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A SiL3Nt LoV3 !!


From the very Begining, the girl's family objected strongly on her dating this guy. Saying that it has got to do with family background & that the girl will have to suffer for the rest of her life if she were to be with him.
Due to family's pressure, the couple quarrel very often. Though the girl love the guy deeply, but she always ask him: "How deep is your love for me?"
As the guy is not good with his words, this often cause the girl to be very upset. With that & the family's pressure, the girl often vent her anger on him. As for him, he only endure it in silence.
After a couple of years, the guy finally graduated & decided to further his studies in overseas. Before leaving, he proposed to the girl: "I'm not very good with words. But all I know is that I love you. If you allow me, I will take care of you for the rest of my life. As for your family, I'll try my best to talk them round. Will you marry me?"
The girl agreed, & with the guy's determination, the family finally gave in & agreed to let them get married. So before he leave, they got engaged.
The girl went out to the working society, whereas the guy was overseas, continuing his studies. They sent their love through emails & phone calls. Though it's hard, but both never thought of giving up.
One day, while the girl was on her way to work, she was knocked down by a car that lost control. When she woke up, she saw her parents beside her bed. She realised that she was badly injured. Seeing her mum crying, she wanted to comfort her. But she realized that all that could come out of her mouth was just a sigh. She has lost her voice......
The doctors says that the impact on her brain has caused her to lose her voice. Listening to her parents' comfort, but with nothing coming out from her, she broke down.
During the stay in hospital, besides silence cry,.....it's still just silence cry that companied her. Upon reaching home, everything seems to be the same. Except for the ringing tone of the phone. Which pierced into her heart everytime it rang. She does not wish to let the guy know. & not wanting to be a burden to him, she wrote a letter to him saying that she does not wish to wait any longer.
With that, she sent the ring back to him. In return, the guy sent millions & millions of reply, and countless of phonecalls,.. all the girl could do, besides crying, is still crying....
The parents decided to move away, hoping that she could eventually forget everything & be happy.
With a new environment, the girl learn sign language & started a new life. Telling herself everyday that she must forget the guy. One day, her friend came & told her that he's back. She asked her friend not to let him know what happened to her. Since then, there wasn't anymore news of him.
A year has passed & her friend came with an envelope, containing an invitation card for the guy's wedding. The girl was shattered. When she open the letter, she saw her name in it instead.
When she was about to ask her friend what's going on, she saw the guy standing in front of her. He used sign language telling her "I've spent a year's time to learn sign language. Just to let you know that I've not forgotten our promise. Let me have the chance to be your voice. I Love You. With that, he slipped the ring back into her finger. The girl finally smiled.
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oyeeeeeeeeeeeeee mar ditaa oyeeeeee........
oye kina bara zulam kita tusssiii
ini wadiyaa story parh kar khuda di qasmaayyy... dil garden garden hogaya :0)
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bery bery beautiful storyyy... dil nu choo lain wali kahani.. shukriya saday naal share karan da
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Old 31-03-2008, 12:58 AM
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oyeeeeeeeeeeeeee mar ditaa oyeeeeee........
oye kina bara zulam kita tusssiii
ini wadiyaa story parh kar khuda di qasmaayyy... dil garden garden hogaya :0)
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bery bery beautiful storyyy... dil nu choo lain wali kahani.. shukriya saday naal share karan da
thanx anyways ...
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thanks a whole lot buddy !! It was a really good story...
thanks for reading...
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hum dasht-e-junoon k sodai

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the lines I loved most were :
"During the stay in hospital, besides silence cry,.....it's still just silence cry that companied her. Upon reaching home, everything seems to be the same. Except for the ringing tone of the phone. Which pierced into her heart everytime it rang"
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Feel good to read that .....................nice story ..
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aswesome :)

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thanQ all for reading n appreciating....
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the lines I loved most were :
"During the stay in hospital, besides silence cry,.....it's still just silence cry that companied her. Upon reaching home, everything seems to be the same. Except for the ringing tone of the phone. Which pierced into her heart everytime it rang"
sanu kyo das de paye hay??

teray kolo kisi nay pochiya c??.. apay hi chawaliyan mar di paye hay
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sanu kyo das de paye hay??

