because she hides
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Old 15-04-2008, 03:41 AM
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"Merey wahm-o- guman se bhi zyada toot jata hai.
Ye dil apni hadoon mein reh kar itna toot jata hai.

Mein roaoon to daro dewar mujh pey hansney lagtey hain.
Hansoon to merey andar janey kya kya toot jata hai.

Mein jis lamhey ki khawahish mein safar karta hoon sadyoon sey.
Kahin paoon taley aa kar who lamha toot jata hai.

Merey khwaboon ki basti sey janazey uthtey jatey hain.
Meri aankhein jisey choo lein who sapna toot jata hai.

Najaney kitni mudat se hai dil mein ye amal jari
Zara si thees lagti hai zara sa toot jata hai

Dil e nadan hamari to namo hi na muqamal thi
To herat kya jo bantey hi irada toot jata hai

Muqadar mein merey sagar shikast o rekhat itni hai
Mein jis ko apna keh doon who sitara toot jata hai・・・.

Regards,
MaYa
quite different from your image at forum!
nice to read, thnx for posting your precious reply :)
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What a lovely sin
All alone at least for now
I wish i could run but I dont know how?

Only once the lies consumed her
Its never ending flames slowly burning
Another time once lost & another tear fell
One more night of pure pained hell

Alone in her room
She wants to run away
This life is too wierd
Its to much for her to take

A simple girl
In a lonley world, nobody notices
But she cries inside
And nobody sees her because she hides
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Hummmmmmmmmmm Nice ............. very nice thread
New Idea..........

is Say Kafi Aasani hogi mujhay Apna Intro karwanay main ... Very Good Maham




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Taluq Torta Hoon Tu Mukammal Torr Deta Hoon
Jisay Main Chorr Deta Hoon Mukammal Chorr Deta Hoon


Mohabbat Ho Keh Nafrat, Bhara Rehta Hoon Shiddat Say
Jidhar Say Aaye Yeh Darya, Udhar He Morr Deta Hoon


Yaqeen Rakhta Nahi Hoon Main Kese Kachay Taluq Per
Jo Dhaga Tootnay Wala Ho Us Ko Torr Deta Hoon


Meray Dekhay Howay Khowab Lehray Na Lay Jaye
Gharonday Rait Kay Tameer Kar Kay Chorr Deta Hoon


Adeem Ab Tak Wahi Bachpan, Wahi Takhreeb Kaari Hai
Qafs Ko Torr Deta Hoon, Parinday Chorr Deta Hoon


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I'm someone filled with self-belief
And haunted by self-doubt
I've got all the answers
I've got nothing figured out
I like to be by myself
I hate to be alone
I'm up and I am down
But that's part of the thrill
Part of the plan
Part of all of the things I am
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Old 20-04-2008, 11:14 PM
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Hummmmmmmmmmm Nice ............. very nice thread
New Idea..........

is Say Kafi Aasani hogi mujhay Apna Intro karwanay main ... Very Good Maham




Taluq Torta Hoon Tu Mukammal Torr Deta Hoon
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Taluq Torta Hoon Tu Mukammal Torr Deta Hoon
Jisay Main Chorr Deta Hoon Mukammal Chorr Deta Hoon


Mohabbat Ho Keh Nafrat, Bhara Rehta Hoon Shiddat Say
Jidhar Say Aaye Yeh Darya, Udhar He Morr Deta Hoon


Yaqeen Rakhta Nahi Hoon Main Kese Kachay Taluq Per
Jo Dhaga Tootnay Wala Ho Us Ko Torr Deta Hoon


Meray Dekhay Howay Khowab Lehray Na Lay Jaye
Gharonday Rait Kay Tameer Kar Kay Chorr Deta Hoon


Adeem Ab Tak Wahi Bachpan, Wahi Takhreeb Kaari Hai
Qafs Ko Torr Deta Hoon, Parinday Chorr Deta Hoon


[ Adeem Hashmi ]


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for this beautiful sharing
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All alone at least for now
I wish i could run but I dont know how?

Only once the lies consumed her
Its never ending flames slowly burning
Another time once lost & another tear fell
One more night of pure pained hell

Alone in her room
She wants to run away
This life is too wierd
Its to much for her to take

A simple girl
In a lonley world, nobody notices
But she cries inside
And nobody sees her because she hides
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Old 20-04-2008, 11:15 PM
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I'm someone filled with self-belief
And haunted by self-doubt
I've got all the answers
I've got nothing figured out
I like to be by myself
I hate to be alone
I'm up and I am down
But that's part of the thrill
Part of the plan
Part of all of the things I am
hmmm very nice!
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What a lovely sin
All alone at least for now
I wish i could run but I dont know how?

