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30-03-2008, 11:44 AM
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| She was Not Beautiful.. She was not beautiful. Nothing about her was extraordinary. Nothing about her made her stand out in a crowd. She grew up in a family of six and being the eldest, she learned responsibility at an early age. As she grew stronger and brighter, she instilled a sort of light and cheer to whomever she met. She was not beautiful, but she made others feel better about themselves. She meets a rebel boy who thinks he is all man, befriending him, she teaches him. She teaches him how to read and a little boost, the 'man' needed to go to college, they become fast friends and she fell fast in love with her rugged handsome student. The 'man' then finds himself in love with a girl. A girl who was so beautiful. Her hair was a hallow of light around her. Her eyes the bluest blue of the ocean. 'Like an angel' he tells his tutor 'like a beautiful angel.' The girl swallows a lump at her throat. She was not beautiful, she did not posses the heart of the one he loved, but she did not care. As long as he was happy, she would be happy, or so she tried to. She helped write the most beautiful letters to his angel. All the time visioning it was she herself receiving those very letters. And so the girl helped him choose the right clothes, say the right words, and buy the right gifts for his angel. His angel brought him much joy and much pain to the girl who cried behind her smiles. But that never stopped her from giving more than she will ever receive. Then one day, the angel he loved left him for another man. A richer more successful man. The boy was stunned. He was so hurt, he did not speak for days. The girl went to him. He cried on her shoulder and she cried with him. He was hurt and she was too. Time went by and so wounds heal. The boy realizes something about his friend/tutor. Something he never realized before. How her laughter sounded heavenly and how her smiles brightened up the darkest days, or how simply beautiful she looked to him! Beautiful. This plain, simple girl was beautiful to him. And he began to fall. Fall so in love with this beautiful girl. On one day, he picked up all his courage to see her. He walked to her house, nervous, and fidgeting, Running his thoughts over and over his head. He was going to tell her how beautiful she was to him. He was going to tell her how wonderfully in love he was with her. He knocked. No one was home. The next day, he found out that the beautiful girl he fell in love with had a brain tumor that put her into a coma. The doctors were grim and the family decided to let her go. One final time he got to see her. He held her hand. He stroked her hair and he cried for this beautiful girl. He cried, but it was too late. The beautiful girl was buried and the heavens broke. Out a beautiful spring shower, a cry for their loss. She was the most beautiful girl in the world and she had taught the rebel boy-man to love and what it is to be loved. She was the most beautiful girl in the world. Look around. Aren't there a lot of plain faces? Take a good look. A real good look or you might just miss out that beautiful person.
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30-03-2008, 01:43 PM
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| WOW........ufffff........... so beautiful story...... aahhh!! Good Work Aisha!
__________________  ye dasht-e-junoon ye pagalpan ye peecha kerti ruswai ye ranj-o-alam yeh hizn-o-malal ye nala-e-shab yeh soz-e-kamaal Dil main Kahin benaam chubhan aur had-e-nazar tak tanhai hum dasht-e-junoon k sodai |
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30-03-2008, 09:38 PM
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| you are beautiful that is not important, you are important that is beautiful .. Nice story Aisha! :)
__________________ Locked within What a lovely sin All alone at least for now I wish i could run but I dont know how? Only once the lies consumed her Its never ending flames slowly burning Another time once lost & another tear fell One more night of pure pained hell Alone in her room She wants to run away This life is too wierd Its to much for her to take A simple girl In a lonley world, nobody notices But she cries inside And nobody sees her because she hides |
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30-03-2008, 10:02 PM
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| sooooo beautifulllll....... very niceee :)
__________________ Chaahe Jo Tumhen Poore Dil Se Milta Hai Woh Mushkil Se Aesa Jo Koi Kahin Hai Bas Wohi Sab Se Haseen Hai  Us Haath Ko Tum Thaam Lo Woh Mehrbaan Kal Ho Na Ho .... |
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31-03-2008, 09:35 AM
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31-03-2008, 09:36 AM
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Thanks for readin.
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31-03-2008, 09:37 AM
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31-03-2008, 10:28 AM
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| very nice story.
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31-03-2008, 10:50 AM
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| Very Nice |
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20-04-2008, 07:21 AM
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| awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww........ sadooooooooo.. :o) ... nice one Miss kHAN... 
__________________  “Nothing is given to man on earth - struggle is built into the nature of life, and conflict is possible - the hero is the man who lets no obstacle prevent him from pursuing the values he has CHOSEN.” Last edited by Neo; 26-04-2008 at 11:21 AM.. |
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26-04-2008, 07:33 AM
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| Very nice... i like it.. thnkoo for sharIng.. |
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29-06-2008, 06:16 PM
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| one of the most beautiful stories I ever read...simply marvelous n full of feelings...
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30-06-2008, 04:37 AM
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| wicked .. this means ugly twats like me have a chance after all .. ppl look around .. notice me ... let me warn u tho ... u probably wont like what u see so dont scream :D
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01-07-2008, 02:11 AM
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__________________ Locked within What a lovely sin All alone at least for now I wish i could run but I dont know how? Only once the lies consumed her Its never ending flames slowly burning Another time once lost & another tear fell One more night of pure pained hell Alone in her room She wants to run away This life is too wierd Its to much for her to take A simple girl In a lonley world, nobody notices But she cries inside And nobody sees her because she hides |
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01-07-2008, 07:01 AM
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| Beautiful..........
__________________  Bari asani se dil lagaye jate hein, par bari mushkil se wade nibhaye jate hein, le jati hai mohabbat un rahun par, jahan diye nahi, dil jalaye jate hein!! |
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02-07-2008, 06:11 PM
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| beauity zahiri nahiin hoti beauity aapke ander hoti hai,aapki baaton mein aapke ikhlakh mein and aapki soft nature mein, this iz beauity... Regards:mishaal |
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03-07-2008, 01:40 AM
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| nice dsharing Aisha khan
__________________ Nahi h woh Shakhs Muqadar main Phir bhi Us Se Miltey Hain...... Bara Pur Lutf Lagta Hai Muqadar Ko Saza Daina......,, |
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