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a love story(bhalay dino ki baat hai )
 
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Old 21-11-2004, 01:06 AM
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038 a love story(bhalay dino ki baat hai )

(mein)
bhalay dino ki baat hai
bhali si eik shakl thi
na yeh ke husn taam ho
na dekhnay mein aam si

na yeh ke wo chalay to
kehkashan si rahguzer lagay
magar woh saath ho to phir
bhala bhala safar lagay

koi bhi rut ho uss ki chab
fiza ka rung-o roop thi
woh germiyon ki chaaon thi
woh serdiyon ki dhoop thi

na muddaton juda rahay
na saath subh-o shaam ho
na rishta-e wafa pe zid
na yeh ke izn aam ho

na aisi khush-libasiyaan
ke sadgi gila keray
na itni be-takulafi
ke aaina haya keray

na ikhtilat mein woh rum
ke badmaza hon khuwahishein
na is qader supurdigi
ke zich kerein nawazishein

na ashiqui junnon ki woh
ke zindagi azab ho
na iss qader kathor-pun
ke dosti kharab ho

suna hai eik umer hai
mamlaat-e dil ki bhi
visaal-e jaan-fiza to kiya
firaq-e jaan-gisil ki bhi

so eik roz kiya hoa
wafa pe behes chir gai
mein ishq ko amar kahoon
woh meri zid se chir gai

mein ishq ka aseer tha
woh ishq ko qafas kahay
ke umer bher ke saath ko
woh bud-teraz havis kahay

(woh)
shajar hujar nahin ke hum
hamesha pa-ba gil rahein
na dhor hein ke rassiyan
galay mein mustaqil rahein

mein koi painting nahin
jo eik frame mein rahoon
wohi jo mann ka meet ho
ussi ke prem mein rahoon

muhabaton ki wusaten
hamaray dast-o paa mein hein
bus eik derr se nisbatein
sigan-e bawafa mein hein

tumhari soch jo bhi ho
mein iss mizaj ki nahin
mujhay wafa se bair hai
yeh baat aaj ki nahin

(mein)
na mujh ko uss pe maan tha
na us ko mujh pe zom hi
jo ehd hi koi na ho
to kiya gham-e shikastagi

so apna apna rasta
hansi khushi badal diya
woh apni raah chal pari
mein apni raah chal diya

bhali si eik shakal thi
bhali si uss ki dosti
ab uss ki yaad raat din ......
nahin magar kabhi kabhi .
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Old 21-11-2004, 06:43 PM
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smart_dashing ....achi lagi aap ko love story ?? thanx for appreciating ...or yeh pic ??? aap ko kiya lagta hai kiss ki hogi ??? waisay aap ke elawa or bhi log ho saktay hein samrt n dashing ..hai na???
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Old 22-11-2004, 04:13 AM
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smart_dashing ....achi lagi aap ko love story ?? thanx for appreciating ...or yeh pic ??? aap ko kiya lagta hai kiss ki hogi ??? waisay aap ke elawa or bhi log ho saktay hein samrt n dashing ..hai na???
haan ho saktey hain smart dashing..mager i am the only one ager yaqin na ayy tu kisi sey bhi poch lo forum main
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Old 22-11-2004, 07:00 AM
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no doubt dost mujhay yaqeen hai ...
aap zaroor sach keh rahay hein ...kisi se poochnay ki kiya zaroorat hai
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no doubt dost mujhay yaqeen hai ...
aap zaroor sach keh rahay hein ...kisi se poochnay ki kiya zaroorat hai
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Old 22-11-2004, 10:25 PM
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by the way mein hi keh dathi hoon kay tum dona bohath smart hain. (not )
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Old 23-11-2004, 06:03 AM
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by the way mein hi keh dathi hoon kay tum dona bohath smart hain. (not )

aap ku in dono ko galat femahi mein dal rehi hain
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hi cindrella and hi lil-dil-jaan....dear mein koi ghalat fehmi ka shikaar nahin honga ..kiyon ke mein jaisa hoon waisa hoon , or woh khubsoorti kiya jo umer ke saath khatam ho jaaye ...khubsurti to woh jo umer ke saath or nikher jaaye ..aur aisi khubsurti insaan ke ander ..uss ke dil mein uss ki rooh mein hoti hai ....zaheri khubsurti ke baray mein mein bilkul bhi concious nahin hoon ..woh to mein aisay hi smart n dashing ko tung ker raha tha ...hey dashing buddy ...dont mind it ..i know u r not only dashing by looks only
anyways ...waisay cindrella and lil-dil-jaan ...iss baat se behter hai ke aap log meri poem ki choice pe daad dein ..kiyoon theek kaha na
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hi cindrella and hi lil-dil-jaan....dear mein koi ghalat fehmi ka shikaar nahin honga ..kiyon ke mein jaisa hoon waisa hoon , or woh khubsoorti kiya jo umer ke saath khatam ho jaaye ...khubsurti to woh jo umer ke saath or nikher jaaye ..aur aisi khubsurti insaan ke ander ..uss ke dil mein uss ki rooh mein hoti hai ....zaheri khubsurti ke baray mein mein bilkul bhi concious nahin hoon ..woh to mein aisay hi smart n dashing ko tung ker raha tha ...hey dashing buddy ...dont mind it ..i know u r not only dashing by looks only
anyways ...waisay cindrella and lil-dil-jaan ...iss baat se behter hai ke aap log meri poem ki choice pe daad dein ..kiyoon theek kaha na
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by the way mein hi keh dathi hoon kay tum dona bohath smart hain. (not )
shukriya..her lerki yahi kahtii haiii
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aap ku in dono ko galat femahi mein dal rehi hain
app ainhein sach bolney sey kiyon rook rahin hain
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...hey dashing buddy ...dont mind it ..i know u r not only dashing by looks only
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shukriya..her lerki yahi kahtii haiii
her larki?????? uufff !!!!!!
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her larki?????? uufff !!!!!!
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app ainhein sach bolney sey kiyon rook rahin hain
sach......kesa sach...bala mein ku kisi ko rokon gi scah bolney sey dude........ aur especialy wo sach jo aap k barey mein bola ja raha ho
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sach......kesa sach...bala mein ku kisi ko rokon gi scah bolney sey dude........ aur especialy wo sach jo aap k barey mein bola ja raha ho
sach tu ya haii key casanova meri kitni izzat kerta haii. hoonhi itna acha
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sach tu ya haii key casanova meri kitni izzat kerta haii. hoonhi itna acha
hmmmmm..acha je....chalyein ye to bohat achi baat hai
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like ur poem very much.....its very touchy......u have very good taste.....

I hope u will carry on contributing more and more....
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