teray kolo kisi nay pochiya c??.. apay hi chawaliyan mar di paye hay
kaka ji jo uper app ne comments maaray hain... uskay liye mainay apko invite kiya tha yahan... ?
N chawaliyan is not a good word .. plz avoid using it ! Since I dont prefer answering a fool according to his folly ... samajh to app gaye hi nai hongay Qk angrezi main tha
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From the very Begining, the girl's family objected strongly on her dating this guy. Saying that it has got to do with family background & that the girl will have to suffer for the rest of her life if she were to be with him.
Due to family's pressure, the couple quarrel very often. Though the girl love the guy deeply, but she always ask him: "How deep is your love for me?"
As the guy is not good with his words, this often cause the girl to be very upset. With that & the family's pressure, the girl often vent her anger on him. As for him, he only endure it in silence.
After a couple of years, the guy finally graduated & decided to further his studies in overseas. Before leaving, he proposed to the girl: "I'm not very good with words. But all I know is that I love you. If you allow me, I will take care of you for the rest of my life. As for your family, I'll try my best to talk them round. Will you marry me?"
The girl agreed, & with the guy's determination, the family finally gave in & agreed to let them get married. So before he leave, they got engaged.
The girl went out to the working society, whereas the guy was overseas, continuing his studies. They sent their love through emails & phone calls. Though it's hard, but both never thought of giving up.
One day, while the girl was on her way to work, she was knocked down by a car that lost control. When she woke up, she saw her parents beside her bed. She realised that she was badly injured. Seeing her mum crying, she wanted to comfort her. But she realized that all that could come out of her mouth was just a sigh. She has lost her voice......
The doctors says that the impact on her brain has caused her to lose her voice. Listening to her parents' comfort, but with nothing coming out from her, she broke down.
During the stay in hospital, besides silence cry,.....it's still just silence cry that companied her. Upon reaching home, everything seems to be the same. Except for the ringing tone of the phone. Which pierced into her heart everytime it rang. She does not wish to let the guy know. & not wanting to be a burden to him, she wrote a letter to him saying that she does not wish to wait any longer.
With that, she sent the ring back to him. In return, the guy sent millions & millions of reply, and countless of phonecalls,.. all the girl could do, besides crying, is still crying....
The parents decided to move away, hoping that she could eventually forget everything & be happy.
With a new environment, the girl learn sign language & started a new life. Telling herself everyday that she must forget the guy. One day, her friend came & told her that he's back. She asked her friend not to let him know what happened to her. Since then, there wasn't anymore news of him.
A year has passed & her friend came with an envelope, containing an invitation card for the guy's wedding. The girl was shattered. When she open the letter, she saw her name in it instead.
When she was about to ask her friend what's going on, she saw the guy standing in front of her. He used sign language telling her "I've spent a year's time to learn sign language. Just to let you know that I've not forgotten our promise. Let me have the chance to be your voice. I Love You. With that, he slipped the ring back into her finger. The girl finally smiled.
Awww dats shooo lovely :)
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kaka ji jo uper app ne comments maaray hain... uskay liye mainay apko invite kiya tha yahan... ?
N chawaliyan is not a good word .. plz avoid using it ! Since I dont prefer answering a fool according to his folly ... samajh to app gaye hi nai hongay Qk angrezi main tha
ja meray teray BONGAY jiya sawalan da jawab nai denda
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.. par meri galh da jawab tussi nae dita

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aww its really nice to read but dont you think freek its all about a fantasy world, you wont find such passion now a days?we can only find such examples in books or movies. it also makes you emotionally lazy &willing to accept less when a guy comes along &sweeps you off you feet, but then later does bad things... you will stay because you have this unrealistic image of him as a romantic guy just as you seen in movies or read in storybooks!

maybe I'm too cynical, but I don't believe that such love exists in reality!
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aww its really nice to read but dont you think freek its all about a fantasy world, you wont find such passion now a days?we can only find such examples in books or movies. it also makes you emotionally lazy &willing to accept less when a guy comes along &sweeps you off you feet, but then later does bad things... you will stay because you have this unrealistic image of him as a romantic guy just as you seen in movies or read in storybooks!

maybe I'm too cynical, but I don't believe that such love exists in reality!
aaaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnnn maham u broke ma heart saying this... n that word "cynical" ah, reminded me of sumOne...
well, I agree Love is jus an attraction I guess...
n these kinda things hardly occur, not ateast on earth, I have nvr seen such a true Love.. may be these stories are from heavenssssss ohhhhh
but u are absolutely right...
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aaaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnnn maham u broke ma heart saying this... n that word "cynical" ah, reminded me of sumOne...
well, I agree Love is jus an attraction I guess...
n these kinda things hardly occur, not ateast on earth, I have nvr seen such a true Love.. may be these stories are from heavenssssss ohhhhh
but u are absolutely right...
aww i dont wanna break your heart but if i did, i truly apologize :)
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All alone at least for now
I wish i could run but I dont know how?

Only once the lies consumed her
Its never ending flames slowly burning
Another time once lost & another tear fell
One more night of pure pained hell

Alone in her room
She wants to run away
This life is too wierd
Its to much for her to take

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aww i dont wanna break your heart but if i did, i truly apologize :)
awwwwwwwwwwwwww mahammmmmmmmm I was kiddin... that is sho shweet of you... Mmuuaahhhh ... such innocency... aww
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