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Originally Posted by Neo

my first try :$

zindagi ka yeh safar chalte chalte
kiyo achanak ruk sa gaya
Suno...
muje yeh Aitbar karna nahi ata...:)

chalo us jahan mai jahan
na tum ho khafa..na karoo mai jafa
suno...
muje ab Intazar karna bhi nahi ata..:)

kabhi dil ke hatho tou kabhi
halat ke hatho majboor tha
tumne yeh kabhi nahi jana
ab to muje bhi samjhana nahi ata...:)


mai hoo aaj jahan..kal na hoo
shayed wahan ..tum ho aaj jahan
Suno...
muje yeh Waqt rokna keu nahi ata..


na mil sakoo shayed tumhe phir
Suno...
muje to AVLIDA kehna bhi nahi ata ..:)

very Nice. app ki is shairy per ik choti c nazm..
mazrat k sath.. :)

Suno!


Tum Azm waley ho
Bala ka zabt rekhtey ho
Tumhy koch bhee nahi ho ga


Magar daikho !


Jisey tum chor jatey ho
oosey to theek sey syayed
Bicherna bhi nahi ata,

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buhat khob Omer.. app ki frst try buhat achi hai..
PLease likhhtay rahiye ga.. :)