Only once the lies consumed her
Its never ending flames slowly burning
Another time once lost & another tear fell
One more night of pure pained hell

Alone in her room
She wants to run away
This life is too wierd
Its to much for her to take

A simple girl
In a lonley world, nobody notices
But she cries inside
And nobody sees her because she hides
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Old 21-04-2008, 12:10 AM
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what a sweet thread Maham

Ajeeb larki hoon khud ko jalana chahtee hoon
Mai khud ko rakh ker kaheen bhool jana chahtee hoon

Mere naseeb ki khushiyaan bhee kab mili mujh ko
Bas ab to umer bher aansoo bhana chahtee hoon

Najanay kitni mohabbat hai ranj-o-ghum se mujhe
Koi bhee dard ho dil mai chupana chahtee hoon

Baha baha k ye aasnoo bikhar chuki hoon bahut
Simat k zaat mai ab muskurana chahtee hoon


Jisay eik umer dil mai chupa k rakha hai
Wo raaz aaj mai sab ko batana chahtee hoon

Wahee hai yaad jo acha kaha hai logon ne
Baqi saaray sitam bhool jana chahtee hoon

Mujhe zamanay ne pathar samjh liya hai mager
Mai eik larki hoon sab ko batana chahtee hoon


Jo mujh se rooth chuki hain zamanay ki khushiyaan
To mai bhee un khushiyoon se rooth jana chahteehoon


Koi to ho jo lagaye mujhay seenay se
Kisi ko mai bhee apnay ghum sunana chahtee hoon


Tu apnay dil k her eik dar ko khool day
Mai dard ban ker teray dil mai aana chahtee hoon
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Ek pyaar se bhara dil tha
jiske armaano ko palko par sajaya karti thi……
ek masoom si ladki thi…….
mohabbat ke khwaab dekha karti thi……..

Ek chehra banakar khayalon mein
phir us chehre ko bheed mein dhoonda karti thi….
kaisi paagal ladki thi
ek khayal ko dhunda karti thi……..


Aksar banati ret ke mehal saahilon par
phir un mehalon mein ghar apna basaya karti thi…….
kaisi naadan ladki thi……
saahil ki mitti se ghar banaya karti thi……..

Kai baar dekha use phulon se baatein karte
kuch keh kar unke kaano mein

khud hi sharmaaya karti thi..
kaisi ek ladki thi…
phulon se bhi sharmaaya karti thi…..


Likh kar hatheli par koi naam hamesha
phir us naam ko mitaya karti thi
shayad naasamajh hi thi
dil par likha tha jo,
use haathon se mitaya karti thi………

Jaane kahan kho gayi wo
abto aksar aaine mein dhunda karti hun……
wo ladki jo aaina dekh
bewajaah muskuraya karti thi…..
banakar ajeeb se chehre
sabko hasaya karti thi……..
badi ajeeb ladki thi……..
har kisi ko sataya karti thi……..


Mohabbat ne hi tod diye
uske sab armaan
jinhe wo bade pyaar se
palkon pe sajaya karti thi…….
shayad duniya bhi bhul jaye usse
par waqt na bhula payeega……
ki ek masoom si ladki thi…
khawaabon ke seher mein raha karti thi…
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Thnx for sharing ... Its nice!
You are mooooooost WELCOME !!!
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what a sweet thread Maham

Ajeeb larki hoon khud ko jalana chahtee hoon
Mai khud ko rakh ker kaheen bhool jana chahtee hoon

Mere naseeb ki khushiyaan bhee kab mili mujh ko
Bas ab to umer bher aansoo bhana chahtee hoon

Najanay kitni mohabbat hai ranj-o-ghum se mujhe
Koi bhee dard ho dil mai chupana chahtee hoon

Baha baha k ye aasnoo bikhar chuki hoon bahut
Simat k zaat mai ab muskurana chahtee hoon


Jisay eik umer dil mai chupa k rakha hai
Wo raaz aaj mai sab ko batana chahtee hoon

Wahee hai yaad jo acha kaha hai logon ne
Baqi saaray sitam bhool jana chahtee hoon

Mujhe zamanay ne pathar samjh liya hai mager
Mai eik larki hoon sab ko batana chahtee hoon


Jo mujh se rooth chuki hain zamanay ki khushiyaan
To mai bhee un khushiyoon se rooth jana chahteehoon


Koi to ho jo lagaye mujhay seenay se
Kisi ko mai bhee apnay ghum sunana chahtee hoon


Tu apnay dil k her eik dar ko khool day
Mai dard ban ker teray dil mai aana chahtee hoon
Thnx for you comments LV!
but i wasnt expecting such a depressive poetry from you
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What a lovely sin
All alone at least for now
I wish i could run but I dont know how?

Only once the lies consumed her
Its never ending flames slowly burning
Another time once lost & another tear fell
One more night of pure pained hell

Alone in her room
She wants to run away
This life is too wierd
Its to much for her to take

A simple girl
In a lonley world, nobody notices
But she cries inside
And nobody sees her because she hides
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