[S.K-summi]

"Ankh main jub aansu ho
Dil bhi jab bhar aaye
Un udaas lamhoon main
Ghum ko bhula nay ko
Tum yaad mujh ko ker laina

* * * * * *
Tassawroon ki wadi main
Khushnuma say rungoon main
Ek phool ki kami jab ho
Ah jab nikal jaye
Tum yaad mujh ko kar laina

* * * * * *
Barishoon kay mosum main
Rim jhim barestay sawan main
Thundak ka lamss choh ker jab
Aag si laga day to
Rooh siraab kernay ko
Tum yaad mujh ko ker laina

* * * * * *
Agar tum aisa na chaho to
Ah nikul janay ko
Rooh ki siraabi ko
Bayrang si nigahoon ko
Ek faraeb jan ker
Bus yunhi jhatuk daina
Or yeh bhi na ker sako tum
To is bayyaqeeni ko
Yaqeen main badalnay ko
Raz-e-dil panay ko
Tum yaad mujh ko kar laina
******************

[umair_pak]

Nice poetry

[Im_Sha]

Originally Posted by Sumaira Kousar

"Ankh main jub aansu ho
Dil bhi jab bhar aaye
Un udaas lamhoon main
Ghum ko bhula nay ko
Tum yaad mujh ko ker laina

* * * * * *
Tassawroon ki wadi main
Khushnuma say rungoon main
Ek phool ki kami jab ho
Ah jab nikal jaye
Tum yaad mujh ko kar laina

* * * * * *
Barishoon kay mosum main
Rim jhim barestay sawan main
Thundak ka lamss choh ker jab
Aag si laga day to
Rooh siraab kernay ko
Tum yaad mujh ko ker laina

* * * * * *
Agar tum aisa na chaho to
Ah nikul janay ko
Rooh ki siraabi ko
Bayrang si nigahoon ko
Ek faraeb jan ker
Bus yunhi jhatuk daina
Or yeh bhi na ker sako tum
To is bayyaqeeni ko
Yaqeen main badalnay ko
Raz-e-dil panay ko
Tum yaad mujh ko kar laina
******************

Wah
Zbar10

Bohat Khoob Sumaira......



Agar tum aisa na chaho to
Ah nikul janay ko
Rooh ki siraabi ko
Bayrang si nigahoon ko
Ek faraeb jan ker
Bus yunhi jhatuk daina
Or yeh bhi na ker sako tum
To is bayyaqeeni ko
Yaqeen main badalnay ko
Raz-e-dil panay ko
Tum yaad mujh ko kar laina

Jo Bhi Kaha Behtareen Kaha.......
Best Shareing....................

[t3xPeRt]

wowwwwwwww........ really so beautiful

is it your own sumaira??

oh sorry... 4got to welcum u.......... very very warm welcum to u on this funland........ hopw u'll njoy yr stay wid us :)

[umarqureshi]

QUOTE=Sumaira Kousar;1145084]"Ankh main jub aansu ho
Dil bhi jab bhar aaye
Un udaas lamhoon main
Ghum ko bhula nay ko
Tum yaad mujh ko ker laina

* * * * * *
Tassawroon ki wadi main
Khushnuma say rungoon main
Ek phool ki kami jab ho
Ah jab nikal jaye
Tum yaad mujh ko kar laina

* * * * * *
Barishoon kay mosum main
Rim jhim barestay sawan main
Thundak ka lamss choh ker jab
Aag si laga day to
Rooh siraab kernay ko
Tum yaad mujh ko ker laina

* * * * * *
Agar tum aisa na chaho to
Ah nikul janay ko
Rooh ki siraabi ko
Bayrang si nigahoon ko
Ek faraeb jan ker
Bus yunhi jhatuk daina
Or yeh bhi na ker sako tum
To is bayyaqeeni ko
Yaqeen main badalnay ko
Raz-e-dil panay ko
Tum yaad mujh ko kar laina
******************[/quote]




bahut aala

kamaal

[Faraz]

Nice posting

keep it up