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Old 06-04-2008, 11:42 PM
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Brilliant CollectIon mahaam :)
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rastay aisay bhi dushwaar hua kertay hain
saey bhi raah ki deewar hua kertay hain
khali hathon pe na ja unki ankhon ko bhi daikh,
kuch sawali bohat khudaar hua kertay hain
ye zaroori to nahi ankh main ayen aansu
ker dain jo chup aisay bhi azaar hua kertay hain
dekha duniya ko khali ankh say to jana
khwaab k mahal to masmaar hua kertay hain
Faraz kis ko kahoon dost jahan main akhir
Dosti k bhi to mayaar hua kertay hain.....
awesome :)
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Old 12-04-2008, 09:49 PM
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good collection Maham :-)
Thnx for ur appreciation :)
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What a lovely sin
All alone at least for now
I wish i could run but I dont know how?

Only once the lies consumed her
Its never ending flames slowly burning
Another time once lost & another tear fell
One more night of pure pained hell

Alone in her room
She wants to run away
This life is too wierd
Its to much for her to take

A simple girl
In a lonley world, nobody notices
But she cries inside
And nobody sees her because she hides
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Old 12-04-2008, 09:50 PM
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rastay aisay bhi dushwaar hua kertay hain
saey bhi raah ki deewar hua kertay hain
khali hathon pe na ja unki ankhon ko bhi daikh,
kuch sawali bohat khudaar hua kertay hain
ye zaroori to nahi ankh main ayen aansu
ker dain jo chup aisay bhi azaar hua kertay hain
dekha duniya ko khali ankh say to jana
khwaab k mahal to masmaar hua kertay hain
Faraz kis ko kahoon dost jahan main akhir
Dosti k bhi to mayaar hua kertay hain.....
Nice :)
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All alone at least for now
I wish i could run but I dont know how?

Only once the lies consumed her
Its never ending flames slowly burning
Another time once lost & another tear fell
One more night of pure pained hell

Alone in her room
She wants to run away
This life is too wierd
Its to much for her to take

A simple girl
In a lonley world, nobody notices
But she cries inside
And nobody sees her because she hides
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Old 12-04-2008, 09:51 PM
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Brilliant CollectIon mahaam :)
Thnx LV! :)
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All alone at least for now
I wish i could run but I dont know how?

Only once the lies consumed her
Its never ending flames slowly burning
Another time once lost & another tear fell
One more night of pure pained hell

Alone in her room
She wants to run away
This life is too wierd
Its to much for her to take

A simple girl
In a lonley world, nobody notices
But she cries inside
And nobody sees her because she hides
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Old 12-04-2008, 09:52 PM
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Main khayal hon kisi aur ka mujhe sochta koe aur hai.
Sar-e-aaina mera aaks hai pas-e-aaina koe aur hai.

Main kisi ke dast-e-talab mein hon to kisi ke harf-e-dua mein hon.
Main naseeb hon kisi aur ka mujhe mangta koe aur hai.

Ajab itbar aur be-itbar ke darmiyan hai zindgi.
Main qareb hon kisi aur ke mujhe janta koe aur hai.

Tujhe dushmano ki khabar na thi mujhe doston ka pata nahi.
Teri dastan koe aur thi, mera waqia koe aur hai.

wohi munseefon ki revaiyteen wohi faislon ki ebartain.
Mera jurm to koe aur tha ye meri saza koe aur hai.
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All alone at least for now
I wish i could run but I dont know how?

Only once the lies consumed her
Its never ending flames slowly burning
Another time once lost & another tear fell
One more night of pure pained hell

Alone in her room
She wants to run away
This life is too wierd
Its to much for her to take

A simple girl
In a lonley world, nobody notices
But she cries inside
And nobody sees her because she hides
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Old 16-04-2008, 06:19 PM
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Teri Chahat mein hum Zamana bhool gaye...
Teray Baad kisi ko apnana bhool gaye..../

Phir laga sara jahan wirana humko jaisey...
Chaman mein phool mehkana bhool gaye..../

Tumse mohabbat hai bataya saray jahan ko...
Yehi baat tumko batana bhool gaye..../

Humne mita diya hai jahan bhi likha tha tera naam magar...
Apney Dil se hi mitana bhool gaye..../

Wo juda huey humse muskuratey hue magar...
Apni palkon se hum Aanson hatana bhool gaye..../
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Hum ne to uddasi mein
Zindagi guzaari hai
Faaslon se juaay mein
Mein ne shaam haari hai
Aansuon ka aankhon se
Silsila to jaari hai
Aasron ka kaya ho ga
Saaiban bhaari hai
Uss ne aasmano se
Aag bhi utaari hai
Mot bhi zaruri hai
Zindagi bhi piyari hai
Rang bhi bikharey hain
Zulf bhi sanwaari hai
Faaslon se juaay mein
Mein ne shaam haari hai
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What a lovely sin
All alone at least for now
I wish i could run but I dont know how?

Only once the lies consumed her
Its never ending flames slowly burning
Another time once lost & another tear fell
One more night of pure pained hell

Alone in her room
She wants to run away
This life is too wierd
Its to much for her to take

A simple girl
In a lonley world, nobody notices
But she cries inside
And nobody sees her because she hides
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Old 04-05-2008, 10:08 AM
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Hum ne to uddasi mein
Zindagi guzaari hai
Faaslon se juaay mein
Mein ne shaam haari hai
Aansuon ka aankhon se
Silsila to jaari hai
Aasron ka kaya ho ga
Saaiban bhaari hai
Uss ne aasmano se
Aag bhi utaari hai
Mot bhi zaruri hai
Zindagi bhi piyari hai
Rang bhi bikharey hain
Zulf bhi sanwaari hai
Faaslon se juaay mein
Mein ne shaam haari hai
Nice One :)
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Old 12-05-2008, 04:39 AM
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still unable to understand.... i thought this thread is all about collection of poetry.... but after readin it i've come to conclusion..that it is more like collection of compliments than poetry ..

so.... bohot UMDA COLLECTION Maham
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nice collection...
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